Warriors, please review my Squidoo Lens.....

nostih · 07-10-2009, 09:20 AM

Here's my lens for my first affiliate product I'm going to sell:

http://www.squidoo.com/birthday-cake-decorating-ideas

I also have three support niche Squidoos linked together along with 4 Google Knol profiles, a weebly blog and 2 Hub pages.

I am going to use article marketing and blog posting along with Social bookmarking and ezine adverts to get the traffic and sales. Some of my keywords are going to be hard to get into the top spot on Google but I can still make sales using other avenues.

My keyword for my Squid domain has 215 intitle results in Google. The Top spot is a article from EZA. So I may have a chance.

Tell me what you think?

P.s- No, I did not design it myself. I hired another Warrior, Helene, to do it.

Thanks

ThomasC · 07-10-2009, 01:06 PM

I am surprised the person who made your lens for you didnt make better use of all the keyword areas. I hate to see when people who build lenses for others don't get you all those good keyword spots filled in!
I do much better work than that!

It is well written though! I give her credit for that. The double lined module titles could use some improvements. I like to keep all module titles to just one line, gives the lens a much better look.

07-10-2009, 09:20 AM	#1
nostih HyperActive Warrior Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 460 Thanks: 316 Thanked 109 Times in 72 Posts	Warriors, please review my Squidoo Lens..... Here's my lens for my first affiliate product I'm going to sell: http://www.squidoo.com/birthday-cake-decorating-ideas I also have three support niche Squidoos linked together along with 4 Google Knol profiles, a weebly blog and 2 Hub pages. I am going to use article marketing and blog posting along with Social bookmarking and ezine adverts to get the traffic and sales. Some of my keywords are going to be hard to get into the top spot on Google but I can still make sales using other avenues. My keyword for my Squid domain has 215 intitle results in Google. The Top spot is a article from EZA. So I may have a chance. Tell me what you think? P.s- No, I did not design it myself. I hired another Warrior, Helene, to do it. Thanks
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07-10-2009, 01:06 PM	#2
ThomasC Warrior Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 8 Thanks: 1 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Warriors, please review my Squidoo Lens..... I am surprised the person who made your lens for you didnt make better use of all the keyword areas. I hate to see when people who build lenses for others don't get you all those good keyword spots filled in! I do much better work than that! It is well written though! I give her credit for that. The double lined module titles could use some improvements. I like to keep all module titles to just one line, gives the lens a much better look.
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