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    Highlights of the Copywriting Section for Warrior members STICKY

    Resources for new Copywriters Top Copywriting Books Ever Storytelling Resources for Copywriters and Marketers The Biggest, Most Bad-Ass List of Awesome Marketing Lists If you want to hire copywriters... Directory ... [read more]

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    Do You Know Colonel Cargill?

    Presented without comment: Joseph Heller, Catch-22: "Colonel Cargill was a forceful, ruddy man. Before the war, he had been an alert, hard-hitting, aggressive marketing executive. He was a very bad ... [read more]

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    Gary Bencivenga's seminar materials -- would they be useful to my specific situation?

    Ken F in Copy Writing

    I am NOT a copywriter, although I have studied copywriting (AWAI's course + Gene Schwartz's book). I am a freelance legal translator and provide my services to conservative international law ... [read more]

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    Email Autoresponder Series Question

    Hello all, I want to put together a squeeze page (IM niche) with a 7 day autoresponder course series and send it out every other day. My questions is: is ... [read more]

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    My First Copywriting Critique Request

    Honestly, I'm not sure why I'm doing this. The sales letter you may or may not read is for my first product from 4 years ago. I have removed all ... [read more]

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    Seeking Help On Last Leg of Home Study Course

    jkelley in Copy Writing

    Hey warriors, I need your help. I'm currently trying to create a home study course package which includes multiple audio discs, a course manual and software. Here are the 2 ... [read more]

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    Headline Help? Pleaseeeee

    Social Experts in Copy Writing

    I've begun writing my salesletter but I'm stuck on the headline! I have a few ideas but I'll tell you about the product then my ideas. It is a 90-Day ... [read more]

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    Clickbank Pages & Mousetraps

    The Copy Nazi in Copy Writing

    Anyone know the facts on this? Clickbank says To report sites using mousetraps, such as windows that spawn new windows or otherwise resist being closed, please forward the offending URL ... [read more]

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    You Have Such Bad Banners!

    Paul Hancox in Copy Writing

    Hi Folks OK, so I bumped into another bad banner ad a few minutes ago. I'm deciding to collect some bad banners to eventually show my copywriting students, but I ... [read more]

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    Please Critique my Landing Page

    seven777 in Copy Writing

    Hi, Looking for ideas/suggestions for this landing page: Safety Spot: Custom-Built Online Training Software for Businesses What would you do to increase the number of leads it generates? Thanks in ... [read more]

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    Why is it so hard to find a copywriter who will put his money where his mouth is?

    dseisner in Copy Writing

    Dear copywriters, I am more than willing to admit that this is MY problem and MY style. But maybe you guys can help me out so I can understand where ... [read more]

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    Split for different autoresponder message sets

    Hello, I was wondering if anybody could suggest how I could go about testing two different autoresponder message sets using the same website if possible. It would be the same ... [read more]

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    Product Works Like A Dream but Copy Doesn't Convert - Any Ideas???

    Hi Warriors No More Comments Needed - We have a 'real" Copywriter working on it NOW. We put our product up on Clickbank and have not hit any conversions. Yet ... [read more]

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    Learning to write better email copy...Which "guru" would you follow?

    Derek_Thomas in Copy Writing

    I don't subscribe to many email lists...none in fact. I had my reasons for this...mainly just clearing out the clutter in my life/inbox. But in the spirit of learning how ... [read more]

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    The Ugliest Sales Letter I have ever seen

    TimCastleman in Copy Writing

    Seriously, I couldn't read this one because of how ugly it was. Coming from these two I am really surprised by the look. An invitation from Jay Abraham & Dan ... [read more]

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    This Page Averages 200 hops per day but has only generated 11 sales ever. What am I doing wrong?

    Matt Wolfe in Copy Writing

    Hey guys, I have this product called The Wordpress Classroom. I've sold hundreds of copies of it already through ad swaps and promos to my own list. I finally got ... [read more]

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    The Cliche Copy Catastrophe

    camalus1026 in Copy Writing

    "Stress" and "tension" seem to be a popular concern here in the copywriting sub-forum at the moment, so let's have a little fun. We've all seen copy that just oozes ... [read more]

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    Yep - I said it -

    Feeling a little tense? Has the copywriting neighborhood gotten a bit meaner these days? I would vote yes…not because people are nastier, ruder, and more arrogant as a whole. Yes ... [read more]

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    Rip this sales letter apart- don't feel sorry for the writer!

    RevenueRabbi in Copy Writing

    Please take a look at this salesletter... and rip it apart! It's a first draft... I gave someone new a shot at coming up with salescopy and this is what ... [read more]

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    Man's Man Copywriting

    Yeah, that's right. Here's how to write copy for MEN:

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    HELP - Website and Product Creation.

    jempub in Copy Writing

    Hello Warriors. I'm looking for someone to create a brand new internet marketing product from my outline and also need excellent website design and copy writing. If you're interested, please ... [read more]

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    Seeking Copy advice

    Bret Ferguson in Copy Writing

    Hello everyone, I have just started a site in a micro-niche market. I am looking for feedback on the site itself and the copy. (I know this could be painful ... [read more]

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    The structure of a powerful hard-hitting sales letter

    mrozlat in Copy Writing

    - Start with a big promise. - Paint the picture. - Give them proof. - Tell them why it's unique. - CLOSE your argument by telling them why they must ... [read more]

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    What is to be considered a GOOD conversion rate for a website sales letter?

    Kelby in Copy Writing

    I was wondering what is considered to be a good conversion rate for a website sales letter? No PPC traffic, just cold traffic or SEO traffic. I know it varies ... [read more]

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    Unfortunate Copy Writing

    ivel96792 in Copy Writing

    There are great marketing copy writers on the net and I can't get enough information and tutoring from them. Unfortunately, there are those unethical people who can also write great ... [read more]

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    Hey You, What is Copy Writing?

    johnwalton in Copy Writing

    Ok so i've heard about copywriting for the past 4 years and i can't believe i still don't know exactly what it means. Could someone sum it up for me ... [read more]

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    HELP! This is a Copywriting Critique 911. :-)

    mrfixituk in Copy Writing

    I've been in marketing online for a while and have always wanted to make money, but so far have made little. I put a site together to retail a product ... [read more]

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    Need a quick promotional email created

    ivanm in Copy Writing

    Hey, I need an email created for a JV partner of mine. I'm offering his list a free 30 day trial to my membership site in the dating/seduction market. So ... [read more]

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    Looking For A Pursuasive Email Course Copywriter

    apollocreed in Copy Writing

    I have an ebook course which is over 150 pages long. I am looking for somebody who can create a short email course based on it. The writer will need ... [read more]

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    F u cn rd ths msg, u 2 cn dbl yr incm w spdwrtng.

    The Copy Nazi in Copy Writing

    I'd forgotten all about this brilliant Gary Bencivenga "bullet" until I read John_S's post on another thread about the old "Which Headline Pulled Best?" where Gary gives this tip - ... [read more]

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    Chinese Copy Torture

    Yo - I've been playing Electric Guitar for a few months now. I started to impress my wife...she said it would've been better to just fold a load of laundry. ... [read more]

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    PLEASE Critique These Headlines and/or Answer The POLL!!

    dseisner in Copy Writing

    I know this may not be an excellent, controlled experiment, but I want to throw out a couple headlines and see if there's an overwhelming favorite and perhaps why. (I ... [read more]

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    Affilliate Landing Pages: NO ONE Talks About This & Its Pissing Me OFF!

    Firstly my hat is off to all of you here at the Warrior forum and for taking the time to read this post about..."Affiliate Landing Pages!" lol To the Point: ... [read more]

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    Makepeace or Carlton?

    Shaleniie Devi in Copy Writing

    Hey All Thanks for stopping by So I want to learn the art of copywriting and have been doing quite abit of research in the forum to figure out my ... [read more]

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    Are There Different Rules For WSO Copy? - Critique My WSO Please

    Derek_Thomas in Copy Writing

    Hey Warriors, I've been offering my services via the Warriors For Hire Section for a couple months now. It's doing pretty well, but I was hoping to get your feedback ... [read more]

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    Where Can I find a Copy Writer?

    ToddBock in Copy Writing

    Hi, Brand new here (so please be gentle with me)... I have a single page of copy that I send out to people announcing a new free entrepreneur website to ... [read more]

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    Who's Your Favorite Story-Telling Fiction Authors?

    MikeHumphreys in Copy Writing

    Hey Copywriters, A couple of you have mentioned about the importance of telling a story (if possible) in your copy to help sell a product or service. Vin Montello was ... [read more]

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    I am brand spanking new here.

    NicheHunter in Copy Writing

    Hi All, I know I probably shouldnt be posting my squeeze page copy here, but I wanted some feed back. Below is what I have but I think it lacks ... [read more]

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    Learn the Law of Copywriting from the Teachers Featured in this Salesletter

    Here's a superb opportunity to watch masterful copywriting at work: Learn the Law of Attraction from the Teachers Featured in The Secret "Learn the Law of Attraction from the Teachers ... [read more]

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    3 Bud Weckesser Ads

    Alex Cohen in Copy Writing

    Here's 3 Bud Weckesser ads from the early 1980s ... The $12,000 Secret of an Ohio Housewife Weekly World News - Google Books What’s this woman doing? Popular Mechanics - ... [read more]

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    Is Dan Kennedy's material still relevant?

    Daniel Ray in Copy Writing

    I remember reading a lot of Dan Kennedy's copy writing material in the past. Is his stuff still regarded as the best, like it used to be? If not, who ... [read more]

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    How many testimonials is best for a WSO sales letter?

    dseisner in Copy Writing

    I've heard it's best to keep WSO sales letters relatively short, and I agree. How many testimonials do you think I should stick in the letter? I have over 10 ... [read more]

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    What Would You Charge for Just a Squeeze Page?

    SusanLandry in Copy Writing

    Hi everyone, I've never done only a squeeze page (without the accompanying sales letter) and I'm scratching my head over here. Thought it might be best to get a reality ... [read more]

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    Can you suggest me a Copywriting course/book??

    Mo Faisal in Copy Writing

    Hi Warriors, I am not here to spark a debate on which is the best copywriting book/course out there. But I just needed a little help. I want you to ... [read more]

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    I have an infected tooth

    Hi Guys and Gals, I have an infected tooth, but I don't have the money for a professional dentist. I know a dentist could do a good job for me, ... [read more]

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    I'm obviously an amateur!

    chanetsa in Copy Writing

    I launched my first Clickbank product 2 months ago and have made only 2 sales! Lots of visitors but no buyers! I fear that my amateur copywriting skills are part ... [read more]

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    Headline of the day

    This is a press release from astronomers. ESO - eso0946 - Black Hole Caught Zapping Galaxy into Existence? "Black Hole Caught Zapping Galaxy Into Existence?" Question: How could you use ... [read more]

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    Signature tip

    c elias in Copy Writing

    I can't remember who told me about this or how I found it - but here is a website where you can create a handwritten signature for your sales letters, ... [read more]

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    Not my Forte, help needed!

    John Pawlett in Copy Writing

    Hi Guys One of my (many) weaknesses is writing copy. I have just written some for a new type of webhosting site that I am launching, I would love your ... [read more]

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    Simple Formula for Testimonial Story Based Copy

    This morning I am writing a script for a client to use on a squeeze page (150 words!) It is pretty common to have to write copy that is based ... [read more]

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    Critique of my squeeze page please

    kelvintang in Copy Writing

    Hi, I just done with my squeeze page. When people fill in the form and they will get free self improvement book. Here is my website - Please let ... [read more]

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    Offshoot from the $3000 thread-reasonable price for new copywriter

    deannatroupe in Copy Writing

    Okay I posed this question on another thread, but got no response so I decided to make it it's own thread. I'd like to start offering copywriting as a service, ... [read more]

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    One of the best I've seen

    Guys check out Old School Crappie Fishing Family Secrets This guy has nailed tone, angle, proof, and offer. He writes like a pro but as far as I can tell ... [read more]

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    Serial Button Pusher Suspected In Disappearing Threads...

    BrianMcLeod in Copy Writing

    What's with the disappearing threads? I just wasted time writing a thoughtful reply to Mike Humphrey's wholly useful and friendly post about whose copy we all like to read... A ... [read more]

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    Is formatting always a part of 'the gig'? And one other question.

    camalus1026 in Copy Writing

    Hello, Mike here with another general question or two. Perhaps I'm overlooking the obvious, but: 1.) Do you always format your sales pages for clients? This seems to be a ... [read more]

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    Sales page review

    ericnyc in Copy Writing

    Please let me know what you think about my sales page You can also click on my signature. I am attaching 2 heatmap files: 1. heatamp-attention.jpg it shows the ... [read more]

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    Video Sales Pages!! -> Anyone Know Any Good Courses

    Ross Kenny in Copy Writing

    Are there any courses available teaching video sales copy instead of the traditional sales copy. I want to use video similar on my sales pages and split test between them. ... [read more]