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I need your suggestion(Resolved)

by mohsin815
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Look at this page: 101 health & weight loss Tips this is homepage.
you will see word "read me" at the end of every tip. This word is switch to turn on java script of gateway.(if you clicked it accidentally, reload the page to turn java script off)
I have made a post in this website at 101 health & weight loss tips | 101 health & weight loss Tips
I was thinking to change the background link of word "Read Me". I am planing to use post link(The above link) instead of switch to turn on java script of gateway. This will develop trust between me and visitor. In this way I will show my self more helpful.
whats your opinion?
#suggestion
  • Profile picture of the author Randall Magwood
    It's either they will buy from you or not. A simple change in background color for 2 words won't make the difference. There's nothing appealing to the site right now to make me download the ebook. Plus get off of the ".blogspot" blog. Get Wordpress.
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  • Profile picture of the author mohsin815
    I have locked that page.that why you were unable to download the ebook. If someone wants to download ebook that person first has to complete any offer which shows by clicking on download complete ebook.
    I am doing SEO of this blog.
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    • Profile picture of the author jpenns
      You've misunderstood. Randall is saying that the page does not make him want to download it. There are numerous issues with your page that you should worry about before the background of the links.

      Proofread it. You have many, many spelling and grammar errors.

      Better yet, get someone else to proofread it.

      Better yet, get someone else to write it. My honest feedback is that the most important thing you can do right now is work on your English skills or get someone else to write for you.

      Other issues:

      why do you have numerous links back to your own page?

      your headline font isn't great. MAGIC looks like MACIC
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  • Profile picture of the author Jeff Burritt
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    I wouldn't use the eagle pic as the homepage header. That has nothing to do with weightloss.
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  • Profile picture of the author mohsin815
    Jeff Burritt thanks buddy for the suggestion .I tried to change the image of eagle many times, The link of image is in css file of template of this website and unfortunately providers of this template hosts the css file i am unable to change it. I tried many times my making my own css file, but after applying it website looks horrible. I will try it again.
    jpenns First of all Thanks for such a good review and for pointing my errors. The post isn't written by me. I am not US/UK person so i was unable to identify the errors of paragraphs. And I used The back links of my site to index my site on that keyword, as i told i am doing SEO of this blog.
    And thanks again. Any how If I changed the material of post then is my idea going to lead me?
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