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My 2nd E-book Review, Come one come all!

by TomVa
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OK folks I redid my ebook from all the help and hints from my first thread asking about my ebook being reviewed. So here it is, please review my book and let me know what you really think! Thank you.
Tom

EDIT: I redid as asked, hope it looks better and easier to read!
#2nd #ebook #review
  • Profile picture of the author Dennis Wagoner
    Hiya Tom,

    I found the content informative, but I think you need to break up some of your paragraphs. They are chunked into huge blocks which IMO make it difficult to read easily and keep my place.

    Usually I can read very quickly, but the formatting of the text bogged me down. I suspect others may have the same problem.

    Also, I'd appreciate the sub section headings to be set apart in a more obvious fashion... and while you're in there, knock out the typos.

    Hope this helps,
    Dennis
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    • Profile picture of the author TomVa
      Originally Posted by Dennis Wagoner View Post

      Hiya Tom,

      I found the content informative, but I think you need to break up some of your paragraphs. They are chunked into huge blocks which IMO make it difficult to read easily and keep my place.

      Usually I can read very quickly, but the formatting of the text bogged me down. I suspect others may have the same problem.

      Also, I'd appreciate the sub section headings to be set apart in a more obvious fashion... and while you're in there, knock out the typos.

      Hope this helps,
      Dennis
      Hi thank you so much, About the paragraphs they are broken up in word but when I convert it to pdf that's what it gives me I'll look for more typos as well. Thanks again. I'll fig it out where it's going wrong in the conversion.
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  • Profile picture of the author Maryerh
    I just glanced through your book but I think it would be more helpful to divide into benefits and put the recipes in chapters that pertain to that benefit.
    For example to lose weight: Juice recipes when to drink it, how much.
    Energy drinks: pick me ups for everyday, when you need an added boost.
    Photos of the drink might be excellent. Maybe I mixed but did you do a review of different types of juicers and benefits of each.
    Hope that helps. Best of luck to you.
    Mary
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