what should i do with a squeeze page ?

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Hi guys

So i just made a squeeze page i would appriciate your feedback about it yourweightlossguides.com if i did something wrong , or the template and anything would help ... im still working on it .


Now im confused about the traffic should i use facebook ads or PPC ?
what about the SEO ?
the best way to promote affiliate links with email ?

THANK you SO MUCH
#email marketing #facebook ad #page #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author shaunybb
    Hey there how are you today?? Here is my input on your squeeze page:-


    1) Your Opt in box (download for free now) is not above the fold. Your conversion rate is hurting because of this.


    2) Your headline is too generic- you need to be more specific and add more benefits.


    3) There are too many images in the top part. Try only having one, its more distracting than anything.


    4) You don't have a policy page or disclaimer link at the bottom of this. Google, bing etc you will need this and anyway especially in the weight loss niche cover your a**.


    There hope that helps!!
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    • Profile picture of the author Simohty
      Originally Posted by shaunybb View Post

      Hey there how are you today?? Here is my input on your squeeze page:-


      1) Your Opt in box (download for free now) is not above the fold. Your conversion rate is hurting because of this.


      2) Your headline is too generic- you need to be more specific and add more benefits.


      3) There are too many images in the top part. Try only having one, its more distracting than anything.


      4) You don't have a policy page or disclaimer link at the bottom of this. Google, bing etc you will need this and anyway especially in the weight loss niche cover your a**.


      There hope that helps!!
      Hey shaunybb ! Im doing fine you ?

      Thanks for your helpful tips im working on fixing those issues right now ! i changed the optin box's place i don't know if it's the right place, and deleted some images and now im writing the privacy policy ... about the headline im gonna changed it i guess .

      Thanks again !
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      • Profile picture of the author shaunybb
        hey there no problem at all. Well make these changes and then we can see what going on. There could be more stuff to improve but that's just what I got from looking first hand. Ermm are you running this right now? What is your opt in conversion percentage?
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        • Profile picture of the author Simohty
          Hey there again . I did some changes if u can see them now, I don't know what should i write in the headline , and im not running the website yet , i still have work with the email provider and writing the emails... After that comes the advertising part .. then we can say it's running !
          Thanks again for your Time !
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          • Profile picture of the author shaunybb
            ok good job on the privacy policy link!! I am not a lawyer so as a disclaimer but your policy page looks great!! Make the image smaller and fit it above the fold it will look cleaner and fit in better.


            Ill help you with the headline soon....
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            • Profile picture of the author shaunybb
              ok so here goes on the headline help:- ill do my best!!


              so your headline now is "the best weight loss guide to start to start your journey now for free"


              Lets look at this first. You don't need to include the phrase "for free now". where you have "best weight loss guide" this is too generic and not specific enough.


              Ok lets look at some idea's:-


              I am not sure what is in your free guide. But make it about one specific thing for example it could healthy eating or exercises to lose weight. If your talking about multiple things the customer will get confused and overwhelmed and wont consume your content.


              example in the make money online area, many people make the mistake of offering a lead magnet (free guide) about the whole business, they talk about traffic, landing pages etc all in one guide. NOT GOOD!!


              In the above example only one area should be tackled!!! Ok I hope that makes sense back onto your page.


              So, here is some ideas for a title..........actually I could help you more if you give me what the content is about in your free guide please???
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              • Profile picture of the author Simohty
                Originally Posted by shaunybb View Post

                .actually I could help you more if you give me what the content is about in your free guide please???
                Hey shaunybb


                The 4500 words ebook that i made covers the :

                1-basics of losing weight

                2-Eating Right and Diet Plan

                3-Workout plans for Men and Women

                4-Staying Motivated and Weight Loss Tips

                But now after some research i found out that it's best to cover one topic with the lead magnet and send them the other topics like a bonus !
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  • Profile picture of the author chipu
    Facebook Ads are different than Google AdWords. Facebook targets interests, geography, gender, status etc.. while Google AdWords targets search. So, it might be a good thing to combine the two services to get the best results.
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  • Profile picture of the author Adam Yunker
    Hey there,

    Looks like you already got some really good tips about fixing your squeeze page! It's mostly just trial and error, so I'll devote more of this post to marketing your squeeze page.

    There's 2 ways I like to market and that is:

    1) Solo Ads - This is where you go to someone with a big list in your niche who offers solo ads and pay them for a certain amount of clicks. You can go on Facebook and there is a private group called Solo Ad Testimonials and you can join and find vendors to buy from there

    2) Forum Marketing - This is where you go to a forum about your niche (Weight-Loss, in your case) and you look to answer peoples questions on the forums and on the forum you add what's called a "signature" which at the bottom of every post you are allowed to link back to your website. So if you help people a lot they will click your link and join your email list. It's completely free!

    **Secret Strategy** But a really fast way to grow your email list, if you have the money to do so, is buy your way up to 1,000 subscribers (which may sound like a lot, but with the right solo ad provider you can do this in 1-2 orders)

    Then once you have 1,000 subscribers you can go to a place like Safe-Swaps which a website service that allows you to do a thing called "AdSwaps" if you have an email list of at least 1,000 people. So you buy your way up to 1,000 subscribers then signup for Safe-Swaps. AdSwaps is finding someone who has the same sized list as you and having them run an ad for your squeeze page to their list while you run an ad to their squeeze page to your email list. So you guys "Swap" and it's completely free!

    Those are just some of my ways, but I hope this helps!

    Have a good one!

    Adam
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  • Profile picture of the author Simohty
    Thanks for the marketing tips guys
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  • Profile picture of the author fulfilledlife
    What is your conversion rate right now? Have you tested the squeeze page?

    I like the design of your squeeze page, but think it needs a complete copy revamp.

    You page seem to target everyone. You cannot do it, you have to choose a specific niche and go for it. People lose weight for different reasons, for example, men might want to be more healthy, but women might want to lose weight so she can wear her favorite pair of jeans and be more attractive to opposite sex.

    Or perhaps your auditory is younger people who are not worried for their health, but would like to lose weight to be accepted among others and to remove social stigma with being overweight.

    If you really want to pull high conversion numbers you have to find what your target audiences are and target them specifically.Target their wants and their needs.

    Only then it will be an offer they cannot refuse.

    As for now your page is about everything and everyone in weight loss and about nothing in particular and no one really.

    If you want I can give you specific examples from your page.

    Another thing, consider playing with an amount of text and reading on your page. You want them to sign in, you don't want them to keep reading. You have to find how much writing suits your page best.

    This is something that will need to be tested. No one can really tell you how much exactly writing is good.
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    • Profile picture of the author Simohty
      Originally Posted by fulfilledlife View Post

      What is your conversion rate right now? Have you tested the squeeze page?

      I like the design of your squeeze page, but think it needs a complete copy revamp.

      You page seem to target everyone. You cannot do it, you have to choose a specific niche and go for it. People lose weight for different reasons, for example, men might want to be more healthy, but women might want to lose weight so she can wear her favorite pair of jeans and be more attractive to opposite sex.

      Or perhaps your auditory is younger people who are not worried for their health, but would like to lose weight to be accepted among others and to remove social stigma with being overweight.

      If you really want to pull high conversion numbers you have to find what your target audiences are and target them specifically.Target their wants and their needs.

      Only then it will be an offer they cannot refuse.

      As for now your page is about everything and everyone in weight loss and about nothing in particular and no one really.

      If you want I can give you specific examples from your page.

      Another thing, consider playing with an amount of text and reading on your page. You want them to sign in, you don't want them to keep reading. You have to find how much writing suits your page best.

      This is something that will need to be tested. No one can really tell you how much exactly writing is good.
      Hey

      I haven't tested the squeeze page yet i'm still working on it ... So no conversion rate at this time.

      About the targeted audience i guess you're right I thought of it in the first place then i said why not make something in general so i can target every one but i guess it's not the way it works ! Great advice

      Thanks
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      • Profile picture of the author shaunybb
        hey yes you need to be specific and focus on one thing as a general rule...I post an example headline in a bit I am just having supper
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  • Profile picture of the author shaunybb
    ok headline help!!


    So one example topic could be "eating right for health"


    So a good marketing hook (which is very important) could be :-


    "Discover These 5 Tasty Foods Which Burn Belly Fat In 14 Days or less"


    I will break this hook down for you and explain why it is good!!


    1) Words like discover, reveal, secret peak people emotions and we want to find out more.


    2) The use of numbers is compelling and specific which works very well.


    3) There are benefits in this hook "lose fat in 14 days or less"


    There you go I hope that helps
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    • Profile picture of the author Simohty
      Originally Posted by shaunybb View Post

      ok headline help!!


      So one example topic could be "eating right for health"


      So a good marketing hook (which is very important) could be :-


      "Discover These 5 Tasty Foods Which Burn Belly Fat In 14 Days or less"


      I will break this hook down for you and explain why it is good!!


      1) Words like discover, reveal, secret peak people emotions and we want to find out more.


      2) The use of numbers is compelling and specific which works very well.


      3) There are benefits in this hook "lose fat in 14 days or less"


      There you go I hope that helps

      That Helps so much duude!

      I'll try and use that topic now and combine what i have to make a nice ebook, then well see ...


      Thanks for your help, I appreciate it !
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      • Profile picture of the author shaunybb
        hey no problem its been my pleasure!
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  • Profile picture of the author johnlagoudakis
    Hi Simohty,

    I have one recommendation for you...

    ...remove the first image at the top of the page. It's not needed.
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    • Profile picture of the author Simohty
      Originally Posted by johnlagoudakis View Post

      Hi Simohty,

      I have one recommendation for you...

      ...remove the first image at the top of the page. It's not needed.
      Why ? That's the logo
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      • Profile picture of the author johnlagoudakis
        Originally Posted by Simohty View Post

        Why ? That's the logo
        Because it's taking up valuable 'attention-grabbing' real estate.

        Your logo is not necessary, especially at that spot unless you are a well-known brand.
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        • Profile picture of the author Simohty
          Originally Posted by johnlagoudakis View Post

          Because it's taking up valuable 'attention-grabbing' real estate.

          Your logo is not necessary, especially at that spot unless you are a well-known brand.
          Ok I'll will do something about it , Thanks for the advise
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          • Profile picture of the author ChrisEllgood
            You want your CTA button to stand out, not blend in with the page. Make it a different colour, classic red would probably work best.
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            • Profile picture of the author shaunybb
              hey its looking better you have made some good changes. At least you have listened to our advice thank you!!
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              • Profile picture of the author Simohty
                Originally Posted by shaunybb View Post

                hey its looking better you have made some good changes. At least you have listened to our advice thank you!!
                No! Thank you for the help , now I'm making another similar page so I can run an A/B split test and figure out which one converts better ..

                Thanks again
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                • Profile picture of the author shaunybb
                  Originally Posted by Simohty View Post

                  No! Thank you for the help , now I'm making another similar page so I can run an A/B split test and figure out which one converts better ..

                  Thanks again


                  hey this is awesome yes split test and see which one achieves a higher CTR and opt in rate!!
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  • Profile picture of the author Anoosh Kashefi
    It looks pretty good.. This thread is a few days old and it looks like you've made some nice changes..

    I like the two step optin form. Nice design..

    Bullet points could have stronger copy.. Does your target audience want more boring old "losing weight basics" or do they want to know how to "start burning belly fat within 24 hours from right now?"

    Have you sent any traffic to see how this thing converts? That's the next step..

    Hope that helps a bit,
    AK
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    • Profile picture of the author Simohty
      Originally Posted by Anoosh Kashefi View Post

      It looks pretty good.. This thread is a few days old and it looks like you've made some nice changes..

      I like the two step optin form. Nice design..

      Bullet points could have stronger copy.. Does your target audience want more boring old "losing weight basics" or do they want to know how to "start burning belly fat within 24 hours from right now?"

      Have you sent any traffic to see how this thing converts? That's the next step..

      Hope that helps a bit,
      AK
      Hi

      Thank you I'm happy you like it .
      I think you're right about the bullet Points ( nice point ) : I'll upgrade it soon !
      Thanks
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        What are you selling down the line ?
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