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I NEED WARRIORS INSIGHT? DID I DO IT RIGHT???

by Mr. Murf
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I just wanted to see if i got the e-mail squeeze page right. Getting Great Deals and Great Stuff Free at ItsaDeal.info and this is for cpa offers. I know its nothing fancy but once you enter your e-mail, I have your e-mail with getresponse then they choose the cpa offer that is on the thank you page. I was going to promote via facebook ads and youtube and any other way i can. so do i have it right? or any suggestions?
#insight #warriors
  • Profile picture of the author Mr. Murf
    can anyone tell me if this is right?
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  • Profile picture of the author JakeStatler
    You have a ton of white space at the bottom. You may want to take some of that away and keep the focus on your offer.

    It's great that you're asking a question, because people generally have a much harder time ignoring a question.

    Also, you may want to find some .png images of these apple products that have transparent backgrounds instead of white squares. This will help clean up the page as well.
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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    Why would anyone sign up?
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    • Profile picture of the author joseph7384
      Originally Posted by travlinguy View Post

      Why would anyone sign up?
      I agree, asking which one would you rather have will not get people to enter their email.
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      • Profile picture of the author rally2win
        Well, this was one sly way to get clicks, right ?

        "Get your very own" -- what? The closest to this Q was the iPad Mini.... Okay got that. What about the others - iPhone or iPad Air? Strategic use of word/phrase positioning, font sizing, text coloring, etc., could start to help your website. As previously mentioned, there are myriads of resources on effective website implementation out in the net.

        Anyway, you got traffic from me....
        R2W
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  • Profile picture of the author tudexo
    Originally Posted by MarijuanaCashCrop View Post

    I just wanted to see if i got the e-mail squeeze page right. Getting Great Deals and Great Stuff Free at ItsaDeal.info and this is for cpa offers. I know its nothing fancy but once you enter your e-mail, I have your e-mail with getresponse then they choose the cpa offer that is on the thank you page. I was going to promote via facebook ads and youtube and any other way i can. so do i have it right? or any suggestions?
    OMG I refreshed the page thinking it didn't load completely the first time, but then I realized you just have too much blank space after the call to action button. Also, the images look a bit hastily done. Just my 2 cents.
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  • Profile picture of the author drewfioravanti
    That might be the least credible squeeze page I've ever seen.
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  • Profile picture of the author smaddoxjr
    Hello,
    I do not mean any disrespect. It looks okay, you are trying and means more then someone doing nothing. I heard simple is better. So get simple.
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    Scott Maddox Jr

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