[CLOSED!] Attention writers, I'm looking for 15 of you to review my new report...

Paul Hancox · 07-22-2009, 11:55 AM

Hi Folks

I've just completed a report, "Write To More Money: How To Ask For -
And Get - More Money For Your Writing".

It's been particularly written with article writers and copywriters in
mind (but most of it can also apply to ebook and other writers, and
even artists).

I'm looking for 15 people (ideally writers themselves) to review it,
and if you like it... I'd love an endorsement from you. (Also, if you
notice any mistakes or anything like that, letting me know would
be great!)

I'm hoping to launch this report as a Warrior Special Offer early next
week, so if you could review it before then, that would be great. (It's
about 90 pages in size.)

If you can do that, please let me know here... and I'll send a copy to the
first 15 to respond.

Thanks!

Doug · 07-22-2009, 12:04 PM

I would be more than happy to help you along. I have read much of your other 'stuff' and this would be a pleasure. Not to mention I can surely gain some insight for myself too.

Doug

Kat Fuschillo · 07-22-2009, 01:09 PM

Hey Paul,

I just sent you a PM.

Thanks

Kat Fuschillo

Sandi Valentine · 07-22-2009, 01:56 PM

Paul -

I'd like a chance to take a look, as well.

Sandi

Freeman77 · 07-22-2009, 02:01 PM

Paul,

I'd love to have a look too -- it sounds like a great report. I sent you a PM.

-Mike

pheonix44 · 07-22-2009, 02:11 PM

I wouldn't mind having a look at it.I sent you a PM

CDarklock · 07-22-2009, 02:13 PM

It's a fantastic report. I'm already rewriting my sales page to account for some of this, but first, I'm going to go read it again.

la dominatrix · 07-22-2009, 02:13 PM

Hi
Paul
I would love to read your ebook and give you a rtestimonoial, LOL as I writer I might even learn something. I have sent you a pm
Thanks

dsmpublishing · 07-22-2009, 02:28 PM

I will gladly do a review for you if you still need one you can pm me or email me at info@dsm-publishing.com

kind regards

sam
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Jeff Williams · 07-22-2009, 02:35 PM

Paul,

I've got time today. I'd be happy to take a look at it for you and give an honest review.

-Jeff

Paul Hancox · 07-22-2009, 02:46 PM

Holey Moley! I leave the computer for a few hours and my PM box explodes

Between that and this thread, I think I have my 15! Thanks, guys and gals... I'll send everyone up until this point a copy via PM.

Please be a little patient, since the PM system requires a 300 second wait after sending each message.

Thanks again!

TedMarlett · 07-22-2009, 02:52 PM

Paul,

Looks like thread posts are deceiving. I hope you will let me review your report.

Ldimilo · 07-22-2009, 02:55 PM

Hey Paul,

would love to take a gander and give a brief review...

John_Paduchak · 07-22-2009, 05:56 PM

I'm going to leave a note here in case you still need reviews. I'd be glad to read your report and do a review for you if you still need help. I've been really working on my writing style so it might help me in the process. Feel free to pm me if you still need a few more reviewers.

Hamish Jones · 07-22-2009, 06:02 PM

If someone pulls out, I'll happily take a look for you.

Cheers,

Hamish

Steven Fullman · 07-22-2009, 06:07 PM

Who spotted the embedded commands (and suggestions)?...

Steve

j/k - I spent a while looking, though...(all I found were forward pointers)

Paul Hancox · 07-22-2009, 06:51 PM

Steve, I've been known NOT to use that stuff... at times

Sandi Valentine · 07-22-2009, 07:02 PM

Paul -

I'm not sure what you're planning on charging for this, but as a writer, I can say that no matter the price- it's well worth it. I love how you've broken marketing psychology down into clear, concise steps that writers can follow.

I know a ton of work at home mom writers who struggle with marketing their services appropriately, and settle for working at content mills instead - have you considered promoting to the WAHM demographic (on forums, etc.)

I especially liked the "facts of life" section and the information you give about payment thresholds. Great stuff!

The only drawback I noticed was that the table of contents was a bit crowded - you might consider using Open Office to format it with hyperlinks so the reader could jump from chapter to chapter.

Sandi

Steven Fullman · 07-22-2009, 07:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Paul Hancox

Steve, I've been known NOT to use that stuff... at times

ROFL @ the reason for editing your previous post.

I'm beginning to "get it".

Now, who else does?...

In fact, by now...you'd think I ought to be an expert at this

07-22-2009, 11:55 AM	#1
Paul Hancox Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: United Kingdom Posts: 2,028 Blog Entries: 2 Thanks: 433 Thanked 554 Times in 229 Posts Social Networking	[CLOSED!] Attention writers, I'm looking for 15 of you to review my new report... Hi Folks I've just completed a report, "Write To More Money: How To Ask For - And Get - More Money For Your Writing". It's been particularly written with article writers and copywriters in mind (but most of it can also apply to ebook and other writers, and even artists). I'm looking for 15 people (ideally writers themselves) to review it, and if you like it... I'd love an endorsement from you. (Also, if you notice any mistakes or anything like that, letting me know would be great!) I'm hoping to launch this report as a Warrior Special Offer early next week, so if you could review it before then, that would be great. (It's about 90 pages in size.) If you can do that, please let me know here... and I'll send a copy to the first 15 to respond. Thanks!
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Paul Hancox Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: United Kingdom Posts: 2,028 Blog Entries: 2 Thanks: 433 Thanked 554 Times in 229 Posts Social Networking	Re: Attention writers, I'm looking for 15 of you to review my new report... Holey Moley! I leave the computer for a few hours and my PM box explodes Between that and this thread, I think I have my 15! Thanks, guys and gals... I'll send everyone up until this point a copy via PM. Please be a little patient, since the PM system requires a 300 second wait after sending each message. Thanks again!
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