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What should i add to my website

by cjsparacino123
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So i finally created my website YourMusicMarketer.com and i wanted a second opinion on it.. Im going to get my copy skills up so thats a first, also im going to make it long copy.. I think its pretty solid, its generating some traffic on its own, i would like to do some more of that as well..

Ideally i would like to make it a big sales letter.. Although im unsure how that will generate long term traffic
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  • Profile picture of the author positivenegative
    Poorly laid out, poor images, and poor copy. It's lacking real direction and the call to action at the end for $99 is a joke. My advice to you is first and foremost get the services of a good copywriter. Then redesign the site accordingly.

    Your $99 package should be something visitors actually want to buy - after you've enticed them with top quality copy about your services and what you can do for them, not something you throw at them following a few dull paragraphs of puff and huge images that are totally unnecessary.
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  • Profile picture of the author Gambino
    I agree with you. The copy is terrible. It's a lot of "we want to"... "our goal is"... etc. When is should be "we've done this" and HERE ARE THE RESULTS. I'd locate a few people and help them for free and get rave testimonials then come back and say, we did this for them and we'll do it for you.
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  • Profile picture of the author tdadkins
    I agree with the last couple posts. The copy is not very inspiring, certainly not enough not make me want to buy a 99$ package. And getting some testimonials is always good, but I would hope they would come from a band that is atleast a little successful lol
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  • Profile picture of the author superowid
    Just a little suggestion... Use video!

    You're in music industry... long copy text never works! Trust me! Even there is... it's very rare! But videos do!

    So... use video... and more videos!
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  • Profile picture of the author Platt
    I don't think long copy will work that well on a website, especially when you are just starting it.
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  • Profile picture of the author Cheechee
    Originally Posted by cjsparacino123 View Post

    So i finally created my website YourMusicMarketer.com and i wanted a second opinion on it.. Im going to get my copy skills up so thats a first, also im going to make it long copy.. I think its pretty solid, its generating some traffic on its own, i would like to do some more of that as well..

    Ideally i would like to make it a big sales letter.. Although im unsure how that will generate long term traffic
    You say it is getting traffic on its own. You will get quite a few hits from spiders and other kinds of bots by the way. Maybe you already know that but I just thought I would mention it because sometimes people think they are getting visitors when they are not.
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  • Profile picture of the author Randall Magwood
    It needs a major remodel. And longer sales copy doesn't increase traffic. It may retain traffic for a *little* longer, but it wont be the cause of you getting more new traffic. Plus you need to capture leads for your offer. I would turn your homepage into a squeeze page, offer something for free, redo the sales page, then sell your leads via your email newsletter.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ashwaniseo
    I agree, if you want more advice than must contact to brainmine
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  • Profile picture of the author Regional Warrior
    You could just repost here , where the people live and think websites!!

    https://www.warriorforum.com/website-design/
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  • Profile picture of the author welshgirl2
    Hello

    Firstly, well done on getting started - a lot of people with ideas don't even get that far.

    My first impressions when visiting the website is that it's a little boring. It needs a little colour, and a nice logo. The images are also boring they need a little pizazz. A little of the right colours can excite and entice potential customers when visiting your website.

    I also agree on the use of a video at the top of your website especially for the music industry. A lot of people insterested in this niche like to watch and listen rather than read long copy.

    Hope this helps a bit.

    Clare
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  • Profile picture of the author allegandro
    I can't feel/see the connection between the sailboats on the bacground and the service you sell.
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  • Profile picture of the author Asadullah72
    Inadequately laid out, poor pictures, and poor duplicate. It's deficient with regards to genuine course and the suggestion to take action toward the end for $99 is a joke. My recommendation to you is above all else get the administrations of a decent marketing specialist. At that point upgrade the site appropriately.

    Your $99 bundle ought to be something guests really need to purchase - after you've tempted them with top quality duplicate about your administrations and what you can accomplish for them, not something you toss at them taking after a couple dull sections of puff and colossal pictures that are absolutely pointless.
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  • Profile picture of the author jogunn
    I think rewriting your copy and adding in high-quality graphics, pictures and a promotional video (if possible) would go a long way for you. Don't give up, get into touch with someone that can help you redesign and work your site over.

    Thoroughly develop your brand and create a logo accordingly. Get involved on social media to help drive traffic back to your site to hopefully purchase your services. You could really benefit from having a strong presence on Instagram and YouTube.

    Hope this helps!
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