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I just recevied the set of articles from the writer and I'm not happy with the quality of the articles.
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Here is one of the article from him. I did not edit anything.
This article I supposed use for Word Press Blog/About Me Page.(supposed explain who am I and why I made the site.)
About Me Page- Female Teen
Hi there, I used to be a bubbly and vivacious young girl, much to the adoration of the masses which of cause made me a very happy girl. However, this happiness proved to be short lived.
This premature happiness lasted only through my prepubescent days before troubles spelled. Still etched vividly in my mind, I clearly remember that it was scorching hot and humid on that very day and to make matters worse, I was late for school. Fast forward to the frame where I'm in the bus, sweating excessively, revelling in the air-condition, oblivious to the discomfort I was causing to the commuters. It was only after this dude came up to me and screamed, for #$%@ sake, get yourself some deodorant. This is when it finally dawned on me that there wasn't anyone in my metre radius. They were actually more willing to squeeze into one corner than catch the slightest sniff of me. The rest is history.
It is only after hours of scouring online that I came across stop sweating and start living. After reading its countless reviews online, I bought it without hesitation and truth behold, never in my wildest dreams did I believe I could regain my usual confident self that quickly. From diet tips to the various treatments revealed, stop sweating and start living was more than a bargain and before I realise, I successfully corrected this deficit of mine which once haunted my early teenage years.
Please let me know what do you think of it.
Here is one of the article from him. I did not edit anything.
This article I supposed use for Word Press Blog/About Me Page.(supposed explain who am I and why I made the site.)
About Me Page- Female Teen
Hi there, I used to be a bubbly and vivacious young girl, much to the adoration of the masses which of cause made me a very happy girl. However, this happiness proved to be short lived.
This premature happiness lasted only through my prepubescent days before troubles spelled. Still etched vividly in my mind, I clearly remember that it was scorching hot and humid on that very day and to make matters worse, I was late for school. Fast forward to the frame where I'm in the bus, sweating excessively, revelling in the air-condition, oblivious to the discomfort I was causing to the commuters. It was only after this dude came up to me and screamed, for #$%@ sake, get yourself some deodorant. This is when it finally dawned on me that there wasn't anyone in my metre radius. They were actually more willing to squeeze into one corner than catch the slightest sniff of me. The rest is history.
It is only after hours of scouring online that I came across stop sweating and start living. After reading its countless reviews online, I bought it without hesitation and truth behold, never in my wildest dreams did I believe I could regain my usual confident self that quickly. From diet tips to the various treatments revealed, stop sweating and start living was more than a bargain and before I realise, I successfully corrected this deficit of mine which once haunted my early teenage years.
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