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Could you please give me some Feedback?

by 100k
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Hey, I recently started a sales thread (link to sales thread) and I have had very few leads and even fewer sales.


I would love to hear what people think of my landing page/my sales thread and my service/price in general.


Thanks a lot in advance for your time, tips and feedback.


John
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    Morning Bump.
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  • Profile picture of the author asiancasanova
    Well, the thread is quite screwed. Why is it overlapping on the normal settings of WF? You should try and fix that before anything else.
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    • Profile picture of the author 100k
      Originally Posted by asiancasanova View Post

      Well, the thread is quite screwed. Why is it overlapping on the normal settings of WF? You should try and fix that before anything else.
      The image is a bit too big for this forum. But it fits perfectly on other forums.

      Edit: I have fixed it.
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  • Profile picture of the author DemiWallis
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    I like your sales thread. I think it is well written and it contains the important information that anyone who wants to know more about this is looking for. I wish you all the best and I hope that will have more success with your sales.
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    • Profile picture of the author 100k
      Originally Posted by DemiWallis View Post

      I like your sales thread. I think it is well written and it contains the important information that anyone who wants to know more about this is looking for. I wish you all the best and I hope that will have more success with your sales.
      Thanks a lot for the support!

      Any other advice guys?? Are my prices too high?? I mean, im selling content by Real Americans/ Real Brits. Not this "india" english or "filiopino" english stuff others are selling for $3.
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    4.30 AM Bump.
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    • Profile picture of the author LeadGenie
      There is a typo on the 34th txt line down below the YOU P*** OF YOUR VISITORS TOO! line
      ( I am not talking bad about the offer just pointing out a literal spelling correction that needs to be made.)
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      • Profile picture of the author RyanWasHere
        I don't want to be rude but, frankly, how can you expect to help someone "sell" his website while you yourself is having trouble selling your product? You are supposed to be the experts to help others earn money online.

        Oh and yeah, $50 article is a bit too high looking at the sample articles you showed in your site.
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        • Profile picture of the author 100k
          Originally Posted by RyanWasHere View Post

          I don't want to be rude but, frankly, how can you expect to help someone "sell" his website while you yourself is having trouble selling your product? You are supposed to be the experts to help others earn money online.

          Oh and yeah, $50 article is a bit too high looking at the sample articles you showed in your site.
          Thanks for the feedback.

          Well, my product is a article writing service. I am not a service.

          My point is, if you want to make sure your site does not get hit by Google updates then you must upload quality content to your site's and to your web 2.0s and any site that is linking to you.

          Correlation = causation ?

          You would have a valid point if, for example, I was selling SEO services and I then made a post asking people how to do on page SEO or some other SEO related task.

          However I don't feel that's the case here. We can all learn from each other and I am sure you are good at some things and there are something you are not so good at.

          You think $10 is a lot for a 500 word article written by Someone from the UK or US.

          What do you feel is a fair price?

          Care to tell me what you found to be wrong with the articles in particular?

          Maybe its just because of the formatting that it does not sit right with you?
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