A Most Burning Question

CaptainKirk · 08-20-2009, 07:32 AM

I've been kicking around an idea for this eBook with a friend who is an attorney and from those ideas we created an Ask Campaign which you can see here -

Houses For Sale

Before investing in Adwords I would be grateful for a double check for typos and some feedback on how I may wish to approach this market without getting clobbered by the cost of keywords in this market.

Oh, and if this subject resonates with you I'd love to get your question too!

Many Thanks,

Kirk

marciayudkin · 08-20-2009, 07:55 AM

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the rules for protecting yourself are the same regardless of which country you live or invest in,

You lost all credibility in my eyes with that statement.

Laws differ significantly from state to state, so how you can claim they don't differ across the world is beyond me. Unless you're actually talking about things other than legal matters. Then everything gets into a muddle. In that case, why would it be relevant to tell the reader you (i.e. the letter writer) are an attorney?

Good luck to you!

Marcia Yudkin

CaptainKirk · 08-20-2009, 08:34 AM

Thanks Marcia,

Very Interesting point that I hadn't considered, especially if it makes you lose all credibility in me.

Truth is the rules for protecting yourself are the same regardless of where in the world you are, despite the fact that the laws will be different. The rules are things such as Due Diligence, Having the appropriate protective contracts looked over by an attorney in your jurisdiction, having proper exit clauses in your contracts, etc.

So what you have made me realise is that this is not being conveyed, and actually may be clouded by the fact that my friend (Shan) who I have written the copy for, is an attorney,and presents herself as one...

Ah, so many things to watch out for when working to build trust online!

CaptainKirk · 08-20-2009, 08:37 AM

Thanks Tousif,

I'm copywriting for Shan, but I'm gonna give her access to this thread so that she can share in the thoughts first hand

08-20-2009, 07:32 AM	#1
CaptainKirk HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: , , . Posts: 152 Thanks: 36 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	A Most Burning Question I've been kicking around an idea for this eBook with a friend who is an attorney and from those ideas we created an Ask Campaign which you can see here - Houses For Sale Before investing in Adwords I would be grateful for a double check for typos and some feedback on how I may wish to approach this market without getting clobbered by the cost of keywords in this market. Oh, and if this subject resonates with you I'd love to get your question too! Many Thanks, Kirk

08-20-2009, 08:34 AM	#3
CaptainKirk HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: , , . Posts: 152 Thanks: 36 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: A Most Burning Question Thanks Marcia, Very Interesting point that I hadn't considered, especially if it makes you lose all credibility in me. Truth is the rules for protecting yourself are the same regardless of where in the world you are, despite the fact that the laws will be different. The rules are things such as Due Diligence, Having the appropriate protective contracts looked over by an attorney in your jurisdiction, having proper exit clauses in your contracts, etc. So what you have made me realise is that this is not being conveyed, and actually may be clouded by the fact that my friend (Shan) who I have written the copy for, is an attorney,and presents herself as one... Ah, so many things to watch out for when working to build trust online!

08-20-2009, 08:37 AM	#4
CaptainKirk HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: , , . Posts: 152 Thanks: 36 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: A Most Burning Question Thanks Tousif, I'm copywriting for Shan, but I'm gonna give her access to this thread so that she can share in the thoughts first hand