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which headline sounds better? - Need your opinion.

by Networking_now
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Need everybodys opinion (especially copywriters), on which one of these sentence sounds better (more appealing) to the common customer:


which of these example heading sounds sounds better(from the following 2)-

5 ways to improve your confidence

or

Learn 5 ways to improve your confidence

?
#heading #opinion #sentence
  • Profile picture of the author Shawn Mason
    Revealed! 5 Easy Ways To Become More Confident.

    Discover 5 Simple Tricks To Become More Confident.

    pick some good ones and split test them you never know till you try it
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  • Profile picture of the author Dee Scofield
    No offense, but both your titles are a little ho-hum to me. Shawn's got the right idea. You need to spice them up a little to make them interesting enough for people to want to click through.

    Can _____ Really Improve Your Confidence?
    5 Simple Mind Tricks to Improve Your Confidence

    The possibilities are endless. And just because there are five bullet points in the article don't feel like you have to use it in the title. The point is to hook the reader with an interesting but relevant title.
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  • Profile picture of the author yoliferdi
    I Was Shy But Now I Become More Confident With Only 5 Ways

    Revealed! 5 Secrets Famous People Use to Become More Confident

    I'll Tell You How I Improve My Confidence With 5 Easy Ways


    Sorry I'm not a good copywriter. Just trying to give more choice. The simple way to test your headline is ask your friends.
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  • Profile picture of the author tommygunn
    Sorry, neither of the original two draw my attention very well. However, I would lean more towards the one with the "Learn" in the beginning I think. Are they quick or easy ways? I might go for learn 5 quick and easy ways to improve your confidence. Even then I may not want to see learn at the beginning.
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    • Profile picture of the author Networking_now
      Originally Posted by tommygunn View Post

      Sorry, neither of the original two draw my attention very well. However, I would lean more towards the one with the "Learn" in the beginning I think. Are they quick or easy ways? I might go for learn 5 quick and easy ways to improve your confidence. Even then I may not want to see learn at the beginning.
      thanks for the honesty, they were just examples lol, but i was just generally asking if a word such as learn, discover etc sounds better, than 'without' using it.

      good advice people
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  • Profile picture of the author Shawn Mason
    Honestly, if you're headline fails to establish some curiosity it will most likely fail.

    discover (discover what?)
    revealed (what is revealed?)
    secret tricks (secrets?)

    That's why these words are so overused in headlines, because they do well to establish instant curiosity.

    hope that helps
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  • Profile picture of the author CliveG
    I don't think that most people want to "learn" - perhaps it reminds them of school. They want "secrets" for example.

    Your copy needs to evoke EMOTION (learn does not do that for most people).
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    "Discover the 5 Quick and Easy Steps to Unstoppable Confidence Guaranteed!"
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        Smash Through The Barriers To Self Confidence In the Next 30 Seconds

        I want it now and I don't want to learn or take all day..I am busy man
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      • Profile picture of the author Blaz Banic
        How about:

        "Give me 10 minutes and I'll build you an unstoppable confidence... in just 5 easy steps"

        or

        "If you can imagine a pink elephant, then you too can attain an unstoppable confidence in my proven 5 easy steps"

        Something from the top of my head. The matrices used are from proven to work headlines.

        Hope this gives you an idea or two.
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        • Profile picture of the author Networking_now
          Originally Posted by Blaz Banic View Post

          How about:

          "Give me 10 minutes and I'll build you an unstoppable confidence... in just 5 easy steps"

          or

          "If you can imagine a pink elephant, then you too can attain an unstoppable confidence in my proven 5 easy steps"

          Something from the top of my head. The matrices used are from proven to work headlines.

          Hope this gives you an idea or two.
          Its been 12 minutes, and i stil havnt built any,
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    • Profile picture of the author Regional Warrior
      Originally Posted by DougBarger View Post

      "Discover the 5 Quick and Easy Steps to Unstoppable Confidence Guaranteed!"
      Bingo perfect
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