Building a list... I'm failing

I just clicked on the link and I have no idea what you're offering. You need to make it clear exactly what I'll get for entering my email. And get rid of the background pic - it's a huge distraction.


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What is the download? A free ebook? A video? An email course?

Your opt-in page should say exactly what the freebie is and the BENEFITS I'll get from it. Somebody really needs to know WHY they should download it. What's in it for them?

Plus as Frank said, the background is distracting. What does it have to do with your offer?

I just changed it up.. any better? Thanks for the suggestions

FYI - There is a forum dedicated to list building...

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Email marketing, building distribution lists, maximizing open & click through rates, email deliverability, autoresponders, transactional emails, email triggers.

I found the exit pop took ages to load for me.

Who cares if it has pictures? Do you really believe that statement is going to create desire in the hearts of a person wanting to learn how to make money?

Your first line is good. I like the "Become a Facebook Marketing Beast"

Try swapping the second line to something more like "7 Secrets to Making Money With Facebook" or some similar line that continues to build interest and intrigue.

Test a different image, one with you in it. Test without an image.

Test with different text in your button. Download Now may work perfectly, but something like "Click To Get It Free" might work better.

Test moving the button under the email box.

Test different colors. I usually suggest not obscuring your message with so much color. Your page reeks of blue distraction. (My opinion, not a tested fact.)

You are going to have to play with it. It will get you some results now, but it can be much, much better.


P.S. I just clicked off your page and now am really curious. If you are going to use an exit pop, make sure you offer an incentive to go back, or better yet...offer the incentive and sign-up form in the exit pop.

First, never test with 500 clicks when you have new opt-in page. I would test with 100 clicks first and scale up from there.

To be honest, your landing page needs a lot of work. I would just use leadpages and make a custom landing page that grabs your attention.

Another thing you should do is ask the Solo Ad vendor how they built their list and what kind of offers have they experienced.

Beautifully said Ben!

The whole "beast" thing might be turning people off.

If I were looking for preworkout supplements, then I would be looking for something that turns me into a beast. Facebook marketing, on the other hand, doesn't really get me ready to go into beast mode.

I would test different headlines and see if something else works better.

I think it needs something more as well. I thought it was too simple & didn't have enough benefits from adding your email address. I just made mine yesterday & added 5 benefits from joining above my YouTube video that explains how it works with the affiliate link below it.

I have read that solid backgrounds (preferably white) seem to work best and try using some quotations. Try a split test with something completely different. Your domain name just screams typical get rich quick schemes which is nothing new.

EDIT: Maybe it's just me but your exit redirect seems to be really slow as well.

Have you tried to buy solos from a different vendor?

I see a lot of opinions here and I cannot say I agree or disagree but what some people say works for some and for some it doesn't.

Personally I have the most success with just writing a little bit to create enough curiousity for the visitor to see what's on the other side. NOT to state exactly what is inside and so on.

I am using the exact same template as you do for some of my Squeeze pages btw. Epic Squeeze and it works for me perfect 40 to 50% Opt-In rates every time so I know that it is nothing wrong with the page. And yes I am using background pictures as well.

Unfortunately if you got a bad vendor that could be the answer to the low Opt-Ins.

PM if you need some help.

Regards,
Sven

I don't give a darn how "bad" your squeeze page was. You should've gotten more than a 1% conversion. That is very strange!

I know how to do a redirect on exit but how do you randomize the offer it goes it?

Try testing a different squeeze page as well as a different solo ad provider. I suspect that the problem lies with your solo ad provider. Also never run a test ad with 500 clicks. Try 100 clicks with a new solo ad provider. But the key is to not let this discourage you. Do not give up.

William Gilreath

The first thing you need to do is to make sure where your traffic is coming from , some sellers will deliver traffic from countries not even speaking english, the second thing is to use a simple targeted squeeze page. what people want from you isn't a a beautiful painting to staire at , but a useful information that can be used in their business.

Bassem

Could be landing page and/or solo ad vendor. For one your landing page not providing any curiosity, and whats like added benefit for opting in for this free ebook. Ask the solo ad vendor what type methods they using to get their traffic. They could be sending you bad traffic as well. I would try use solo ad vendors with a lot of positive reviews and testimonials and start off with a smaller amount when testing like 50 to 100 clicks.