critique my first sales page please!
over the past week i've been taking in a lot of info and created my first sales page for my first product. It is in the dating niche and it teaches men how to pick up women.
My goal is to have it convert at 1% for now and then tweak it accordingly.
Is 1% conversion possible with my current letter?
Can you guys please rip it up as hard as you can and give me any suggestions to improve it. (ignore the stuff at the bottom only read up to the p.s')
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Thanks for your help
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