help with lead please.
I am working on a fitness program letter.
I was wondering if, you all wouldn't mind taking a look at the sales letter lead. I am not very far into the letter as I am not 100% sold on this lead in.
My Name is Jonathan Webb, the First thing you should know about me is.... I am not a doctor. I am not an expert on nutrition ether, I never went to college and I don't have a degree in anything.( although I am a certified personal trainer) in fact the reason you're reading this isn't because I am the greatest fitness goo-roo since Billy Blanks and Tae Bo hit the scene, its because I have found the secret to developing the body you always wanted. No matter what your FItness Goal is. But before I tell you what that secret is I want tell you the story about how I discovered this amazing secret.... |
thank you,
Jon.
Roll Out "The Cannon"
Andrew Gould
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