I need Som Reviews (PuhLEEEEASE!!!)

I visited your page and will give you a few short, honest observations:

1. The name: Internet Marketing Samurai - Samurai Pack

It's long and a bit confusing. Why is Samurai in the name twice? What is the "pack"?

Also, if I were you I would be a bit worried about the name being confused with Market Samurai, another IM marketing tool. They might claim that you have infringed on their trademark. Then again, they might say nothing, who knows? But in my mind the two names are close enough that I would get some good legal advice about potential trademark issues.

2. I am personally very tired of the "I was once broke, living in a trailer, heavily in debt but now I am rich, own my own house, cars, and jet and I'm going to show you how to be just like me" story. Regardless of the truth of the claim, so many people have used it in their marketing of Internet products that it has become a red flag on the BS meter. I certainly don't know your story, but I am very skeptical whenever I hear this kind of claim and I assume that it's just marketing BS. I would take that part out.

3. It took me awhile to read through your narrative before I finally figured out what you were offering. I personally would like to see that up front and said in a very succinct way. Maybe inserting a one sentence description of exactly what you are offering, and put it near the top of the page, would help others. I certainly would like to see it.

4. Typically, there will be a space (white space) between paragraphs of text on an offer. Your text seems too jammed together. Whenever you do a hard return (start a new paragraph), you want to insert a line space.

Otherwise, the price seems good and the offer seems worth the price IF the content is high quality and delivers on your promises.

Good luck to you,

Steve