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Please Review Long Sales Page...

by onefreekiwinz
2 replies
Be honest...

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Thanx to all who do review this site.

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  • Profile picture of the author hama4live
    I checked it out.
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  • Profile picture of the author Craig Fenton
    Hi Gary:

    Good luck with the project. I checked out the site (good work) and would ask you check one thing that may be wrong grammatically. "Blows gasket" may be "Blows the gasket."

    It isn't the end of the world and as a professional writer I know if you look long and hard enough you can find errors almost everywhere. There are some people even if you offer a product for 1 cent that takes a spelling or grammar error as not having cared enough about the product or site.

    Once you find out if I am correct you can fix it in 2 seconds.

    Good luck and have a great day!

    Blows gasket
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