English Isn't My First Language, Which One Is Correct?

robson9776 · 08-17-2009, 01:09 AM

Dear warriors,

I need your help to choose which sentence is the correct one, since English is not my first language. these are my sentences :

1. One-Stop Technical Solutions for Internet Marketers
2. One-Stop Technical Solutions for Internet Marketer
3. One-Stop Technical Solution for Internet Marketers
4. One-Stop Technical Solution for Internet Marketer

thanks!

David McGimpsey · 08-17-2009, 01:17 AM

This one is correct:

1. One-Stop Technical Solutions for Internet Marketers

If there is only one solution, then you can use 3. with the addition of *A*:

3. A One-Stop Technical Solution for Internet Marketers

Jeff Henshaw · 08-17-2009, 05:18 PM

Both 1 and 3 are ok, depending on whether you are offering MORE than one technical solution to MORE than one marketer (use number 1), or whether you are offering ONLY one technical solution to MORE than one marketer (use number 3).

The addition of the letter A at the beginning of number 3 is recommended, as already posted.

NOW!

If you have MORE than one solution and you want to aim at the "Internet Marketer" (singular not plural), then number 2 is ok, but add in the bold below:

One-Stop Technical Solutions for the Internet Marketer.

If you ONLY have one solution, and you want to aim at the "Internet Marketer" (singular not plural), then number 4 is ok, but add in the bold below:

A One-Stop Technical Solution for the Internet Marketer.

I hope that this helps, but if you are still unsure, please feel free to PM me.

Regards,

Jeff Henshaw.

RB Riddick · 08-17-2009, 06:12 PM

Hi Robson,

#1 is the best if you have more than one solution. If not, choose #3.

Riddick

tabatha santiago · 08-17-2009, 08:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by David McGimpsey

This one is correct:

1. One-Stop Technical Solutions for Internet Marketers

If there is only one solution, then you can use 3. with the addition of *A*:

3. A One-Stop Technical Solution for Internet Marketers

He said it best! =)

Paul Ho · 08-17-2009, 08:56 PM

The first one is correct and sounds the nicest..

1. One-Stop Technical Solutions for Internet Marketers

MustafaKamal · 08-17-2009, 11:40 PM

I find it intriguing that one can actually develop to learn English at the same time, Internet Marketing, once they're in this 'scene'.

emofree123 · 08-18-2009, 12:00 AM

I'll go for no. 1. Good luck to you.

Rudolph McDonald · 08-18-2009, 12:34 AM

No. 1 is correct. Just don't forget to add S for the Marketers, even if you use solution without S.

JohnHuizinga · 08-18-2009, 05:21 AM

Like Jeff said, 1 and 3 are correct as is. 2 and 4 can be made correct with the addition of the word "the" as in "the internet marketer".
And of course the other question to ask yourself is whether you have one solution or more than one to offer. This is what determines whether you use "solution" or "solutions".

silotiko · 08-18-2009, 06:25 AM

#1 reads the best and sounds smooth as well, I concur with the other Warriors also that if you did decide on #3 then it would require the word "A" at the beginning of the sentence.

Sandor Verebi · 08-18-2009, 11:21 AM

Hi Robson,

I'm not a professor but I feel that Jeff's explanation carry off the palm. Variations are depending on your aim.

It is praiseworthy that you show interest in the correct grammar. Keep it up!

Many successes,

Sandor
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-- TW · 08-18-2009, 11:44 AM

If it is a headline (or a tagline), you do NOT have to add the "A" at the beginning of #3. Headlines do not have to be grammatically correct sentences. Just look at any newspaper and you'll see that is true.

08-17-2009, 01:17 AM	#2
David McGimpsey HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Osaka, Japan Posts: 324 Thanks: 127 Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: English Isn't My First Language, Which One Is Correct? This one is correct: 1. One-Stop Technical Solutions for Internet Marketers If there is only one solution, then you can use 3. with the addition of A: 3. A One-Stop Technical Solution for Internet Marketers
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08-17-2009, 05:18 PM	#3
Jeff Henshaw Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: South Wales, UK. Posts: 670 Thanks: 34 Thanked 48 Times in 37 Posts	Re: English Isn't My First Language, Which One Is Correct? Both 1 and 3 are ok, depending on whether you are offering MORE than one technical solution to MORE than one marketer (use number 1), or whether you are offering ONLY one technical solution to MORE than one marketer (use number 3). The addition of the letter A at the beginning of number 3 is recommended, as already posted. NOW! If you have MORE than one solution and you want to aim at the "Internet Marketer" (singular not plural), then number 2 is ok, but add in the bold below: One-Stop Technical Solutions for the Internet Marketer. If you ONLY have one solution, and you want to aim at the "Internet Marketer" (singular not plural), then number 4 is ok, but add in the bold below: A One-Stop Technical Solution for the Internet Marketer. I hope that this helps, but if you are still unsure, please feel free to PM me. Regards, Jeff Henshaw.
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08-17-2009, 06:12 PM	#4
RB Riddick Furyan Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Helion Prime Posts: 18 Thanks: 33 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Re: English Isn't My First Language, Which One Is Correct? Hi Robson, #1 is the best if you have more than one solution. If not, choose #3. Riddick

08-17-2009, 08:56 PM	#6
Paul Ho HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Planet Earth Posts: 128 Thanks: 9 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts	Re: English Isn't My First Language, Which One Is Correct? The first one is correct and sounds the nicest.. 1. One-Stop Technical Solutions for Internet Marketers

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MustafaKamal Internet Lifestyle Coach War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: The little red dot. Posts: 255 Thanks: 8 Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: English Isn't My First Language, Which One Is Correct? I find it intriguing that one can actually develop to learn English at the same time, Internet Marketing, once they're in this 'scene'.

08-17-2009, 01:09 AM	#1
robson9776 HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Jakarta, Indonesia Posts: 135 Thanks: 5 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts	English Isn't My First Language, Which One Is Correct? Dear warriors, I need your help to choose which sentence is the correct one, since English is not my first language. these are my sentences : 1. One-Stop Technical Solutions for Internet Marketers 2. One-Stop Technical Solutions for Internet Marketer 3. One-Stop Technical Solution for Internet Marketers 4. One-Stop Technical Solution for Internet Marketer thanks!

08-18-2009, 12:00 AM	#8
emofree123 Warrior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: English Isn't My First Language, Which One Is Correct? I'll go for no. 1. Good luck to you.

08-18-2009, 12:34 AM	#9
Rudolph McDonald Warrior Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: USA Posts: 18 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Social Networking	Re: English Isn't My First Language, Which One Is Correct? No. 1 is correct. Just don't forget to add S for the Marketers, even if you use solution without S.
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08-18-2009, 05:21 AM	#10
JohnHuizinga IM White Belt Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: , Ontario, Canada. Posts: 107 Thanks: 48 Thanked 16 Times in 12 Posts	Re: English Isn't My First Language, Which One Is Correct? Like Jeff said, 1 and 3 are correct as is. 2 and 4 can be made correct with the addition of the word "the" as in "the internet marketer". And of course the other question to ask yourself is whether you have one solution or more than one to offer. This is what determines whether you use "solution" or "solutions".
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08-18-2009, 06:25 AM	#11
silotiko Active Warrior War Room Member Join Date: May 2008 Location: Tigard, Oregon, USA. Posts: 33 Thanks: 1 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: English Isn't My First Language, Which One Is Correct? #1 reads the best and sounds smooth as well, I concur with the other Warriors also that if you did decide on #3 then it would require the word "A" at the beginning of the sentence.

08-18-2009, 11:21 AM	#12
Sandor Verebi Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Szolnok, Hungary. Posts: 803 Thanks: 74 Thanked 38 Times in 32 Posts	Re: English Isn't My First Language, Which One Is Correct? Hi Robson, I'm not a professor but I feel that Jeff's explanation carry off the palm. Variations are depending on your aim. It is praiseworthy that you show interest in the correct grammar. Keep it up! Many successes, Sandor _________ “Learning is not child's play; we cannot learn without pain.”Aristotle

08-18-2009, 11:44 AM	#13
-- TW Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: , , . Posts: 585 Thanks: 53 Thanked 32 Times in 25 Posts	Re: English Isn't My First Language, Which One Is Correct? If it is a headline (or a tagline), you do NOT have to add the "A" at the beginning of #3. Headlines do not have to be grammatically correct sentences. Just look at any newspaper and you'll see that is true.