How to come up with good email headlines.

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I've been doing my own marketing for a good few months now and I wanted to share the benefit of my hindsight with you all, I think that it's good to test and re-test and then test some more in marketing, but having just recently stumbled upon this forum; I also think it's awesome to draw from everyone else's experience too.

Something that I've learnt through trial and error is email headlines and I think it's safe to say that I've nailed down a formula on creating the perfect headline and I wanted to share with you all.

When I first started out my headlines were a bit pathetic like 'please read me' and then I wondered why my emails weren't' getting opened!

Anyway, here are a few things that I always try and stick to and which have seen my open rate go from 15% up to 38% for the last campaign (above average for my industry!) so I hope you find this useful:

1) Create urgency:
Anything that can be followed with an exclamation point goes down well! 'Open now!' 'Last minute offer!' 'Last chance to buy!' 'Once in a lifetime opportunity etc!'

2) Play on FOMO (Fear of missing out!)
Humans are a nosy species and in general, they don't like to miss out on what everyone else is doing! Headlines such as 'join thousands' 'don't miss out' play on this and create enough intrigue which makes people want to open up and read your awesome content. It's important that you back this up with something that everyone else is doing to make yourself sound reputable of course!

3) Create connection
It's really hard to do this in just a few words but being able to tell your readers that you've listened to their feedback, or you care about them is a great way to get your emails open so you can go on to make a sale. Try 'we care about your future' or 'we listened to your suggestions' as a way to make them feel loved and wanted.

4) Keep them guessing
When people are used to seeing your name pop into their inbox they learn to gloss over your content very quickly. If a headline has worked well for you in the past by all means stay on the same theme but don't' re-use the same one. I made that mistake once and what was my highest open rate then became my lowest - the originality had gone and it also looked like I'd re-sent the same email by mistake. Schoolboy error right there!

5) Don't rush it
While coming up with a good headline is the essence of your email campaign it doesn't mean it has to be done at the beginning. I like to brainstorm a few ideas and then create the email and then go back and see what works best with the content. This also helps me to make sure I'm delivering the content that people expect form the headline.

So they're just a few things that I've discovered work for me/, and I'm interested if anyone has got any more to add to this list?
#email #good #headlines
  • Profile picture of the author kIwOk168
    These are definitely great tips, adamcurran. Just to add for those who are looking for something more quantitative. It's great to run by your headlines in the EMV Headline analyzer tool just to have a gauge how "powerful" your headline is.
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    • Profile picture of the author adamcurran
      Originally Posted by kIwOk168 View Post

      These are definitely great tips, adamcurran. Just to add for those who are looking for something more quantitative. It's great to run by your headlines in the EMV Headline analyzer tool just to have a gauge how "powerful" your headline is.
      Thanks for the great tip!
      I wasn't aware this existed so it's definitely something I'll be adding into my process from now on
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  • Profile picture of the author Tomas w
    Hi there, i just want to add, keep your headlines short and don't make false promises. Deliver what you promises in your headline.
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    • Profile picture of the author adamcurran
      Originally Posted by Tomas w View Post

      Hi there, i just want to add, keep your headlines short and don't make false promises. Deliver what you promises in your headline.
      So true isn't it!
      There's nothing worse than clicking open on an email that doesn't do what it says it's going too. Thanks for the input!
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  • Profile picture of the author sendizo
    great information. thanks for sharing.
    check those too:
    How to Write Better Headlines [Infographic]
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  • Profile picture of the author james flynn
    Originally Posted by adamcurran View Post

    I've been doing my own marketing for a good few months now and I wanted to share the benefit of my hindsight with you all, I think that it's good to test and re-test and then test some more in marketing, but having just recently stumbled upon this forum; I also think it's awesome to draw from everyone else's experience too.

    Something that I've learnt through trial and error is email headlines and I think it's safe to say that I've nailed down a formula on creating the perfect headline and I wanted to share with you all.

    When I first started out my headlines were a bit pathetic like 'please read me' and then I wondered why my emails weren't' getting opened!

    Anyway, here are a few things that I always try and stick to and which have seen my open rate go from 15% up to 38% for the last campaign (above average for my industry!) so I hope you find this useful:

    1) Create urgency:
    Anything that can be followed with an exclamation point goes down well! 'Open now!' 'Last minute offer!' 'Last chance to buy!' 'Once in a lifetime opportunity etc!'

    2) Play on FOMO (Fear of missing out!)
    Humans are a nosy species and in general, they don't like to miss out on what everyone else is doing! Headlines such as 'join thousands' 'don't miss out' play on this and create enough intrigue which makes people want to open up and read your awesome content. It's important that you back this up with something that everyone else is doing to make yourself sound reputable of course!

    3) Create connection
    It's really hard to do this in just a few words but being able to tell your readers that you've listened to their feedback, or you care about them is a great way to get your emails open so you can go on to make a sale. Try 'we care about your future' or 'we listened to your suggestions' as a way to make them feel loved and wanted.

    4) Keep them guessing
    When people are used to seeing your name pop into their inbox they learn to gloss over your content very quickly. If a headline has worked well for you in the past by all means stay on the same theme but don't' re-use the same one. I made that mistake once and what was my highest open rate then became my lowest - the originality had gone and it also looked like I'd re-sent the same email by mistake. Schoolboy error right there!

    5) Don't rush it
    While coming up with a good headline is the essence of your email campaign it doesn't mean it has to be done at the beginning. I like to brainstorm a few ideas and then create the email and then go back and see what works best with the content. This also helps me to make sure I'm delivering the content that people expect form the headline.

    So they're just a few things that I've discovered work for me/, and I'm interested if anyone has got any more to add to this list?
    Creating urgency always accelerates your sales volume because in the modern market human behaviour basically revolves around getting hands on something that is available for limited time in the market. As a matter of fact many people wait for these kind of urgent sales tag lines so that they could get hands on things that are lower then the original price. Now how you tackle situations like these depends on your skills of word choice for your advertisement.

    James
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    • Profile picture of the author adamcurran
      Originally Posted by james flynn View Post

      Creating urgency always accelerates your sales volume because in the modern market human behaviour basically revolves around getting hands on something that is available for limited time in the market. As a matter of fact many people wait for these kind of urgent sales tag lines so that they could get hands on things that are lower then the original price. Now how you tackle situations like these depends on your skills of word choice for your advertisement.

      James
      I couldn't agree more. I know that personally I will generally wait for a sale before I commit to purchase, and the reason is that things are on sale all the time. Gone are the days when sales where just once a year after Christmas! In addition to that, times going past so quickly now that even the end of season sales seems to ALWAYS be on!!
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  • Profile picture of the author MikeBestrow
    Email Marketing is Marketing after all. Same as Advertising, the first impression or first few seconds is very important.
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    • Profile picture of the author adamcurran
      Originally Posted by MikeBestrow View Post

      Email Marketing is Marketing after all. Same as Advertising, the first impression or first few seconds is very important.
      It's so true isn't it - the copy that you use can obviously make or break your campaign however aesthetically it's got to look good and be appealing enough that someone will want to go further into it. Thanks for your response!
      Cheers Ads
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  • Profile picture of the author desireedavid
    Sometimes we find it helpful to use action verbs in our headlines. Other times, we provide a very brief description of what the email is about. This helps target audiences know what they are about to open, which shows us through our open rates if this is the kind of email that they like to receive. If it has a low open rate, then we change tactics.
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