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I need feedback with my writing..please

by aaronmckeehan
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I am not sure if I posted this is the right Forum, or if the Copywriting would be the right Forum.

I have been writing blog posts and have slowly enhanced my writing style. I would appreciate some feedback on my writing/post/sentence/headline structure, and if I could make them better.

I hated English throughout school, which was a mistake apparently...

The posts I try to do are more "educational" than "salesy", but I am slowly getting more comfortable with writing "salesy" posts.

I am honestly not trying to get views here. I would really like to know how to do better.

Also are there any good books on this that you would recommend?

Here is the first blog I write for: https://www.paradigmrpa.com/blog/

The other is here, I have been writing posts since August 20th: ADVENTURESS | goAdventuress
#feedback #writingplease
  • Profile picture of the author Raydal
    Here are two highly recommended resources on writing:

    On Writing Well by William Zinsser
    The Elements of Style by Strunk & White

    And you should also add a book on editing.

    You don't have to be good at English to be an interesting writer.

    -Ray Edwards
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