Old vs. new headline - I need tips!!!
It might have to do with the headline and another few issues within the sales copy.
I want to start with re-writing the headline, but I am not very good at "being right in your face and being bold".
Could you guys just have a look at my old headline, and then at what i might make it and let me know what you think, and possibly come up with other (better) ideas"
Here is the old headline (still in use):
Discover how to put an end to your frustration and confusion, get focused and start making money from other peoples products!
I know, bad! Here is the possible new one:
Kiss Good Bye to your frustration and confusion and discover how easy it is to focus and cash in big with your own affiliate niche blog - laughing!
Or what about this one:
Kiss Good Bye to your frustration and confusion, get your life back and cash in big with your own affiliate niche blog - laughing!
I really need help with this. I put a lot of effort into this book and would like to see it helping others, but if my sales copy sucks I am stuck!
Click Here To Download 14 (Odd)
Copywriting Hacks...
*Breakthrough Marketing Blog (+ goodies) *
CopyWriting Services
Ragnar.
Quality over quantity. Hire me to write highly shareable, user focused blog posts or articles.