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Old 08-06-2009, 02:36 PM   #1
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Hey guys, well I have been working hard on a product of mine and I am trying to provide the best quality and most quantity tools and resources for Affiliates ever recorded on Clickbank.

Now its not about having the most to me, but having enough choice for the Affiliate, I think its important to give the affiliate flexibility and make their job as easy and simple as possible.

Thats why I have been concentrating very hard on increasing the amount of affiliate resources on my product affiliate page.

I would like you to take a look and tell me what else I could add; this is not about advertising my aff page or anything else other than what I am asking here.

I just want constructive criticism, if you think I could add some more health related links to certain websites, some more text, less text, longer page, shorter page, more banners, less banners, a picture of a naked girl with my product name on her bra, whatever just tell me.

Here is the page;

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Just for future reference, we are creating a blueprint guide for how to make a sale with our product which will also be provided on the affiliate page. It should be done in a couple of days.

Anyways, yeah feedback, criticisms?

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Old 08-06-2009, 02:42 PM   #2
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Looks pretty good. Just a small thing though. I would change the color of your buttons that go to the various sections. Currently, they all look like they are disabled. Also just a personal preference of mine, but I'm not sure I like everything on one page. Seems a little troublesome to navigate around.
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Old 08-06-2009, 02:59 PM   #3
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I agree that the buttons look like they're disabled. Yes they work but the color just makes the look like they're disabled. And personally, it's a bit much for me. Nice layout though and nice templates!
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OK guys thank you very much up to now, I appreciate this a lot. I shall change the buttons soon to be honest I had noticed that too but thought it might of been my monitor making them look light.

I have also considered making more than one page but I think it will make things confusing and more effort for the affiliates involved.

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I love it!

One of the most comprehensive affiliate support pages I've seen in a long time all in one place.

Great job!

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Old 08-06-2009, 04:51 PM   #6
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Thanks Dean, very glad you like the page, I am trying my best to fill it with everything affiliates need to promote and sell the product.

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Old 08-07-2009, 10:20 AM   #7
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OK everyone, I have updated this page now added some different text and corrected all the punctuation errors I could find. I am also working on the navigation at the moment, and the button colours.

I have also added more links to relevant places of promotion.

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Old 08-07-2009, 11:08 AM   #8
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Overall (subject to the comments already made about the buttons), I think it's about the best-looking Affiliate Page I've seen.

Willyboy, when I looked at this a day or two ago, did I see a lead-capture connected to a video-course, which you've now removed from the site? Or have I mixed this up with someone else's product? (The reason I ask is simply that as a potential affiliate, as is true for many Warriors of course, an opt-in on the sales site would cross it off my list of "products to be investigated further", but if that's gone and not coming back, that's a whole different ball-game!).

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Old 08-07-2009, 11:14 AM   #9
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VERY impressive...

Page bookmarked for later reference

I will also PM you about this.

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Looks great, best I have seen in ages.

The only problem is now I have to scrap the one I was working on for my project and start again.

You can really go off people real quick.

But honestly is really good and looks like a project in itself.


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Overall (subject to the comments already made about the buttons), I think it's about the best-looking Affiliate Page I've seen.

Willyboy, when I looked at this a day or two ago, did I see a lead-capture connected to a video-course, which you've now removed from the site? Or have I mixed this up with someone else's product? (The reason I ask is simply that as a potential affiliate, as is true for many Warriors of course, an opt-in on the sales site would cross it off my list of "products to be investigated further", but if that's gone and not coming back, that's a whole different ball-game!).
Hello Alexa, thank you for your comments its great to hear that people like the affiliate page as this is the idea.

Nope that wasn't me sorry, I have never put a lead-capture on the website, I hate publishers who expect affiliates to bring in the traffic then exploit this by adding a lead capture which makes the affiliates job worthless if they don't convert in to a sale.

I definitely agree with you there Alexa, thanks.

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VERY impressive...

Page bookmarked for later reference

I will also PM you about this.

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Looks great, best I have seen in ages.

The only problem is now I have to scrap the one I was working on for my project and start again.

You can really go off people real quick.

But honestly is really good and looks like a project in itself.


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Ha Gregg, thanks very much. I apologise very much for making you not like me =(

You can use mine as a template for your own and just add to it.

Thanks everyone

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I have never put a lead-capture on the website, I hate publishers who expect affiliates to bring in the traffic then exploit this by adding a lead capture which makes the affiliates job worthless if they don't convert in to a sale.
Thanks very much for clarifying, and apologies for the confusion there (I must have seen the "video-course lead capture" on something different at about the same time - sorry!).

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Old 08-09-2009, 10:40 AM   #13
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No problems Alexa, thanks for your comments.

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This is an excellent affiliate page.

I might have missed it, but I could not see a rebrandable PDF - a short report that ties into your product and that an affiliate can rebrand to have their own affiliate links in the report.

Helps the affiliate presell, and can become viral for more exposure.

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This is an excellent affiliate page.

I might have missed it, but I could not see a rebrandable PDF - a short report that ties into your product and that an affiliate can rebrand to have their own affiliate links in the report.

Helps the affiliate presell, and can become viral for more exposure.
Very good idea, thank you for this.

So you mean a report on the product for customers?

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No sorry, I was a bit vague.

Take for example the Sit Stay Fetch (now called Secrets To Dog Training) product. Their product is on how to train dogs. However, they have a rebrandable report on 5 dog training myths.

So not a report on your product, but a short report on the problem you are addressing. So for instance, a report on 5 migraine myths, then in the report you can link to your migraine solution. Just make sure the report presells the solution.

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No sorry, I was a bit vague.

Take for example the Sit Stay Fetch (now called Secrets To Dog Training) product. Their product is on how to train dogs. However, they have a rebrandable report on 5 dog training myths.

So not a report on your product, but a short report on the problem you are addressing. So for instance, a report on 5 migraine myths, then in the report you can link to your migraine solution. Just make sure the report presells the solution.

Hope that makes sense?
I see OK, yeah I like the idea.

I shall have a look about creating a book over the next few days and add it to the affiliate resources

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Looks terrific. If anything, I'd worry about too many choices confusing them - but you obviously put a lot of work into it. God job!

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Very good! To bad more people don't provide that level of support for their affiliates. By the way I bookmarked your article site list. Best I've seen.

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Very awesome affiliate centre, one of the best I've seen. You make it sooo easy I'm just going to have to try to send some sales your way.

Did you do that yourself or did you outsource, if so how much do you or they charge for a similar setup, I have several affiliate areas needing work badly.

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Very good affiliate resources.I haven't seen such an affiliate page before.

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Hi,

Very impressive affiliate promotional tools.

Your information about the target audience is very useful to affiliates and in my view should be right at the top of the resource list. It's one of the pre-requisites in direct marketing. Very good idea.

If affiliates know the ideal customer profile (before adding landing pages, articles, text & banner ads, etc) to their sites, they will send a higher quality of traffic.

I also think that the affiliate resource page would be better if it was on several pages as long as the pages are inter-linked. This is because the resource page is extra long and affiliates will be scrolling up and down to find the tools they are looking for.

For example, you can have a menu on the left or right hand side (and above the fold) for each section. It won't be as confusing as you think.

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Thank you everyone,

@Wordpro I shall take a look at the sentence structure today, something I should of thought about.

@Salespectus good point to make about the target audience box, I may shuffle these around or at least make it clearer that the information is down below, perhaps add some more links or something.

I have had several people say it would be better on seperate pages but I am still not sure, it would make affiliates do more clicking but I suppose if I make the page any longer people will be needing new mice because their scroll buttons will be broken.

Thank you everyone up to now, I am writing all this down so I have a good to-do list.

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Buttons are the only criticism.

On the other hand, the page concept is awesome and you've really taken the time to create an awesome affiliate center.

Really wish you the best of luck with this and if you can't make money with THAT then there's something sadly wrong with your marketing... bravo, man!

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Bumping this one back up, after tweaking it and using the suggestions.

Thank you CGA, the buttons are a little annoying but I have some darker buttons ready to be uploaded now, just a different shade.

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