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Okay , I just finished my blog and sales page ..... This is my first ever sales page by the way and product... tell me what you think and some suggestions please , thanks ![]() Niche Superhero - the salespage the blog - Niche Strategy Tips - Harness The Power Of Niche Marketing And Become A Super Affiliate! |
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Haha, except for the headache-creating background, I love them. The background has a nice tone to them... EXCEPT... not with all the circles and such. Everything else is really nice and looks great though. I'm only attracted to it because I'm a major geek. Comics, games, movies, you name it... Been there. So I like it a lot. Perfect theme in my opinion for people like me.
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lol thanks .... i tried to make the salespage short and to the point
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Any way you could change the backgrounds though? =D I'm still kinda dizzy from it. =(
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what would be the best move now on promoting the blog and sales page ?
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I like it too, but just needs to be toned down a little, lol. I'm not sure how to keep the design and tone it down. That's a big project :P Anyway, for promoting, I would say.. Submit it to every search engine you can. Go forum to forum and do the "secret advertising". Like some people you see on this site "please review my site" instead of paying the $20 to advertise their products. (No offense). Use the tiny buttons under your posts for social bookmarking. Furl, de.icio.us, technorati, and digg. Those are usually the best ones. If you have accounts with social networking sites, like MySpace, Twitter, etc, those are good places to advertise too. Especially when you have LOTS of friends. I would definitely stick with the theme if you're going to fully advertise. Just like you did on the site. Start the topic with something like "It's a Bird! It's a Plane!" that you used. I really like that, lol. |
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I like the bg, it adds to the animation/comic effect
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Adwords is one of those things that just speeds up the process of your site being found. | |
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Not bad! how many pages is the ebook. Mike |
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WOW!! Very creative idea to create a product based on the superhero concept. But I'm not convinced to pay $47 for that product. I need more explanation on how I'll benefit from it. My 2c.. |
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I like the way the site looks. Think adwords would be a waste of time. The competition in that market is pretty tough and bid prices are even tougher. I would try ezinearticles or maybe offline traffic to start.
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Sales page looks pretty cool but a little cheesy. It also could be longer. It's tempting to go short and to the point, but I dont think that works very well. You have to convince someone to open their wallet and spend 50 bucks. Thats not easy to do. You should have more specifics and testimonials. I wouldn't pay for it the way it is.
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Anyway, @buckz, just take some screenshots of your ebook like ebiz suggested. It could look better for other people on this site too =) | |
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great looking site....i wish i can get my site up...how long did it take you to do? did you write the ebook yourself? and what software did you use to make it? congrads on the site |
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What would kick that into gear is some visuals in comic book form. If you had a few different places with a comic book look like: ![]() I think some shots with your character like that would look pretty cool. Probably like 3 of them.... Maybe telling a story and a frame like a comic book...like above.. sprinkled in...that followed along with the story/plot. Ending with a hard sales pitch. |
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Because they want to PROOF it!! Certainly it'll help to persuade more customers. | |
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Except, now that I think about it... It may also drive people away. Like serious people. They'll look at it and think they ended up on the wrong site. It could be a good idea in a certain area, but I wouldn't go too far with it. | |
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This is one of those...it will sell it like crazy or flop over dead... | |
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gredat job man. Leave it like it is, tweak later, no promote the basterd.
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