Please critique my logo design opening email

I've gotten back into trying to find logo design leads on Craigslist.

This is the email I like to use when replying to a post.

Greetings,
I would like to offer my design services for your new business.
I run a small business myself and I know it can be difficult to find the talent needed to make your business truly stand out. I work with owners such as yourself to create memorable logos that your customers will remember long after the sale is completed.
Please look over the attached files as examples of our high quality work. These examples illustrate a wide variety of possibilities.
I understand that design rights are important. Not only will I give you complete rights to the design but I will also provide the source files so that you can make your own edits using software such as Photoshop or Corel Draw.
Keep in mind that we can also design social media graphics such as avatars and cover photos.
If you are interested please let me know. Feel free to ask me any questions you may have.



I make small tweaks to adjust for anything unique about the original Craigslist posting.

Thanks
Dave