suggestions, thoughts
The two important points that need to be conveyed are that it is an appliance showroom and that it is open to everyone (it is not restricted to those in the trade).
Right now it is simply "Appliance Showroom
Open to the Public"
This might be effective, but is there a more inviting way to word it?
Character length is not rigid, but keeping it close to 33 would be ideal.
Thanks all in advance
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