here's my new squeeze page,i need your advice :)

I like personally. The head line is a little weak but you will know know unless you split test.

Start small like 20 a day for a week then start split testing different things

I liked everything but all the CAPS up top. Too much?

Maybe about half as much.

All caps is fine in this case since you are not writing much. There should not be a space in the middle of a sentence though. You have two lines, a space which breaks up a sentence and then two more lines. That should be a complete paragraph.

Also, you said that you had used the product. Why not show a before and after photo along with a brief bit of info on how the product worked for you? This would offer proof and credence to what you are doing.

Best of luck to you,
GfS

I like the way the page looks. Responsive too, which is more or less crucial these days in age.

However, I'm not too sure about the headline. You seem to target skinny guys and I'm not really sure if they can relate to it.

You say that you've been skinny yourself. If you were to visit your squeeze page back when you were the most skinny, would you answer "Yes" to the question "Are you a hard-gainer?". If you were a hard-gainer, would you really need the product you're offering?

However, this is just me telling you what I think. You can't be sure until you put your landing page through proper testing. Which is something you should always do

From looking at your squeeze page I get the feeling you're not really sure about what is your market audience and what they want.

For example your headline "Are you a hard gainer?".
What does it really means, are you trying to target nobs to whom it likely says nothing, or to experienced people who actually might be hard gainers, and who already have the routine and already passed the stage of being skinny.

Additionally, I don't see benefit in your headline.
Yes sure you have benefit in sub headline, but you're making assumption that people actually have enough attention span to continue read once the main headline fails to attract them.

Finally, lets talk about the image. Ask yourself how it relates to your market niche, are they want to look and be like that or are they just want to be fit and stop being skinny (which is the crowd you seem to be targeting) and be more healthy.

P.S: I actually like the idea for name and email. Given that this is the era of a mobile traffic - popups look just horrible on mobile devices.

P.S.S: Just looked at the page of the other guy, he seem to have a very well defined audience and his message is consistent and authentic.

Hi,

Awesome domain name and really good squeezepage, it's clear, simple and with a 2 step optin form integrated

Nice job broo,

Cheers,

Diogo de Castro