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09-02-2009, 07:04 PM
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| Active Warrior Join Date: May 2008 Location: , , Canada.
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|  Looking for Your Critique of Opt-In Page: AbMyths.com
Hiho Warriors! Looking for comments/critiques/(commendations?) of my first ever opt-in page. I offer subscribers: - a short, useful outline of three main details of the book I'm marketing as an affiliate. - a free 55 page guide (also a sneak peek inside the main book). - concise, useful info ~ once a week by email. My own photo is there ... a little on the ridiculous side, I know. I don't have another ready ... thought maybe it's not that bad. Site is: :: AbMyths.com : #1 Way to 6-Pack Abs and More... All comments much appreciated! Scott |
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09-02-2009, 09:05 PM
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| Flyin' Low & Slow War Room Member  Join Date: Nov 2008
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| Re: Looking for Your Critique of Opt-In Page: AbMyths.com
Just a thought... I had to stop reading because of the red background. |
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09-02-2009, 09:06 PM
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| Re: Looking for Your Critique of Opt-In Page: AbMyths.com
put opt in above the fold aswell
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09-03-2009, 08:39 AM
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| Active Warrior Join Date: May 2008 Location: , , Canada.
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| Re: Looking for Your Critique of Opt-In Page: AbMyths.com
Great comments! I made the suggested changes.. hope someone else might take a peek at it! http://www.AbMyths.com Thanks! Scott |
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09-03-2009, 10:43 AM
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| Re: Looking for Your Critique of Opt-In Page: AbMyths.com
Hey there, Lots of people are selling this stuff. You must tell them what makes you different then everyone else. Sure, the results are rock solid abs, but tell them something that they don’t know. Tell them on the Squeeze Page one of you so called Secrets. I wouldn’t use the word Secret though. It’s like beating a dead horse. Everyone knows there is no Secret to anything. Everything has been re-written. Jimmy. |
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