2nd Attempt at a sales copy, give me your best shot!
My name is Igor and I am from Israel.
I have just finished my second Draft(first one was total failure)
and now, I would love to get some advice.
But before you rip it apart, please make sure
to provide "specific" guidelines. Please try not to
generalize, it is confusing.
Here's the letter. It is a .pdf since I am yet to set up
a page.
http://igorhelpsyousucceed.com/Mastermind_Letter_2
Thank You in Advance,
Igor
P.S: I am wearing my thickest skin, so do not be gentle
Gil-Ad Schwartz