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Tip #2 Today's tip is about headlines. One of the most talked-about subjects in all of copywriting. I'll make it easy. How many times have you searched on Google for ... [read more]
Tip #2 Today's tip is about headlines. One of the most talked-about subjects in all of copywriting. I'll make it easy. How many times have you searched on Google for ... [read more]
I've now been a freelance copywriter for the last 11 years. If you're a brand-new copywriter, I'm going to try to give you a tiny peek at the art and ... [read more]
I see this question a lot. It's the wrong question. The real question is... How do I find good copywriting clients? That distinction matters. A lot. Every time I'm looking ... [read more]
So I decided I'll make this whole thing go beyond 3 tips. Are some thinking I'm going too far? Probably yes. Will I continue? Again probably yes. To recap: You're ... [read more]
Please see the following guides to our community: Warrior Forum Rules & Etiquette for Posting WSO Marketplace Rules List of the best all in one, knowledge compendium threads You are ... [read more]
I was reading through "The Adweek Copywriting Handbook" a few days ago and came across something that I have been noticing a whole lot lately. Take a look at much ... [read more]
Just having my sales copy written for a new membership site I am putting together and am wondering if long copy is best for this niche. It is a craft ... [read more]
Hello, Does WF have a Feedback/Review topic? I couldn't find one, so I posted here as a close second. Here is my landing page that I could use some feedback ... [read more]
Stories, Stories, Stories, I'm sure you've heard the importance of them by now. But how do you write a good story? What does a good story contain? I may be ... [read more]
So often we TRY to succeed in life only to fail and never know what it would have felt like to be on top of an industry...or worst, reached the ... [read more]
So I have completely revamped my landing page, hoping to get some feedback. Please only respond if you are a copywriter or a consultant of some kind (as consultants are ... [read more]
Hello, everyone: I'd like to demonstrate an example of what I call "Spiritual Copy" by showing you copy makeover I did today for a good friend of mine. I've known ... [read more]
hey everyone i need your input on which of the following two sounds better the missing link between you and success online or the missing link between you and your ... [read more]
I've finished an ecourse on using WordPress to create great websites fast. My guiding light has always been this tagline: Improve your bottom line. Fire your webmaster. I think it's ... [read more]
Hiring copywriters can be difficult. If you've done it before, you know that just as well as I do. Price isn't the only issue these days. With the masses of ... [read more]
Hi everyone, I have enjoyed reading your comments to others about their salespages. Now it's my turn to ask for a review. Our site is My PLR Cash Cow Any ... [read more]
I've been writing direct response copy for 16 years, and over that time I've learned the single most powerful word in advertising. Use it, and your results will skyrocket. So ... [read more]
My conversions in the past few days have been horrible (just to give you an idea - 1 out of 300), so I figured it was time for a new ... [read more]
First, for those who don't know what split testing is... A/B testing, or split testing, is a method of advertising testing by which a baseline control sample is compared to ... [read more]
A few months back I was scammed by several PayPal users on my website. After losing a dispute to the first scammer and talking to a few PayPal employees I ... [read more]
I am trying something just to attempt to supplement my income a little bit. I took an idea I discovered here on the forum and added my own little twists ... [read more]
Copywriters: Need critiques for http://www.options-income-generator.com and http://www.power-futures-strategy.com Thanks in advance!
Hello Warriors, I usually don't post here, but I am taking a different approach for my squeeze page. Typically, it's short. This time around, it's a big longer. I am ... [read more]
I have a few projects I am trying to finish and I was looking to outsource writing the sales copy. I can write it, I have written sales copy for ... [read more]
This is short page. Click here ^^^^ Do you feel you get the gist of what is being offered, and perhaps feel compelled to want to know more? Or do ... [read more]
Ok so I wanted to share with you all a page that I'm 99% sure it has a subliminal message in the sales letter. Notice the tiled background: Im pretty ... [read more]
Hi Warriors, I have a site that is doing very, very poorly (under .05% conversion). I have tried to mercilessly tweak the copy so it works but there's obviously something ... [read more]
Hello Fellow Warriors: I've been off the forum for nearly three months now. But I haven't been idle. (Though you could say I was "hiding in a cave!") I took ... [read more]
I have recently launched my first ebook and am now selling it on Clickbank. I have written the sales page myself, and I do believe that it is quite good. ... [read more]
Hi Everyone, Please let me know how good my pitch is for my ebook at: bestfranchisebooks.com (sorry I'm new, I can't post links). I should note that I receive some ... [read more]
Hello Copywarriors, I'm launching a minisite design business and in need of a salescopy for my website. It's not big, just a few pages. You can check my portfolio in ... [read more]
Hi All, With the help of a talented fellow warrior, I have a new sales page that I would like your opinions on. Please visit PrivateLabelRightsForWealth.com Here: PrivateLabelRightsForWealth.com Membership site ... [read more]
Hey, I created this sales page for a $1250 seminar and would like a critique PLEASE. doctorpaul.net - Live Events THANK YOU SO MUCH <3
From an email I received today: Subject: I stopped puking on my friends because of This FREE Mike Dillard event! I imagine this person's friends will be happy to get ... [read more]
I won his auction here - http://www.warriorforum.com/warrior-...-want-pay.html. I notice however that he was banned for some reason. Anyone know what's going on?
So we all know that Michel Fortin has a copy blog... And that Clayton Makepeace uses his blog like a newsletter. But what about us warrior copywriters? Do YOU have ... [read more]
Hey guys, i know that you see this same posting over and over....sorry. But I look to other professionals in the industry for their opinion. So here I am. I ... [read more]
I recently launched a new product for the weight loss industry. The product is completely uniqe and the guide is great, but my sale page is not converting AT ALL. ... [read more]
Well that's one title for a post but I believe this to be true and I'll tell you WHY even if you don't agree with me. Copywriting Tips And Tricks ... [read more]
Hi all, Im in need of a good and affordable copywriter. I desing websites but i also offer the service od writing the content for any website that the owner ... [read more]
Be brutal if needed. I don't care at all if it makes the copy better. Can't post a full link yet, but this is after the latest rewrite today... fitnessforbusybodies.com/?page_id=503 ... [read more]
I've just read my copy, and it has me on the edge of my seat, wanthing to hear more and more almost all of the way through, it's becoming pretty ... [read more]
Just a quick question, I couldnt decide whether to put this in here or the main forum but figured as copywriters are all about conversion, well i thought it fit. ... [read more]
I've been posting in another thread for advice on fixing my disaster of a website - I'd followed some coaching advice that apparently is faulty - and am looking for ... [read more]
Hello Fellow Warriors! I'm about to make my first salespage. Does anybody have a framework for it? Some kind of HTML file with dummy text in it, which I can ... [read more]
As a newbie with my first real product, I have now created my first real sales page which I would be so grateful if you could offer some ideas about ... [read more]
As a matter of fact I am an associate of a business model promoting mail order/direct marketing with a system so called 1-2-3 Power System. When I signed up as ... [read more]
I'd appreciate your thoughts on the salespage for my book. Thanks in advance for your help. The Cheapskate Diva
Hi guys, I've actually posted this is in the main forum too but I wanted to get some advice from copywriters to try and up my conversions. I'm pretty pleased ... [read more]
Any advice? Is there any product that specifically addresses this issue? I have NO IDEA how to structure a sales letter.
Hi folks, First off, excuse any potential typos - I'm typing this from a friend's computer, in a house next to a gorgeous lake, and with a hangover to boot ... [read more]
I've started an e-mail newsletter with tips on studying for students of my university. (I heard the money is in the list ). I included the name of our city ... [read more]
Here it is: MonetizeWordpress.com - The conversion booster plugin I'd start by changing the layout then the headline. What do you think? Thanks
Hello! I'm posting here to ask for some feedback on a short sales letter and order page I've written, at this address: algebrahelpsecrets.com/store/?t=a (Sorry I cannot make it a direct ... [read more]
Hi Guys I'm trying to create my first squeeze page.I have never attempted anything like this before.I wondered if there were any warriors out there that might help me with ... [read more]
So now the online offer is being presented more by a 'talking head' (without the full production budget of a corporate video). I am looking for video resources on how ... [read more]
Alright. I don't think this is considered a "formula," but I can't remember what it is. One of the well known copywriters/marketers writes a certain way, that apparently converts well.. ... [read more]
Hi warriors, I recently hired a copywriter to "redo" my sales page. The cost was a little high in my book but I decided that if it increased conversions, I'd ... [read more]
Hi there, Copywriting has never been one of my strong points but I've given it ago using some sample templates that I had. It's not quite finished but I'm looking ... [read more]
Some of the phrases that chase me off of the page faster then fire in the forest: "100% satisfaction guarantee" "this is the most important page you'll ever read" (I ... [read more]
Hi Guys, I have some traffic landing to this page here: Infinite Income Plan Review I threw it together quickly one night. I know it needs some work. Today I ... [read more]