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Please review my sales page

by Ghalt
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I have recently taken my Wii Fit guide that sells well on Kindle, and released it through ClickBank.

I want to make sure I have a page that converts well for my affiliates.

Wii Fit Guide

(the above is an affiliate link, but it's my product, if that makes sense)

People are buying it from Kindle with zero 'sales pitch', so my gut tells me that qualified traffic to this site will buy.

But I'm not a pitch page expert.

Thank you!
#page #review #sales
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    I am looking for a detailed critique/review.
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  • Profile picture of the author RentItNow
    Just a few comments. Is it information that they give with the wii or I can find easily with a search on google? If not, highlight this fact!

    Guarantee needs a medalion icon.

    I like the graphics but you may use red/orange as a highlight color (compliment to blue/green) for call to action section.
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    I have no agenda but to help those in the same situation. This I feel will pay the bills.
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    • Profile picture of the author KrisMainieri
      Originally Posted by RentItNow View Post

      Just a few comments. Is it information that they give with the wii or I can find easily with a search on google? If not, highlight this fact!

      Guarantee needs a medalion icon.

      I like the graphics but you may use red/orange as a highlight color (compliment to blue/green) for call to action section.
      A medallion on your guarantee is the least of your worries.

      The headline is weak.

      Why is the copy COLUMNED next to a image? Hard to read.

      Stop asuming you know your reader and why they are there.

      Focus on benefits and start stacking value.

      Who are you? why should they listen to you? how do they know it works?

      PROOF? has it worked for anyone else?

      John Carlton has a good copywriting course so does Yanik.

      Copy needs work before affiliates are willing to promote.

      My 2cents

      KM
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  • Profile picture of the author Project-Octagon
    Yes, very good price if you are direct selling it youurself but it looks good enough to raise it more for affiliate recruitment. I know RJ from the Rich Jerk project went from $97, to $47, to your price but by then he had all the traffic in the world.
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