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Need some opinions about my website theme please

by Andrew B
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Hy ,so I have this website and I would like to know if it looks good when you enter and if you would come back to it,for me it looks preety nice but I would like to know your profesional opinion because I'm a beginner.This is the link http://becomeanalpha.com/ (it's not finished so...I just want your opinion on the theme and every advice you can give would be appreciated).Thank you very much!
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  • Profile picture of the author Tom Addams
    This is not great, I'm afraid.

    Here's what you do:

    1. Head over to Google and look for web design inspiration articles, based on your niche. You'll see well-designed websites in your niche.

    2. Make life easier and grab yourself a premium theme (Theme Forest). This does a lot of the work for you.

    As it stands, your current website won't be converting leads.

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      • Profile picture of the author Tom Addams
        Originally Posted by Andrew B View Post

        Thank you ,I would definitely do that !
        Good stuff. If you're new at IM, you've made a very good start. Yes, the website needs work, but it shows a lot of promise. And let's not forget you've taken action. Those design inspiration articles will really help. You'll get a general feel for what works well in your niche.

        Best of luck, buddy!

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  • Profile picture of the author Lightlysalted
    I'd visit Fiverr and get a website designed there.
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  • Profile picture of the author QueenMelanie
    add some colors at least.. I'd suggest getting a premium theme, something like avada, because they simplify the design process even more than the normal WP user interface.. Great idea for a site btw, would be interested in reading that when its finished
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        Sora Craft
        What do you think about this theme?me personally I like it
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        • Profile picture of the author Michael Shook
          If you are going for this market, you need something definitely male, which probably means black, dark blue, maybe green, but for sure not gray. This one is legible, which is good, but has almost no personality at all.

          You need to reduce your menu bar to a single line. Make the categories into submenus, not standalone entries on your menu bar. I am thinking your home page is going to be a static page instead of your blog and that means you need one message on the front.

          You can create all kinds of blog posts and other pages to address your secondary and tertiary keywords, but your home page needs to deliver one message only. And a very direct message - "You know you want to be an alpha male, so man up and do this . . ." or something very strongly worded along those lines.

          Don't use "relationship" photos on your page, use photos where t is obvious the man is the centerpiece of the photo.

          There's a bunch of other things you will discover as you build the personality of your site, but for sure, get rid of the grey and cut your number of choices down.
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  • Profile picture of the author EmergencyMonkey
    I read one article and noticed it was in dire need of some editing. I am not sure if that's the case throughout, but something to pay close attention to because it can cause you to lose credibility.
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    • Profile picture of the author Andrew B
      Originally Posted by EmergencyMonkey View Post

      I read one article and noticed it was in dire need of some editing. I am not sure if that's the case throughout, but something to pay close attention to because it can cause you to lose credibility.
      I know and my problem is that english is not my native language but I will go through all the articles i have and see if I spot those mistakes.thanks for the comment and the time you've spend for reading my article!
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  • Profile picture of the author turboshandy
    I like it, it's a clean design, easy on the eyes and quite pleasant overall.
    Except fora few things: the menu bar is "too much", use subcategories; also, you should align the text in the center (the 'read more' buttons are not aligned, they look unprofessional).
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  • Profile picture of the author alvinhy
    IMO there is too much going on.
    Remember this rule when designing websites: 1 page 1 goal

    The page has so much going on. You have social links that lead people AWAY from your website. (A common mistake). You want people to stay on your website so why bother including social links. Unless your website is raking a lot of traffic and you wan to grow your social media.

    The images on the front page are cut off.

    You need to let people know what your site is about at first glance. Right now its just a bunch of text. There is no "focus point"

    Go to theme forest for some inspiration.
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