first page critique

It seems to work really well for me.

It looks really good as well.

I didn't read through it, but just glanced at whatever got my attention (in a good or bad way), and I personally would change something here:

(quote)

IMPORTANT:

This May Change Your Dating Life Forever...

(End Quote)

You might want to consider changing the colors up on one of these. Keep one red and other black or vice versa, just to make it stand out even more.

Looks great otherwise John, good job!

Konrad

PS: - just now noticed... the proper name in the <title> tag is also missing

1st: Attention: All Males!

Not very attention grabbing... too small, maybe diffrent color? Also... Is your audience "All Males", or "All Aspiring Pimps & Playaz", or maybe "All Guys Who Are Dying to Be Better At Attracting the Hotties You thought We're 'Off Limits'"

2nd: "Discover How You Can Approach Any Woman And Know Exactly How To Create An Uncontrollable Physical Attraction In Her Despite Your Age, Looks And Income"

Too General - Not Addressing Emotional Need of Men...

"Now You Can Confidently Approach Any Woman And Create an Instant 'Animal' Attraction In Her Despite How Fat, Ugly, Broke, and Stupid You Are!"

Just an example, of course, but you get the point...

3rd: Can you help me help you by taking a moment to honestly answer the questions below...

No he doesn't care about "helping you" - rather phrase it - Dear Friend, Take a moment and help yourself out by answering these questions"

Hope this helps as a start...

Hi Vanquish

I just looked at your website in Firefox. There are some blank lines in between your graphics on your salepage.

You can use this nifty tool to check your html page in the various browsers :
Check Browser Compatibility, Cross Platform Browser Test - Browsershots

Hi Vanquish,

Just had a quick look through your site and noticed a few typos and grammatical errors. Just small things like 'their' instead of 'there' and 'could of' instead of 'could have'. Also there were a couple of sentances where, if read aloud, it just didn't make sense.

When I've finished a piece of writing I always read it slowly and aloud to see if it sounds good - it's easier to spot anything that doesn't sound right. Another way is to ask someone else to proofread it for you.

I hope you don't mind me pointing this out. Just trying to help.

Regards

Karen

Attention who? Sorry you lost me right there... I ain't a male but what a generalized statement... who wants to be one of "males"?

Hi,

I'm not sure on the market for this type of product, but I would have thought a play on the emotion side (sole mate type thing, rather than the hottie (is that even a word) type approach).

I get white lines at the top, between the header and the main page and the footer and the main page. Suspect cellspacing on the table perhaps.

I'm not sure saying "hot women" really works. Maybe for your niche... not sure.

Saying "settling for women of low quality", they're not like cheap shirts of something. Aren't all people equal in quality.

I would change the style into something that deals with the emotional issues of men being confident in approaching a woman (hot or otherwise) and how you can help them over come their fears, anxieties, hang-ups, problems etc etc.

Hi,

Just had a quick glance at your HTML, it's not cellspacing/padding. I think it's because you've put your images inside a <p>, I suspect there is a margin default for this tag, which is creating the white space at the top and bottom of your header/footer images.

Cheers, Lee.