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    Highlights of the Copywriting Section for Warrior members STICKY

    Resources for new Copywriters Top Copywriting Books Ever Storytelling Resources for Copywriters and Marketers The Biggest, Most Bad-Ass List of Awesome Marketing Lists If you want to hire copywriters... Directory ... [read more]

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    The billboard that almost killed me....

    copyassassin in Copy Writing

    hey copy warriors. So the wife and I almost died the other day when I barely missed crashing into an 18-wheeler because of the billboard like this one here: The ... [read more]

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    Please critique my sales page - particularly difficult demographic

    JonoC in Copy Writing

    truthaboutdepression (dot) com Hi everyone. I have spent the last 6 months writing an ebook about depression - something that I used to suffer from. I am very proud of ... [read more]

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    Confessions of A Junior Agency Copywriter

    A junior copywriter talks about life at an agency: Confessions of a Junior Copywriter | Digiday Highlights: Who in agencies gets too much credit and too little? Advertising has recently ... [read more]

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    How to catch my first real client?

    Cormac L in Copy Writing

    Little Intro Hi, I live in France and this is my second post after my intro in the off topic section. You (warriors) seem like a very wise group and ... [read more]

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    Criticize Me. Tell Me What's Wrong With This Squeeze Page!

    DerekMadden in Copy Writing

    I am very close to sending some Solo's to this Squeeze Page, just needing to know if there are any tweaks I need to make in it. This will be ... [read more]

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    Agora Financial Letters

    deezn in Copy Writing

    I keep hearing about these, and I think I know where to get them. But can anyone point me to ones that were definitely successful? I'm looking to create a ... [read more]

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    High conversion SP

    cCastiel in Copy Writing

    Hey guys i am searching for some high converting squeeze Pages in ppc Marketing. Did you know any good sp? Preferably with the Theme Make Money or impotence. Best Greeting ... [read more]

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    Please Critique my Video Sales Script. Willing to learn!

    Kelvinmedia in Copy Writing

    Hi Warriorforum, I have been observing around for some time and I am really loving the community here. Everyone is willing to help each other out and I am really ... [read more]

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    Thoughts on header images

    Delta223 in Copy Writing

    Most of the classic copywriting books focus on printed materials, and I don't think I've ever read of one that recommended placing any sort of branding right at the top ... [read more]

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    The FTC and Copywriting

    Brian Norman in Copy Writing

    Would anyone be able to provide a link for an all-in-one solution for Copywriters or some info. on best practices in regards to following the FTC guidelines? I have been ... [read more]

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    Top Sales Copywriter Wanted For Clickbank Sales Video

    TheFlipperGuy in Copy Writing

    We are looking for a top sales copywriter to write a script for our sales video which will be done in a similar conversational/pitch style to It will be ... [read more]

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    I think, this is the best flyers in the world. Copywriting that make people act instantly ! (video)

    Raja Kamil in Copy Writing

    This is a video regarding stop smoking. My friend shared this on Facebook, so his friends stop smoking. I, in the other hand, found something really interesting at the few ... [read more]

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    Short Copy Lovers Deserve To Die

    Cat lovers, too. And hipsters. Wisconsin Agency's 'Deserve to Die' Campaign Puts Lung Cancer in Spotlight | Adweek

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    Looking to Hire a Copywriter

    zylogy in Copy Writing

    Hi folks. I realize the importance of copywriting, but it just isn't my forte. So, I'm looking to hire a copywriter for a small gig. If I'm happy with the ... [read more]

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    a tip for landing clients....

    shawnlebrun in Copy Writing

    So, I just heard on the radio an ad for Their tag line, throughout the radio and tv commercial is... "well, yeah... but show me the CarFax" and I ... [read more]

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    Quick Q re: opt in copy - need synonym for "no risk"

    Steve Foulds in Copy Writing

    I'm writing some sales copy for a fitness company, their demographic target on the opt-in page may be nervous and intimidated by initial face to face meetings, I need some ... [read more]

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    Critique Please

    SGLDSLV in Copy Writing

    Hi - I am rather new to all this and trying to ensure I am headed down the right path. I have changed my pitch several times, but feel that ... [read more]

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    First-time copywriter looking for criticism

    LloydC in Copy Writing

    Hey warriors! I've been writing normal/seo articles for a while and I thought I'd try my hand at copy writing to expand my repertoire. I've been reading over AWAI's stuff ... [read more]

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    Have any of you sold anything like this before (£199,995.00 boat)

    Nick Brighton in Copy Writing

    Heya, I wondered if you - or anyone you know - has sold any high ticket items such as cars, boats, houses etc before? I have a potential client that ... [read more]

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    I'll Pay You $2,000 To Write Me This Sales Letter...

    mattlloyd in Copy Writing

    Hello to all Warrior copywriters... I'm looking for a copy writer with experience in Biz Op, to write me a sales letter for a live event I'm doing in California, ... [read more]

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    Looking for John Caples quote/example

    marciayudkin in Copy Writing

    I am looking for examples from (I think) John Caples where different book titles were tested against each other back in the golden era of mail order ads and one ... [read more]

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    The elements of my copy

    Lucian Lada in Copy Writing

    Hello everyone, I'm taking a shot at my first copy. Here's the order of the elements. I kindly ask everyone who could give some pointers if the order is right. ... [read more]

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    Breakthrough Advertising by Eugene Schwartz - got the book?

    JasonParker in Copy Writing

    Im re-reading Breakthrough Advertising. It's funny how it all went into one ear and out the other the first time I read it a couple years ago. It's really a ... [read more]

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    sales letter text Graphics how do they do it ?

    bjarvie in Copy Writing

    Can someone please tell me what tools are being used to make headlines like the ones found here Plan My Baby - Baby Gender Selection - Prince or Princess? - ... [read more]

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    Sales Page Critique

    dorono in Copy Writing

    Hello all, I have a hair care product that I'm promoting via Google AdWords. It's been up for a few days and no sales yet, although it's very new and ... [read more]

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    Shrewd Involvement Device

    wilmath in Copy Writing

    It gnawed on me. "Why was the math upside down." "What was the copywriter thinking" To figure it out, the reader has to do some work. And if they are ... [read more]

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    Critique My Squeeze Page 2.0 - See what you think this time around!

    Karson in Copy Writing

    Alright! Thanks for the help guys! Had plenty of suggestions to change quite a bit last time. Lets go for round 2! Check it out here: Also, if you ... [read more]

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    Creating an impression - webpage copy critique

    BudaBrit in Copy Writing

    Hi all, Now, I do not profess to knowing all about copywriting - one of the reasons I decided not to offer it as a service yet - but I ... [read more]

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    Joe Sugarman Bally Fireball Swipe

    Joe Sugarman refers to a JS&A Bally Fireball ad in Chapter 16 of the Adweek Copywriting Handbook. I wanted to see the whole thing so here it is:

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    Plz critique my salespage

    belgianguy in Copy Writing

    I have built a salespage for a product that I have worked on with my coach and meditation teacher. I have uploaded an image of the salespage to my site, ... [read more]

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    Do you suffer from 'over copyfidence'?

    Something I find a lot of copywrites suffer from - especially more experienced ones - is something I call 'over copyfidence'. What is it? Well, for me it's when you ... [read more]

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    How Effectively Can You Put Yourself in Your Customer or Client’s Shoes?

    Mark Pescetti in Copy Writing

    The answer to this one question, more than anything else, will determine how many zeros you have in your bank or PayPal account. You can study the greats, hand-write sales ... [read more]

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    Needs of criticism on my squeeze page

    HansDavid in Copy Writing

    Here it is: h**p:// So far the page has between 35 and 40 percent of convertion rates. I plan to improve it until at least 50 percent. Any input you ... [read more]

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    When does it become offensive? Is this?

    gerardlr in Copy Writing

    A sub-headline featured in my sales letter says this: “How foolish would you feel if… you spent 1000s on advertising each month… … and nothing on the rich vein of ... [read more]

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    Is This A Page That Will Convert?

    cdogstu77 in Copy Writing

    I'm not an expert copywriter and so i'm reaching out for assistance from the copywriting pros. What do you think of this page? Shortzilla (dot) com Does it grab your ... [read more]

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    Rookie Copywriter Questions

    Brian Norman in Copy Writing

    Hi guys and gals, I have been studying Copywriting for a few weeks now, and was laying in bed last when a couple of questions popped in my mind. I ... [read more]

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    WSO Sales Letters With Like 30+ Testimonials...

    Okay, so anyone who has studied buying psychology knows the value of testimonials: they create social proof, and show that people are getting value out of the product. I like ... [read more]

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    SEO vs Copywriting

    MoreThanWords in Copy Writing

    So when writing your sales pages. Do you also pay any attention to keywords? I mean writing a sales page is great.. but if you're not getting any visitors or ... [read more]

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    Karson in Copy Writing

    Alright... Took into account what everyone has been saying and made a new set this 3rd time around. and thank you to everyone that has helped so far! Alright... Been ... [read more]

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    The Best Video Sales Letter Ever?

    packerfan in Copy Writing

    Like everyone in this forum (I'm assuming), I watch and read a lot of sales pitches. I recently saw one that I think is pretty awesome, thought I'd share and ... [read more]

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    A Gary Halbert Tip

    Prashant_W in Copy Writing

    Hey folks, I was scouring through Gary Halbert's letters a few days ago. After about 20 minutes or so, I chanced upon his letter that addressed wannabe copywriters. Basically he ... [read more]

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    My first ever sales letter [Video] Please critique to your best ability

    stevealtman in Copy Writing

    Hey guys First off, I've never written a sales copy before but I've been through enough to know what sounds good to me and what doesn't I also studied a ... [read more]

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    Review My Copy, Get a FREE Cookie (New Edition - Now Get TWO Cookies!)

    Ryan Dodson in Copy Writing

    Hey guys, Just kidding about the cookies... But I just wrote my first full sales letter and I'm wanting to get some feedback. Have a look ==> Become an Article ... [read more]

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    I am looking for a good copywriter that can create me a page that converts.

    Quentin in Copy Writing

    I am looking for a good copywriter that can create me a page that converts. Must be able to help me with: DESPERATE PROBLEM: UNIQUE PROMISE: OVERWHELMING PROOF: IRRESISTIBLE OFFER: ... [read more]

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    Rate my headlines - which is best, if any?

    gerardlr in Copy Writing

    Here's my latest attempt. (Selling a 'done-for-you' newsletter writing service to financial advisors who generally have a newsletter but seldom send it out, it's boring, and gets no response.) +++ ... [read more]

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    People Hate Email That Names Them

    perryny in Copy Writing

    People Hate Email That Names Them Looking at my last 20 broadcast messages, it doesn't seem to me that putting {!firstname_fix} in the subject has any real effect either way. ... [read more]

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    two sales pages selling the same product

    moneyka in Copy Writing

    is it okay to create two sales pages and sell the same product but target different customers?

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    Finding the right balance and location

    marks2424 in Copy Writing

    I have been doing my own article writing for the past 3 years but haven't done much real copy writing. I didn't put to much into it because I knew ... [read more]

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    Find the Best Sales Letters Of the Last 2 Years

    Daniel Sanchez in Copy Writing

    Hey there W. Forumers, Now, I don't often like asking for advice on this forum because I've noticed everyone and their dog seems to give advice here...some good and some ... [read more]

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    Help me out with a critique..

    Jasonsc in Copy Writing

    I wanna say right off the bat that I'm looking for some help with a thread which I have here on the WF ... I'm not sure if this is ... [read more]

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    5 Tips for Writing Powerful Sales Letters All the Time

    abugah in Copy Writing

    Small improvements in your copy can increase its effectiveness. Take a look at these 5. 1. Do not avoid the hard work. ‘‘Write at least 20 to 25 good headlines,’’ ... [read more]

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    What are your views on enthusiam and copywriting?

    JasonParker in Copy Writing

    Alot of great salesmen and copywriters seem to contradict each other on whether enthusiasm helps to sell or not. Some claim that enthusiasm kills sales. Some say it explodes your ... [read more]

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    Are You All Talk?

    Rezbi in Copy Writing

    I'm on a break, so I'm having a rant. I see so many comments on here that actually make me cringe. This is a copywriting forum. A lot of people ... [read more]

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    Put Away Your Wallet - You're Money's No Good Here

    Rezbi in Copy Writing

    "This opportunity doesn’t start with me asking you for money." Just got an email this morning. That's the first line on the sales page. And I've seen quite a few ... [read more]

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    Monthly retainer fees

    markpocock in Copy Writing

    I have a client asking me about monthly retainer fees. Are any of you guys on monthly retainers? If so, how do you structure them? eg. The client gets x ... [read more]