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KICKASS sales copy and squeeze page?? [please review this!]

by jasonthewebmaster Banned
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getting ready to launch a wso soon, would you review my sales page? Warrior Forms | Form Builder For Online Marketing

as a thanks you can also grab a free review copy here:

Get Your Secret Review Copy of WarriorForms Now!

please, let me know what you think? looking for feedback on the copy, design, product etc.
#copy #kickass #page #review #sales #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author Cam Connor
    Originally Posted by jasonthewebmaster View Post

    getting ready to launch a wso soon, would you review my sales page? Warrior Forms | Form Builder For Online Marketing

    as a thanks you can also grab a free review copy here:

    Get Your Secret Review Copy of WarriorForms Now!

    please, let me know what you think? looking for feedback on the copy, design, product etc.
    Warrior Forms... terribly clever. Really, I like it.
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  • Profile picture of the author TracyBelshee
    Originally Posted by jasonthewebmaster View Post

    getting ready to launch a wso soon, would you review my sales page? Warrior Forms | Form Builder For Online Marketing

    as a thanks you can also grab a free review copy here:

    Get Your Secret Review Copy of WarriorForms Now!

    please, let me know what you think? looking for feedback on the copy, design, product etc.
    Hi, I've not used these sorts of forms much but have been looking into them recently and personally the setup looks pretty easy to use.

    There were a few times in the video I fell a bit behind trying to figure out what you were doing, but quickly figured it out. My falling behind was probably due to lack of experience using these things before and not quite sure what I was seeing.

    At any rate, my main reason for posting was to let you know in case you don't already, the video appears to freeze at the 9:37 mark for me. The counter continues, but the screen doesn't change.

    Also, the music stops about halfway through and then it's dead silence for me. Not sure if it's my computer, a mistake, or intentional. Just thought I'd let you know.

    Good luck.
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  • Profile picture of the author BrianMcLeod
    Jason,

    I'm familiar with the underlying product code base and yours is a BIG improvement. But only because I am already familiar can I draw that conclusion.

    The demo video is dreadful. No voiceover, no pitch... just feature, function, feature, function to the soundtrack of grating midi "music".

    And THAT is your deck.... NOT GOOD.

    You've got a strong product that's undersold by a weak sales letter here.
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    • Profile picture of the author StarkContrast
      From an end user perspective, I'm not sure exactly what the product is and why I need it.
      • How and where can I use it?
      • How can it help me?
      • Is it for a web site you can plug the form into?
      • Is it to be used as a standalone form? If so, how can people see it?
      There was no "hook" that I could see, nothing really to grab my attention.

      I would have liked to have heard someone walk me through different parts of the software. The flute music (while pleasant enough) and clicking around doesn't cut it for me. I saw a lot of clicking and pulling and dragging but not sure where it was going or ultimately how it could help me. It was building a form, yes, but as an end user I have a very low tolerance for video only with a few subtitles. A voice over would have gone a long way.

      Tell me what it does, what it can do, and how it can help me.
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  • Profile picture of the author Jason Kanigan
    AAAAAAA! My Eyes


    Too jumbled, no central idea, bad color scheme (no color coordination).

    Yes, change that music.

    Your video is a walkthrough of the sales page and then using the product. Think about it from the point of view of the visitor: WHY would I want to sit through this?

    WHY would someone want this product? So it makes forms, so what? What can I DO with those forms? How is it going to make my life easier? How is it going to help me make more sales, have better interaction with my prospects and clients, get better information from them? Don't expect people to figure it out just by watching (which they won't as it is right now). Spoon-feed them.

    What's surprising about this product? You need a hook, and you don't have one.
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  • Profile picture of the author drewfioravanti
    What's the difference between this product and wufoo? Because this looks like the same exact product.
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