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Is this written correctly?

Connections for donation items, or to the Arts, Entertainment, and Athletic Industries?

It is preceded by"Perhaps you have a skill, interest, or talent we can benefit from?
#grammar
  • Profile picture of the author JohnRussell
    I don't know really.

    But I know it's written poorly. It's hard to read.

    Why not something like...

    Maybe you have a skill, interest or talent we can benefit from.

    Perhaps a personal connection to people who can provide donations - or to those in the Entertainment or Athletic industries.
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  • Profile picture of the author laurencewins
    I would like to see more of the paragraph before commenting.
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    Cheers, Laurence.
    Writer/Editor/Proofreader.

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