Destroy my landing page
Why gay dating? Because my website gets around 10.000 visits a month of traffic since the name is the .tv version of a tv.com famous gay website.
I'm not experienced in copy-writing and I had to do it in the spare-time.
So please destroy the landing page and help me to improve my skills!
Thank you very much in advance to everyone will reply.
Boyfriend.tv
P.s. as you will see there are no explicit images in the page or in the book.
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