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Hey,Just launched my first Shopify Store!

by umerdurrani
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Super Excited to say the least! i just launched my shopify store https://www.watches4us.com/. i Sell 100% genuine designer and luxury watches.Can you lovely & experienced lot please provide me some constructive feedback Positive or Negative so i can improve my website and provide quality service to all my customers.

Just to let you know i am using facebook ads and Instagram to promote my site and i also have a Facebook shop for my website

Thank You all for Your Time Very Highly Appreciated
#hey #launched #shopify #store
  • Profile picture of the author Splatterfox
    Looks ok, even though it can make use of some improvements. The overall store looks extremely basic, which isn't bad itself, but especially the header and the logo (!) could be visually more appealing. The header is also always a good idea to put some very relevant content in (like coupons, CTAs, shipping info etc.)

    The color of the Social Media plugins totally doesn't fit the site. They look playful and colorful, while the overall site is clean black and white and wants to signalize a "serious" look.

    I don't know if the prices are good on your site, if they are just normal prices like anywhere else you might have hard times advertising it properly. Nonetheless I wish you best of luck, it definetly is quite a good start.
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    • Profile picture of the author umerdurrani
      Thanks for your feedback Logo is something on my to do list i have ordered one from fiverr as i am no expert in making one.Will change the social icons to black and white as well
      Many Thanks for your time and great feedback
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    • Profile picture of the author umerdurrani
      Originally Posted by Splatterfox View Post

      Looks ok, even though it can make use of some improvements. The overall store looks extremely basic, which isn't bad itself, but especially the header and the logo (!) could be visually more appealing. The header is also always a good idea to put some very relevant content in (like coupons, CTAs, shipping info etc.)

      The color of the Social Media plugins totally doesn't fit the site. They look playful and colorful, while the overall site is clean black and white and wants to signalize a "serious" look.

      I don't know if the prices are good on your site, if they are just normal prices like anywhere else you might have hard times advertising it properly. Nonetheless I wish you best of luck, it definetly is quite a good start.
      Hi Splatterfox i have made some changes in the header and also updated the logo please review and comment
      Many Thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author publyfe
    On the ABOUT US page where you describe who you are and what you offer, the word 'customer' is used 4 times in two short sentences.

    On the WHY US page you have several grammatical errors after periods in the description.
    area. Also need to put text in the main image on this page as the same info is listed below. Other than that sight looks great!
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    Spy On YOUR Competitors' Marketing Campaigns!!! -->> http://www.publyfe.com

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    • Profile picture of the author umerdurrani
      Thanks will correct the grammatical mistakes now but not sure what you mean by text in the image on why us page.do you mean to take the image off as it got kind off same info as in the main text below.

      Thanks for your feedback and your time
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  • Profile picture of the author Gambino
    I looked at it real quick on mobile. A few things I noticed.

    1. There's a disconnect between your name and logo. In your name, the 4 is blue and the text is black. In my opinion, the part of the 4 that is black should be blue. Just my opinion tho.

    2. As stated above, there are a bunch of grammatical errors.

    3. The product pages should have unique product descriptions, ideally. If you want any chance to rank organically you'll want to do that or outsource it. I'm assuming that the list in the description is copy and pasted from wherever you source the watch.

    4. I'm not sure if this is the norm in your country but I'd change "catalog" to "shop".

    5. The pages you created like the about us or the why page leave a lot to be desired. I don't see any value in them.

    6. The design doesn't look bad, but the banners look like they were made/edited in Paint (the text).

    7. As a customer, I wouldn't buy from the site just because of how many times it says "authentic" and "genuine". Seems like overkill.

    8. Your return page. I'd say what you CAN do, not what you CAN'T do. As in, you can return all orders within 30 days for a full refund, instead of you can't accept returns over 30 days.
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    • Profile picture of the author umerdurrani
      Originally Posted by Gambino View Post

      I looked at it real quick on mobile. A few things I noticed.

      1. There's a disconnect between your name and logo. In your name, the 4 is blue and the text is black. In my opinion, the part of the 4 that is black should be blue. Just my opinion tho.

      2. As stated above, there are a bunch of grammatical errors.

      3. The product pages should have unique product descriptions, ideally. If you want any chance to rank organically you'll want to do that or outsource it. I'm assuming that the list in the description is copy and pasted from wherever you source the watch.

      4. I'm not sure if this is the norm in your country but I'd change "catalog" to "shop".

      5. The pages you created like the about us or the why page leave a lot to be desired. I don't see any value in them.

      6. The design doesn't look bad, but the banners look like they were made/edited in Paint (the text).

      7. As a customer, I wouldn't buy from the site just because of how many times it says "authentic" and "genuine". Seems like overkill.

      8. Your return page. I'd say what you CAN do, not what you CAN'T do. As in, you can return all orders within 30 days for a full refund, instead of you can't accept returns over 30 days.
      Hey,
      Thanks for your detailed feedback you mentioned above to have unique product descriptions but most of the products have product features which are unique to each product so how can i make a change and banners paint ones i have taken them off (thanks) point number 8 is amazing as i was thinking on the same lines cause after reading it something wasn't looking right but you made it easier for me to identify so will def make a change to that.....
      please share some light about unique product description as i would want to def do that just need to know how??

      Many Thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author Martin Benfield
    1st one? looks great.. now you have something to perfect, keep going.
    pat yourself on the back..again, good job.
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  • Profile picture of the author Junkytoona
    I thought you are supposed to avoid name brands when drop shipping unless you are an authorized dealer?
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    • Profile picture of the author umerdurrani
      No i have checked with the supplier who is an authorized dealer and he has confirmed to me in writing that it is ok for me to do it.
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