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Underground Incomes

by Leo McMackin
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#incomes #underground
  • Profile picture of the author RyanCoisson
    Hey Leo,

    I would look at buying some templates for squeeze pages that would help you a ton. Here are some quick things though:

    -Change the site color (white text area and maybe a light gray background or just the whole thing white)
    -Change the text color to black
    -Have a much stronger headline and header area. You need to capture my attention so I can start reading your bullet points
    -Make the bullet points more specific and usuable ( example: How to Make $100 a Day Using Twitter) make them real not hype
    -have a better call to action for the option
    -try only capturing the email instead of name and email
    -Maybe test having a video
    -I would change the hand/arrow thing to hand drawn arrow

    That should be a start. After that if you want I can look at it again for you. Good luck
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