Need Help With Video Squeeze Page Please...

[havplenty]

Hey Warriors,

I am giving the video squeeze page a go and would like some feedback.

What do you guys think of the video, do you think it is good enough to induce optins?

Link To The Squeeze Page

Thanks guys,

Hav

[MasonRamm]

Hi Hav,

Great job on video, it looks and sounds good enough to get optins
(infact it made me sign up to checkout your free report
however the only real way to know is by driving some traffic to it/
testing it and tracking your results.

Best Regards,
Mason

[Anonymous Affiliate]

My honest feedback:

1) the music feels awkward to me, like not fitting the video theme.

2) you offer no content on the video whatsoever. It's just "blah blah" without actually engaging your audience with any meat. I personally only opt-in when I am offered something worth disclosing my email.

[wisecrone333]

Hi there,

I just watched it and I loved the whole idea - the music was actually more exciting and inclined me more to action than listening to someone else chat on for twenty minutes - I just think the presentation could have been just a few seconds longer so that the music you were playing (which is a favorite of mine anyway) actually finished on a natural note rather than just cutting off.

Also signed up for the report but the form took me to a page not found - thought you might like to know - let me know when it is working again and I will go back on and sign up

Great stuff
Lisa

[winebuddy]

good message but I thought the music was downbeat instead of upbeat.

I want to be pumped UP and motivated to fill in that form NOW!

[theimdude]

Personal opinion good idea but the video just stops with no real meaning to it. That house is also a normal online pic you can get anywhere and so is the rest.

I am about to start do a video on a cat niche I want to sell. My daughter a cat lower is going to make a video for me with her cat which I think will have a good optin/sales rate.

What you offer you should show the people results rather that just slides.
Make it more personal

[AndrewStark]

Hi Hav

The actual layout is great, but you don't really have that hook that makes me want to opt-in. If you're target audience is the newbie who just gives out their email for "shiny things" then you'll get results, but for anyone with experience it's too generic, as I don't know what I will get for opting in, eg is it a report, audio, video?

I agree that a short personal video explaing who you are, and what your offer is would be better, but again it all comes down to testing, and what type of traffic you're using.

[havplenty]

Guys, thanks all so much for your feedback on the squeeze page. I am going to get work right away on this.

Cheers guys,

Hav

[jammer_jaminski]

Hav -

I think its a nice page & video. I thought the music finished strong. Making it more personal, with an audio voice over would probably convert better.

The grey bar at the top of the page that says "Quick Money Shop Presents" I dont think adds any value to the page, and it could be bad from a few angles. Quick Money as a phrase may turn some off, but more than that I think from a design prospective it causes your video to be that much lower down on the page. If you killed the grey bar, you can bring the video up a bit, and have your form sidebar line up at the bottom with the video player, that would look better from a design standpoint.

I would also venture to say with some bullet points or sub headings offering a bit more you could convert better too.

[Nat Jackson]

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