Looking from some article feedback.

Thanks. Any other feedback? Did you have questions, did you want more? What was it missing? Is this the kind of piece you would read?

Thanks for pointing these out. I'll comb through it ... I appreciate the feedback.

Great writing!

I found that after reading your article, I wanted to write my own articles differently from here on out...definitely 'transformed' my way of thinking.

Minor suggestions...

I would perhaps take out the 'Develop Supporting Ideas' section from where it is now; just include the 'Prove It Works' and the 'Testimony' subsections in that area because they directly relate to your 'Support Your Statement' section (as you mention 'proof' and 'testimony' in the paragraph directly above this section).

And, then, I would perhaps rename the 'Develop Supporting Ideas' to something like 'How to Find Ideas that Support Your Statement' or 'Tips to Develop Supporting Ideas' and make this the third section of your article.

I think that having 3 main points, instead of just 2, will help your article to flow a bit better. Sometimes, as readers we tend to expect that there will at least 3 main points in an article (or perhaps this is just a left-over from my educational background ).

Anyhoo - very well written...thanks for sharing! (And, please let me know when you are ready to share your outline and the 2nd part of this article as I am definitely interested in hearing 'the rest of the story' (as Paul Harvey would say...).