Would you buy anything from?

by TG12
4 replies
Would you buy anything from my site?

DHV Delivery Systems

Honest opinions needed
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  • Profile picture of the author dokuroc
    i would like some more details of what you trying to sell as i dident quite get it from your site but from what i seen i wont buy any thing from you as im the guy who needs the professional and clean design why wont you try a different wp them?
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  • Profile picture of the author tknoppe
    I agree with dokuroc not immediately clear what you are offering for sale. Also, your text is too small and does not contrast enough against the background - so make the text larger and darker so it's easier to read.

    Then, add some copy in there giving more details about what services/products you offer. I would make the titles above each product stand out more (red color would be good, and larger font). Give more details below each product in bullet points, and even a link to an individual page for each product/service will full details. Each product on it's own page also makes it easy for you to SEO that page and target a specific relevant keyword phrase.

    Pictures are nice too - something to draw the eye to each items you are offering.
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    Traci Knoppe, OBM, Launch & Project Manager
    Your Web Tech Team

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