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I wrote an awesome report last year and finished it this year. The report is great, the sales page is not--it stinks. I welcome any all comments and critiques if you have a minute.
Thank you very much!
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Looking for easy stress relief? Sick of migraines, muscle tension, backaches, and stomach aches? Scared of strokes, cancer, and heart attacks? Do You Just Want to Feel Better Without Meds? Trying to break your old habits of worry and overeating without drugs? Need a way to boost your motivation RIGHT NOW? Then listen up, because I'm about to show you...
Dear Friend,
Now that I have your attention, let me tell you what all of the health "gurus" are claiming these days-and why they're all wrong. You see, the "gurus" of Online Health Websites want you to believe that you have to invest hundreds or thousands of dollars in their products in order to have the knowledge you need for coping with stress. They want you to think that there's great hidden secrets that only they have, and the only way for you to get a hold of them is to break out your credit card and start spending loads of cash.
The truth is, there is a hidden secret. The secret is that these guys are scamming people, and nobody seems to know it! Let me ask you a simple question. Think hard about this question, and apply the common-sense, logical answer against everything you've ever been told by the "gurus." The question is... Which item do you buy without thinking about the expense: a McDonald's lunch for one person or a new computer? Two magazines at the news rack or a new refrigerator? A few gallons of gas, or a plane ticket?
The answer should be obvious. Most people don't sweat buying something that only costs a few dollars. They just buy it, use it, and throw it away when they're done. No big deal. Hundreds of millions, if not billions, of people buy items like this every day. Do you know who the #1 wealthiest company was in the USA in 2008? Exxon Mobil. What does Exxon sell? Gasoline. How do they sell it? One gallon at a time. Do you know who the second wealthiest company was in the USA in 2008? Wal-Mart. What does Wal-Mart sell? Mostly cheap little items.
If you're serious about your health in 2009, you will get this report, right now and read the report today. Can you guess what it will cost you to get this incredible health saving information, information that can quite literally improve the quality of your life?
Why $10?
Actually, the marketing experts tell me it's worth at least $17. I'm only charging $10 for this report for 3 reasons.
1. $10 puts the report within reach of the vast majority of people. It's not too expensive for even the humblest beginning online seeker of stress reduction.
2. Anyone who's not serious enough about their health in 2009 to invest $10 into this report isn't going to take the time to use the methods laid out in the report anyway.
3. Anyone who is serious enough to put down the price of a fast food dinner and buy this report has the opportunity to create better health and a better life through effective stress relief.
If you're thinking, "$10 is so cheap! What's the catch?", Easy-7 Secrets for $10, or one buck 40 cents per secret. It's not rocket science. You really need to read this report! I really want you to read this report! The advice within it gives you tools for health you seriously need to think about using.
So if you're serious about your health and coping with stress in 2009, and if you would like to start feeling better NOW by following 7 Easy Steps to Reduce Your Stress Instantly for only $10, click the "Buy Now" button below. If you need to justify the expense, skip going to McDonald's for dinner once this week and it's paid for!
PS. Seriously, for just $10, I'll teach you 7 Easy Steps to Reduce Your Stress Instantly! Do you know that you can do something now to help yourself? Why would you pass on that? *click here for your copy.*
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Thank you very much!
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Looking for easy stress relief? Sick of migraines, muscle tension, backaches, and stomach aches? Scared of strokes, cancer, and heart attacks? Do You Just Want to Feel Better Without Meds? Trying to break your old habits of worry and overeating without drugs? Need a way to boost your motivation RIGHT NOW? Then listen up, because I'm about to show you...
7 Easy Steps to Reduce Your Stress Instantly!
Doctors are now saying that up to 80% of patients' ailments are stress- related. The World Health Organization lists Stress as the #1 illness of all times. 8 out of 10 Americans have a major source of stress in their lives.Stress is known as the silent killer. Don't become another victim of the stress epidemic... "Finally! A simple, drug-free way to reduce stress and start truly enjoying your life"
STRESS, it's everywhere, it's overwhelming, it's unending. Heck, just turn on the evening news or look at the daily press. Natural disasters, global warming, disease, poverty, international tensions--the list goes on and on. The war, the recession, unemployment, foreclosures, the rising cost of health care, food prices...You'd be hard pressed to find anyone who is not affected to some extent by one or more of the above life stressors!
REVEALED...YOU DON'T HAVE TO SPEND THOUSANDS ON THERAPY OR TAKE MOOD ALTERING DRUGS FOR EFFECTIVE STRESS REDUCTION...IF YOU CAN READ THIS SMALL REPORT, YOU WILL LEARN FROM A NURSE WHO HAS SEEN AND HEARD IT ALL OVER A 20 YEAR CAREER, THAT YOU CAN REDUCE YOUR STRESS INSTANTLY AND PERMANENTLY AND IMPROVE YOUR LIFE!
"Your Mind Will Stop Racing And Your Neck Will Stop Aching-The Burden Of Stress That You Carry Will Be Lifted As You Learn To Enjoy Life Again-without meds!"Dear Friend,
The truth is, there is a hidden secret. The secret is that these guys are scamming people, and nobody seems to know it! Let me ask you a simple question. Think hard about this question, and apply the common-sense, logical answer against everything you've ever been told by the "gurus." The question is... Which item do you buy without thinking about the expense: a McDonald's lunch for one person or a new computer? Two magazines at the news rack or a new refrigerator? A few gallons of gas, or a plane ticket?
The answer should be obvious. Most people don't sweat buying something that only costs a few dollars. They just buy it, use it, and throw it away when they're done. No big deal. Hundreds of millions, if not billions, of people buy items like this every day. Do you know who the #1 wealthiest company was in the USA in 2008? Exxon Mobil. What does Exxon sell? Gasoline. How do they sell it? One gallon at a time. Do you know who the second wealthiest company was in the USA in 2008? Wal-Mart. What does Wal-Mart sell? Mostly cheap little items.
If you're serious about your health in 2009, you will get this report, right now and read the report today. Can you guess what it will cost you to get this incredible health saving information, information that can quite literally improve the quality of your life?
$10.
Yes, for the price of a fast food dinner you will have all of the information you need to jump full force into the realm of 7 Easy Steps to Reduce Your Stress Instantly! Why $10?
Actually, the marketing experts tell me it's worth at least $17. I'm only charging $10 for this report for 3 reasons.
1. $10 puts the report within reach of the vast majority of people. It's not too expensive for even the humblest beginning online seeker of stress reduction.
2. Anyone who's not serious enough about their health in 2009 to invest $10 into this report isn't going to take the time to use the methods laid out in the report anyway.
3. Anyone who is serious enough to put down the price of a fast food dinner and buy this report has the opportunity to create better health and a better life through effective stress relief.
If you're thinking, "$10 is so cheap! What's the catch?", Easy-7 Secrets for $10, or one buck 40 cents per secret. It's not rocket science. You really need to read this report! I really want you to read this report! The advice within it gives you tools for health you seriously need to think about using.
So if you're serious about your health and coping with stress in 2009, and if you would like to start feeling better NOW by following 7 Easy Steps to Reduce Your Stress Instantly for only $10, click the "Buy Now" button below. If you need to justify the expense, skip going to McDonald's for dinner once this week and it's paid for!
*click here to buy button goes here*
PS. Seriously, for just $10, I'll teach you 7 Easy Steps to Reduce Your Stress Instantly! Do you know that you can do something now to help yourself? Why would you pass on that? *click here for your copy.*
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