My Landing Page

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Hi everyone,

I was wondering if you could me some advice. I started a PPC campaign with a weight loss product Stripthatfat. I put my own story on the lander. My campaign has a good click through rate - and the majority of visitors who go to my lander click through to the merchant page..however after 200 or so clicks I have had no sales.

I changed my lander page because I thought it was too spammy and made it look more genuine but now I am thinking something is wrong.

This is one of them:

Lose Weight After Pregnancy

and i have another with same photos for lose tummy fat.

Am I just too skinny? (even though I lost weight with this) Should I be doing something different to get people to buy? I keep tweaking but I dont know what to do now. I feel like I am missing something.

Thanks for your help. I really appreciate it. I just so want to achieve some success with PPC and have been working hard.

Obviously its enticing enough for them to look at the stripthatfat merchant page so what is preventing them from buying?

Thanks again,

#internet marketing #landing #page
  • Profile picture of the author xmx
    Hi Kelly,

    I took a quick look at your page and the advice I can give you is to limit the number of products reviewed to 2 or 3.
    With 5 products the visitor has too many choices and could also be confused about wich product to buy and end not buying at all or bookmarking the main sites and go there on a different moment perhaps from the direct link and having removed cookies from the browser.
    With only 2 products reviewed it could convert more visitors into direct buyers.

  • Profile picture of the author MarcusXavier
    you definitely want to clean up the site. no offense, but it looks very cluttered.

    the personal story was a nice, but a bit long.

    you absolutely MUST start capturing emails! build a list. the fat loss niche is one that is competitive, but extremely lucrative. if you don't build a list, you are losing out on a TON of money.
  • Profile picture of the author Tuzic

    it needs more colour & text, that sort of thing, it justs needs alittle oomph to make it look more appealing to the reader, other than that i liked it.
  • Profile picture of the author Samster
    Since you have a good click through rate it is probably the vendor’s page that is the problem. First as stated earlier the pop-up on the site is distracting. Secondly, there is a lot of information on that page which can discourage people from going further.
    • Profile picture of the author keyaziz
      Hey Samster,

      Thanks for the advice..I guess I trusted it because its Wealthy Affiliate seems to be selling well. Maybe I will rethink my product promotion then...

      Thanks again.
  • Profile picture of the author VinceNouvel
    One more... Don't use baby blue on your text.. it looks really bright and annoying on some monitor... The second one is so much better.

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