Done this video on saturday if you can feedback to me Thank you

markshields · 08-20-2009, 10:57 AM

Hi I would like your feedback on my video which I shot last saturday in loch lomond

I am not 100 percent sure if I can post this link to it at

YouTube - Loch Lomond With Residual Income...

However I couldnt seem to find a way to embed the video directly like some have

If I have broken a rule I do apologies and wont do it again but please dont ban me or anything.

Thank you

kingofjames · 08-20-2009, 11:01 AM

Vdeo is too long. The game is quick. If it takes more than 30 seconds you have got to capture my attention. When I look down and see 7 minutes.......I move on...

Good Luck.

markshields · 08-20-2009, 11:04 AM

Thanking you for your feedback, did you play the video tho to see the content to make a decision based on that?

rosetrees · 08-20-2009, 12:12 PM

errrrmmm - it's a holiday video. What are you asking?

Desmond Ong · 08-20-2009, 12:18 PM

I actually enjoy watching this video, Mark.

I live in Asia and it's not everyday we get to see such scenery. (ours are like tropical islands, rainforest bla bla bla)

By the way, what's that background song? it's awesome!

markshields · 08-20-2009, 12:20 PM

That song desmond is Runrig The Bonny Banks Of Loch Lomond, and thank you for your kind feedback on the video, much appreciated

Mr McDonald · 08-20-2009, 12:39 PM

Nice sites but don't really get what your point is?

Mukul Verma · 08-20-2009, 12:48 PM

Really nice video, great scenery.

I could not figure out what the video had to do with coaching. First I thought it was a travel video to visit Loch Lomond, Scottland. I looked at your You Tube Video and saw from the text it has to do with marketing.

A few suggestions
1. Break it into more shorter videos (maybe 7 videos focusing on different people)
2. Put your website address right on the video
3. Keep the video clear and to the point.

Now after that video you may have some Warriors coming to Loch Lomond, Scotland to visit

markshields · 08-20-2009, 02:36 PM

Thanking you for your feedback already, much appreciated

Jim Phillips · 08-20-2009, 03:16 PM

Hi Mark,

I'm glad my wife hasn't seen this video.

She loves Scotland. I'm sure she would like another sightseeing tour.

I would edit it. It is pretty long. I agree with Mukul, break it up into a group of video's. Brand your site with a watermark on each video. Paint a picture of what action you want the viewers to take next.

Best Regards,

Jim

markshields · 08-20-2009, 04:09 PM

Thanking everyone for the great feedback on the video so far, looking forward to more if possible :-)

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