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    Highlights of the Copywriting Section for Warrior members STICKY

    Resources for new Copywriters Top Copywriting Books Ever Storytelling Resources for Copywriters and Marketers The Biggest, Most Bad-Ass List of Awesome Marketing Lists If you want to hire copywriters... Directory ... [read more]

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    What's the skinny on using forum posts in sales copy?

    tun80 in Copy Writing

    Just wondering how far you can take this. Because it's in the public domain, do you have to give full details on where the post comes from? (besides credibility reasons.) ... [read more]

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    Rip My Copy To Shreds

    Daniel Rickfold in Copy Writing

    Ok, I'm quite emotional Antipot's Amazing Minisites What do you think of my salesletter? I'm also curious what do you think about the story, if it's goes with the sales ... [read more]

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    Where are you?

    Rezbi in Copy Writing

    One thing that's surprised me recently is the numbers of fantastic upcoming copywriters... in the UK. There's quite a few on the WF who I didn't even realise were from ... [read more]

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    squeeze page and sales page - use different headlines?

    ikuret75 in Copy Writing

    Hi, in general, is it better to use a different headline in a sales letter than in a squeeze page? If a lot of people who see the sales latter ... [read more]

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    Anyone know where I can buy David Garfinkel products?

    JasonParker in Copy Writing

    Funny... I've been looking for days for something to buy from David Garfinkel. I listen to some of his free stuff and he explains things in a way that really ... [read more]

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    Copy Critique Request: Seduction Product (Inner Game, Hypnosis Audio)

    mph in Copy Writing

    I have requested price quotes a while ago on this forum. I have managed to find someone who wrote this letter at a very decent price. Here is the draft ... [read more]

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    Darth Vader was Gay

    The Copy Nazi in Copy Writing think I can get away with that head? Yeah...I know - it's a pure "curiosity" headline. I think it a beauty. But maybe I'm losing my grip. Its for ... [read more]

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    I think I need a copywriter.. do I?

    ttrance in Copy Writing

    Hey all! I come from a background in IT, computer related stuff. So now I've been moving over to web design/SEO work it seems and I'm slowly getting a few ... [read more]

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    Preston Ely/Than Merrill Sales Page

    Not a pretty page, not a pretty video, but it uses some techniques I've been considering using on video sales pages. 20 minute video. List of the "stuff" you get ... [read more]

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    Critique My Sales Copy Please - Thanks So Much For Your Time

    Derek_Thomas in Copy Writing

    *** EDIT *** I have taken a few of everyone's suggestions, and created another draft of my copy. Some things such as the guarantee and the pics of the WF ... [read more]

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    You call yourself a copywriter? Then try harder...I 'aint buying.

    Nick Brighton in Copy Writing

    You know, I'm on a lot of lists. I'm a marketing voyeur, and it's how I learn a lot for my own niche businesses. However, it's also where I see ... [read more]

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    Quick Help - Which Headline Is Better

    Chad Kettner in Copy Writing

    I'm in a bit of a dispute with a client... #1 ------ An exclusive discussion group where you will hear about... Powerful Strategies To Reach Your Full Potential & Generate ... [read more]

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    Using Time Presuppositions - good or bad?

    Calamaroo in Copy Writing

    What I mean by time presuppositions is that you write your copy in such a way that puts the prospect in a time when he has ALREADY bought what you're ... [read more]

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    Need critique of my stock pick site

    searchnology in Copy Writing

    I launched a stock pick site a few months back but the conversion rates have been horrible. The site is The product (email newsletter) is the best out there ... [read more]

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    What do you call this market segment?

    Justinfm in Copy Writing

    The main market segment I focus on is very small businesses. Generally these are 1-2 person operations. Almost all are service based businesses. You have a mix of home based ... [read more]

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    Outsourced B2B Case Studies - Who provides information & research?

    saleswriter101 in Copy Writing

    Hiho Warriors, I'm seeking to do B2B freelance writing. When a Case Study is outsourced to a freelancer does the client provide all the information and research? What is the ... [read more]

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    Selling swipe files ...

    Big Al in Copy Writing

    There are lots of people selling swipe files from famous copywriters. I was just wondering if there are any infringements there since it's other peoples work? Although I appreciate that ... [read more]

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    Copywriting at No Charge - THIS Time :)

    MisterWolf in Copy Writing

    My first freelance writing project happened by accident - I had a dream and I went to 'Rent a Ghost Writer'. My bid won a project to write a concept ... [read more]

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    Copywriter for a forex copy needed!

    warrior_money in Copy Writing

    Hi, I need a copywriter for my next forex launch. Not robot, it's a course! If you have experience in writing in the niche, please email or PM me right ... [read more]

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    one product, several different sales letters?

    ikuret75 in Copy Writing

    Hi, If your product is applicable for many "targets", is it better to make a copy for each target? For example, if your product is how to improve your memory ... [read more]

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    Anyone able write high-converting product reviews?

    mbomb in Copy Writing

    My regular writer is a bit buried in work these days, so I need to find someone else who I can work with on a regular basis. I'm looking for ... [read more]

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    Swipe File Extravaganza! Help...

    bencarroll02 in Copy Writing

    Hello Copywriters! I am trying to find some quality swipe files from the best of the best... A few questions come to mind. -If there are swipe files to purchase ... [read more]

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    Has anyone tested this...

    dtendrich in Copy Writing

    Hey, Has anyone tested using bolded sub-heads vs. just plain text in a DM letter that appears like a personal letter?

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    Please Critique: First Launch in Ex Back Niche

    Roshan C in Copy Writing

    Thanks a lot for the advice, I'll improve. Cheers!

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    Would anyone mind critiquing my sales page!

    Paul Clifford in Copy Writing

    Dear all This is my first attempt at writing any copy. I have read quite a lot from this section of the forum and absorbed (I think) many of your ... [read more]

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    Newbie Squeeze Page Critique

    dwood40 in Copy Writing

    Any constructive criticism of my squeeze page at would be greatly appreciated as this is my first effort. Thanks in advance.

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    What kind of writer do I need?

    higakun in Copy Writing

    I am having a hard time getting conversions with my ppc campaign. My product is an online game and I am not sure how to go about getting people to ... [read more]

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    Is this a good Sales Page?

    lennoxtran in Copy Writing

    Hi, I'm getting ready to launch my ebook. This is the Sales Page that I've come up with along with testimonials. I can't post a link yet. So please google ... [read more]

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    Copy Critique: Re-Brandable/PLR Membership Script

    doop in Copy Writing

    I've just put up my new product at: SimpleBillingSystem - White Label Product Delivery & Subscription Billing I realize that the site layout isn't the usual layout for a sales ... [read more]

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    Making a Sales letter (or a site) which Adwords is OK with?

    ikuret75 in Copy Writing

    Hi, As you know it is getting difficult to put ads for info products on Adwords. I was researching about how to put info product's ads on Adwords and I ... [read more]

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    Kindly Critique This Sales Pitch

    BBAkwe in Copy Writing

    Hello Guys Kindly help me with some ideas here. This is one of my ads running here but not been doing so well. The service is very reliable with 100% ... [read more]

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    Help with copy ideas! (iPhone Websites/Web-spaces)

    Krisism in Copy Writing

    Hello Warriors, We're nearly finished creating where we will be selling iPhone-optimized web solutions to the mainstream consumer. We put some quick "dull" copy in just to fill the ... [read more]

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    >> Free Lifetime Membership for Best Headline

    ocmnet in Copy Writing

    I am getting ready to release a new Clickbank product and need a great headline for CB Tag Clouds Submit your headline here and I will give the winner a ... [read more]

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    Thanks for the replies.

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    Copy Critique Request: Fat Loss Product

    warrior_money in Copy Writing

    Hey guys, I've just stepped in the weight loss niche by establishing a partnership with a fitness expert. We created this product The Diet Ultimatum. However because it's the first ... [read more]

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    What sort of info did you take notes on, if any. (Makepeace - QuickStart Copy Sys.)

    Mike Schwenk in Copy Writing

    Hey Folks, I've been digging into Clayton's course a lot more lately. While getting the materials out, I also decided to grab a spare notebook to, well, take notes. I ... [read more]

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    Squeeze Page Critique Service?

    Jays80 in Copy Writing

    Hi Copywriting Warriors, I am looking to improve optin rate for couple of my Squeeze Pages. Is there a copywriter/firm offers this kind of service? If yes can you direct ... [read more]

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    Need to improve sales copy for an ebay item. Help!

    Jacob Anthony in Copy Writing

    Hi guys, I need some suggestions on improving the sales copy for this acne treatment cream that's on sale on ebay. It wasn't written by myself. What I'd like to ... [read more]

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    I'm Looking For A Few Newbie Copywriters

    Harlan in Copy Writing

    I'm teaching a group of students about outsourcing and we will be looking for copywriters. These letters will be 1-2 pages in length (not longer) and will be posted to ... [read more]

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    Longer or Shorter Sales Page?

    humbledmarket in Copy Writing

    What sales page do you think works best. I've tried both long and short and I personally find that the short one convert better for me. I tried to go ... [read more]

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    SHOWDOWN! Geico vs. Travelers Sales Letter battle

    FuNwiThChRiS in Copy Writing

    I recently received two direct mail sales letters from auto insurance companies. One was from Geico Insurance, the other was from Travelers Insurance. I put the two letters head to ... [read more]

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    Anybody Practice By Writing Out Existing High Converting Sales Pages By Hand?

    JasonParker in Copy Writing

    Has anyone tried this? Does it seem like you get a swipe file burned into your brain or what? I'm thinking about writing out a really long letter that's a ... [read more]

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    My First Sales Letter - After digging into sales pages for months

    rmichel in Copy Writing

    Hello I would like to ask you to check out my very first sales page. I've studied the topic of creating sales pages for quite some time now and I ... [read more]

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    Email Campaigns: Do you folks stack or split?

    Nick Brighton in Copy Writing

    Hey all, I'm really getting into email testing and experimentation recently. One thing I want to explore more of, is this: When creating autoresponder follow ups, do you: a) Stack ... [read more]

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    Need Help With Back End Sales Page - Any Examples?

    SonnyKing in Copy Writing

    Hey Warriors, It seems that I have to write my own back end sales page for my Forex product, that is launching in June. I was going to have my ... [read more]

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    Hover Opt-in Critique

    Dietriffic in Copy Writing

    Hey guys! I'm trying to increase my opt-in rate on my lightbox to my list. I can't seem to get above 2%. I've tried about 50 different versions which I ... [read more]

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    Dear Friend . . . I'm NOT Your Friend

    moniez in Copy Writing

    I realize that many pages employ the "Dear Friend . . . . " narration. But every time I read a page employing this, I cringe. In fact, I HATE ... [read more]

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    One of the 50 individuals who have shaped modern marketing

    Rezbi in Copy Writing

    If you're wondering who that is, it's Drayton Bird. And I'm interviewing him tomorrow. So, if you have any questions you'd like to ask him, feel free to post them ... [read more]

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    Need Copywriter to Convert Hypey Sales Letter to Factual one

    apollocreed in Copy Writing

    I have a sales letter that is selling a Make Money Online product. This letter is written very well in the typical MMO hypey style. But it is not converting ... [read more]

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    you know your influence is starting to spread when...

    Loren Woirhaye in Copy Writing

    Somebody sent me a link in reply to one of my emails today for some money-pyramid type thing. I checked it out and found a recent email I sent to ... [read more]

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    Curious: Are you interested in NLP copy?

    AwesomePossum in Copy Writing

    The headline's pretty much self explanitory...maybe you could share how you use it too...I think that's really cool. My number one sales strategy is the fact that the customer has ... [read more]

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    Need advice on how to write to a Pastor... & get them to respond!

    ADD Guy in Copy Writing

    I want to write (snail mail) to a list of pastors and offer them a free resource CD. My whole intent is to get them to request the CD via ... [read more]

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    Video - South Africa World Cup Ad

    Ross Bowring in Copy Writing

    ESPN's South Africa World Cup ads have left me cold so far... They've gone down the earnest sociological route. But here's a Nike ad doing the viral rounds that's got ... [read more]

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    Favorite Copywriting Piece

    robyna in Copy Writing

    I am creating an elaborate swipe file and thought it would fun to see what everyone's favorite copy is. Do you have something you use or refer others to as ... [read more]

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    The Landing Page Handbook?

    JamesJeffery in Copy Writing

    Anyone got/read the landing page handbook? Looking for some reviews. I found it on the Sherpa Store, but its $501. I'd be interested in purchasing if the book is worth ... [read more]