Sink or swim its all in the subject line.

13 replies
When executed correctly, email marketing is the easiest and most cost-effective form of marketing which has the highest ROI of any other form of marketing.


You've got the quality content; you've segmented your listand there's just one little thing left that you need to do get someone to read the thing!! The surest way to get someone into your content so that you can talk them into taking action is by creating a KILLER email subject line.


When the success of your emarketing campaign hangs in the balance of those few little words; what are the best ways to create an awesome subject line?


Personalise.
I'm a big advocate for putting someones first name into the email subject. It might be a bit much for some people but for me it shows that you know who you're speaking to. It's good to put this at the start of your email too but if they don't even enter then it's a wasted opportunity. I always use the first name of the recipient in the subject.


Use only the important words.
With emails being read on mobiles these days, you need to get your point across in just a few words. Write out your subject line and then go back and remove all words that aren't necessary. It still needs to make sense and shouldn't look like it's been shortened but words such as 'newsletter' are just a waste of characters.


Be emotive
It's not the easiest thing in the world to do but if you can convey emotion in your subject line you're almost guaranteed to get someone to click on the rest of your content. Whether it makes the reader happy, sad or angry; anything that stirs up their feelings is a winner.


Short list
Play around with a few ideas and let them all sit for a while as you create the rest of your content. Once you've got everything you need down in your email, it'll make it easier to come up with a relevant opener. It's important that you deliver what you say you will in your subject line to retain credibility so reverse engineering this from your content is a good way to go.


Add an action.
'LOOK' 'LISTEN' 'PAY ATTENTION' 'BUY' anything that tells someone what you want them to do is guaranteed to spark their interest and will see your open rates go through the roof; as a species, we don't like to miss out on what everyone else is doing so telling people what to do is guaranteed to make them follow the crowd!!


What are your number one tips for writing a captivating subjectline?
#line #sink #subject #swim
  • Profile picture of the author Clarence Chan
    I've always had a hard time thinking what subject line I should be using. You've helped me quite a bit but I'd love to see some examples.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[10922024].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Coby
    Personally, I don't think the subject line is the most important...

    Most folks read left to right - so they first see the sender name...

    A sender that has developed trust with the reader will get more opens - regardless of their subject lines.

    The subject line does help garner intrigue and curiosity though - but I think more effort should be put into developing the relationship rather than trying to come up with a "fancy" subject line...

    The subject might get you more opens/reads/clicks in the short term - but for long term profitability - the real value is in the relationship and trust you develop with your audience.

    Hope this helps!

    Cheers,
    Coby
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[10922087].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author tmnsky
      Any tips on good sender names that seem trustworthy if we're sending for the first time?

      Originally Posted by Coby View Post

      Personally, I don't think the subject line is the most important...

      Most folks read left to right - so they first see the sender name...

      A sender that has developed trust with the reader will get more opens - regardless of their subject lines.

      The subject line does help garner intrigue and curiosity though - but I think more effort should be put into developing the relationship rather than trying to come up with a "fancy" subject line...

      The subject might get you more opens/reads/clicks in the short term - but for long term profitability - the real value is in the relationship and trust you develop with your audience.

      Hope this helps!

      Cheers,
      Coby
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[10922420].message }}
      • Originally Posted by tmnsky View Post

        Any tips on good sender names that seem trustworthy if we're sending for the first time?
        Seems like you're already looking for a gimmick to get your emails opened and not thinking long-term.

        Really think about what you're saying here.

        Just use your own name.
        Signature
        Strong Men and Women put themselves in harms way
        for the freedoms weak people give away for safety
        {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[10922940].message }}
      • Profile picture of the author desireedavid
        I would use name@domain.com
        Signature
        “Creativity is intelligence having fun.” – Albert Einstein
        {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[10924269].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author powermta kudos
    hi tmnsky, you can use any real name. Always make sure to show your original face, if you wanna achieve highest and doing anything legal.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[10922904].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Katie Watters
    Personalize your subject line – whether that includes their first name or the company they work at.

    And also, be aware of how many recipients open your email on mobile – if you have a large number of mobile readers, the length of your subject line is something to consider.
    Signature
    B2B lead generation solutions for accelerated sales or marketing growth.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[10923597].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author tmnsky
    I feel like I remember reading a while back that female sender names convert better than male sender names?
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[10923646].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author Coby
      Originally Posted by tmnsky View Post

      Any tips on good sender names that seem trustworthy if we're sending for the first time?
      Originally Posted by tmnsky View Post

      I feel like I remember reading a while back that female sender names convert better than male sender names?
      Just use your real name or brand name - don't do anything sketchy!

      It's easier and more profitable to be yourself and show your personality rather than trying to come up with clever sender names and subject lines...

      Start building the relationship before they even opt-in - at the very least put your name somewhere they will see it - for example - after opt-in you can show them a short message like "Look for an email from Coby Wright containing your Free Gift"... "Until then check out this special offer"...

      Now, they know to look for an email from "Coby Wright", in your welcome email you can take further steps if needed to introduce yourself and make yourself memorable...

      Don't buy cold leads unless you're very experienced with mailing these type of leads. Just build a list organically - in the end it will be worth so much more!

      Hope this helps!

      Cheers,
      Coby
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[10924137].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Junaid khawaja
    The only job of a subject line is to harness curiosity. Period.

    If your email body didn't meet up to the curiosity you have just created, you lose your subscriber's trust. In a frenzy to create compelling irresistible subject lines I have seen email marketers under-valuing their email body. And this hits back hard.

    When you are not feeding the curiosity you have just created, you are enraging your prospects.

    Thanks
    Junaid
    Signature

    I am conducting 5 FREE copy consultations till New Year...Jump onto my bandwagon while you still can..

    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[10923665].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author desireedavid
      The only job of a subject line is to harness curiosity. Period.
      I agree. The goal of a subject line is to get people curious enough that they would want to read the rest of what you're about to say.

      'LOOK' 'LISTEN' 'PAY ATTENTION' 'BUY'
      However, we normally avoid the word "BUY" in our subject lines. Most users tend to get turned off when they realize from the subject line that the end goal here is to make a sale. We want them to get hooked on our offer, not turn them off before they even find out what we have in store for them.
      Signature
      “Creativity is intelligence having fun.” – Albert Einstein
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[10924621].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Randy McLean
    I think about subject lines that got me curious and led me to open the email.

    If they worked on me, chances are they will work for others. I keep a swipe file.

    Questions are good too. An example would be "What's your problem?" And then tie that in with your marketing message.

    I just hate the really shady subject lines that get opens but end up pissing people off. Stuff like "You Just Made a Commission!"

    I agree with Coby too. The more value you give and share with your subscribers the more opens you will get.

    "Man cannot live on subject lines alone."
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[10940764].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Zoe_21
    Originally Posted by mattsuth View Post

    What are your number one tips for writing a captivating subjectline?
    Start with the end result/purpose (get a click) and write content that leads subscriber to take that action to achieve the result

    however

    I think the subject line is not first BUT second because if the last time your subscriber saw your name in their inbox, read the content thought it was nothing of value or of interest to them to take action by clicking any links in your email, then they wont be looking at any subject line with your followups because are thinking it will be similar content to previous So either delete straightaway or ignore and delete later in bulk with others

    How many followups do you get and barely glance at the subject line because you just know that anything from XXXX is worth opening, reading and clicking?

    Heck...

    sometimes I see certain names in the FROM box, open then scroll for the click without even reading the email content!
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[10941430].message }}

Trending Topics