anth.elias

I am very bad at copy, I had a friend write the copy for my membership site, but I want to add a free section, to grab visitors that don't want to sign up for the paid area, and I'm using the Butterfly Marketing script 2.0 for the free section, which was a breeze to install.

Now I am basically stumped, I don't know what to say on the home page of the free section to get visitors to sign up.

The paid site is MRR and PLR, and I have products that a can offer in the free section that will are also be PLR but mainly just Resale Rights.

All you great copywriters out there would you be willing to give me a nice headline like "Who Else Want To"or "Discover" and a nice little paragraph to invoke visitors to sign up for the free membership now that they have passed on the paid, and when they sign up for the free I will hit them once with OTO.

I know that I am asking for a lot but I would really appreciate the help

Thanks!

Loren Woirhaye

If I'm not mistaken you've just asked for something for nothing...
so you can get something from people - money.

Does not compute.

anth.elias

Not sure what you meant by that. Please explain.

AlbertF

I believe he means that if you want a professional to make a sales page, then you got to have money, but in this case you are looking for a free sales page generator that I don't really know much about.

BrianMcLeod

Funny thread...

Here I thought the OP was looking for free sales page generator SOFTWARE.

Turns out he wants a HUMAN sales page generator for free...

Deceptive advertising!

anth.elias

lol..I guess that's what it turned it to be... I didn't mean it to turn out that way..when I typed the headline for the post I really did mean that I was looking for a software type sales page generator, but as I continued to type it turned into a request for a headline from a guru copy writer. Was it asking for too much?..I didn't really want a sales page just a headline and may be a small paragraph..a couple of sentences...and it would not have been just for me..since there are many others that will read this post..so it would have benefited the entire forum.

I may not have a billion posts but I think that I have a helped couple of people here...It never hurts to help.

So forgive me if I have offended any guru copywriters..

BrianMcLeod

Is it asking too much for your customers to expect free access to your products? You sell PLR packages, copywriters sell words.

Your customers don't want much, just a user name and password to download some digital bits...

C/mon man. Now you're getting schmaltzy. If I write you a headline, the money doesn't go to the forum, does it?

It is what it is. You suck at and/or hate writing copy and were hoping you could get somebody to write you something good without having to pay for it. Fine.

But you'd have to be almost TRYING not to get it to be surprised if people who write for a living ridicule your request.

I wasn't offended, I was amused.

You'll find that plenty of people here get exactly what you wanted by approaching it differently. That's all...

Good luck,

Brian

anth.elias

That's exactly what they are getting free access to my products as I said in my post, I paid for the products but they also come with giveaway rights-there are lots of sites that gave a away free digital products just search Google.

Yes, absolutely you can have a user name and password and you can download all you want...off of my time creating the site and uploading the products adding graphics and a description for each one.

schmaltzy - effusively or insincerely emotional; "a bathetic novel"; "maudlin expressions of sympathy"; "mushy effusiveness"; "a schmaltzy song"; "sentimental soap operas"; "slushy poetry"

Check your dictionary that doesn't apply in this conversation.

Yes, that is why I asked for a headline and couple of paragraphs-read my read first post again.

Don't know what you meant by that exactly but nothing was hidden in my request.

Don't how to approach in differently it was a simple request for a headline and a couple of paragraphs.

Thanks for your feedback..I ended up writing my own copy..it wasn't so hard just had to practice a little.

anth.elias

Oh by the way your site that is listed first in your sig is awesome love the copy, don't be surprised if I buy your book.