Any tips for PHOTO of self on squeeze page?

saleswriter101 · 09-08-2009, 06:37 PM

Hi Warrior,

Having a personal identity on a squeeze page can increase trust and sign-ups, right?

The photo on my page (:: AbMyths.com : Easiest Way to Six-Pack Abs, Defined Muscle, Oodles of Energy & Vibrant Health...) is a little too silly, I think.

*** Do you have any suggestions for composing a better one? ***

Thx!
Scott

ps: General comments on page also very welcome!

BrianMcLeod · 09-08-2009, 06:46 PM

Hi Scott,

I think you already know the answer here...

That photo is RIDICULOUS for a fitness product.

You're better off with just your signature.

Personal blog? Ok... maybe.

Fitness product? No.

Good luck,

Brian

christftw · 09-08-2009, 06:47 PM

That pic doesn't fit your page at all IMO. Looking at the two pics to the left of your photo makes you look like you shouldn't be selling this product. I think you could possibly make yourself look strong and confident (never seen you otherwise though), but you're... er... costume doesn't convey that message.

Then again I suppose you knew that :P I can't really give better advice than remove the costume, look more confident (may fall in with removing the costume), and try striking a pose that puts your head closer to your arms/chest (like sitting on 1 leg with arm resting on leg?), flexing your arm muscles a bit (not obviously in your face/etc.), with good back posture.

If possible, you could "ask" a fitness photographer's opinion. I don't know how expensive they are, but there's gotta be some free info on taking pictures of people for purposes like this floating around the 'net.

Hope I helped a bit

darktemplar · 09-08-2009, 06:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BrianMcLeod

Hi Scott,

I think you already know the answer here...

That photo is RIDICULOUS for a fitness product.

You're better off with just your signature.

Personal blog? Ok... maybe.

Fitness product? No.

Good luck,

Brian

Agreed. As someone who used to be, and is still addicted to working out after a previous battle with being really fat for years, that picture is RIDICULOUS. At least in terms of marketing that as your IMAGE associated with your fitness product. It's something that should stay on Facebook. I'd stick with just a signature man, or maybe if you're really toned you could put a picture of yourself up posing. Maybe you could look on http://www.bodybuilding.com for ideas. Good luck!

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katiec · 09-08-2009, 07:02 PM

Yikes! Bad choice on photo friend.

The sooner you get that off, the better.

As far as a replacement, I'd go for a picture of your face...or even a stock photo if you want to go that route, but not what you have. No-no!

shirland · 09-08-2009, 07:33 PM

You already knew the answer to the question. When I look your site, I would not have confidence in you based on your picture. The other part of your premise comes across well. Definitely lose the picture and put a more serious picture on your site.

Kezz · 09-08-2009, 08:32 PM

If at present you're not sporting the six pack you're promoting, how about an action shot? Chuck on a tracksuit, hand your camera to a friend, and get them to take a snap of you jogging from about 5 meters away or something.

Then, you like like your walking the talk (or running it) and given that you'll be moving and a little far away, you won't have to worry too much about posing or getting the perfect shot.

saleswriter101 · 09-08-2009, 11:12 PM

Thanks everyone!

I've removed the photo for now (anyone who want's to see it can look to http://www.abmyths.com/sjphoto.jpg).

I'll work on a new one based on the helpful advice given above.

In case anyone wants to offer general comments on the squeeze page: :: AbMyths.com : Easiest Way to Six-Pack Abs, Defined Muscle, Oodles of Energy & Vibrant Health... .

Thanks again! WF rules!
Scott

Michael Taylor · 09-09-2009, 12:10 AM

That pic would be good on a landing page selling Elton John CDs, though.

actionplanbiz · 09-09-2009, 12:21 AM

how about a Black and white before and and a Color picture after?

although its typical. its because it works

Lance K · 09-09-2009, 12:29 AM

After a quick glance, here are a couple of thoughts...

Your copy isn't compelling enough.

You don't have a good enough "bribe" to entice maximum opt-ins.

Your submit button is too plain. (make it bigger, change the text, etc.)

09-08-2009, 06:37 PM	#1
saleswriter101 Active Warrior Join Date: May 2008 Location: , , Canada. Posts: 53 Thanks: 67 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	Any tips for PHOTO of self on squeeze page? Hi Warrior, Having a personal identity on a squeeze page can increase trust and sign-ups, right? The photo on my page (:: AbMyths.com : Easiest Way to Six-Pack Abs, Defined Muscle, Oodles of Energy & Vibrant Health...) is a little too silly, I think. * Do you have any suggestions for composing a better one? * Thx! Scott ps: General comments on page also very welcome!

09-08-2009, 06:46 PM	#2
BrianMcLeod Fingers of Fury War Room Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Miami, Florida, USA. Posts: 2,114 Blog Entries: 5 Thanks: 1,289 Thanked 1,488 Times in 639 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Any tips for PHOTO of self on squeeze page? Hi Scott, I think you already know the answer here... That photo is RIDICULOUS for a fitness product. You're better off with just your signature. Personal blog? Ok... maybe. Fitness product? No. Good luck, Brian
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09-08-2009, 06:47 PM	#3
christftw Jesse Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 33 Thanks: 63 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts	Re: Any tips for PHOTO of self on squeeze page? That pic doesn't fit your page at all IMO. Looking at the two pics to the left of your photo makes you look like you shouldn't be selling this product. I think you could possibly make yourself look strong and confident (never seen you otherwise though), but you're... er... costume doesn't convey that message. Then again I suppose you knew that :P I can't really give better advice than remove the costume, look more confident (may fall in with removing the costume), and try striking a pose that puts your head closer to your arms/chest (like sitting on 1 leg with arm resting on leg?), flexing your arm muscles a bit (not obviously in your face/etc.), with good back posture. If possible, you could "ask" a fitness photographer's opinion. I don't know how expensive they are, but there's gotta be some free info on taking pictures of people for purposes like this floating around the 'net. Hope I helped a bit

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shirland Inner Power Revealer Join Date: May 2009 Location: Florida Posts: 56 Thanks: 18 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Any tips for PHOTO of self on squeeze page? You already knew the answer to the question. When I look your site, I would not have confidence in you based on your picture. The other part of your premise comes across well. Definitely lose the picture and put a more serious picture on your site.
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Kezz Kezz Bracey War Room Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Australia Posts: 1,291 Blog Entries: 5 Thanks: 323 Thanked 599 Times in 291 Posts	Re: Any tips for PHOTO of self on squeeze page? If at present you're not sporting the six pack you're promoting, how about an action shot? Chuck on a tracksuit, hand your camera to a friend, and get them to take a snap of you jogging from about 5 meters away or something. Then, you like like your walking the talk (or running it) and given that you'll be moving and a little far away, you won't have to worry too much about posing or getting the perfect shot.
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09-08-2009, 11:12 PM	#8
saleswriter101 Active Warrior Join Date: May 2008 Location: , , Canada. Posts: 53 Thanks: 67 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	Re: Any tips for PHOTO of self on squeeze page? Thanks everyone! I've removed the photo for now (anyone who want's to see it can look to http://www.abmyths.com/sjphoto.jpg). I'll work on a new one based on the helpful advice given above. In case anyone wants to offer general comments on the squeeze page: :: AbMyths.com : Easiest Way to Six-Pack Abs, Defined Muscle, Oodles of Energy & Vibrant Health... . Thanks again! WF rules! Scott

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Lance K Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: USA Posts: 3,866 Thanks: 1,435 Thanked 646 Times in 405 Posts Contact Info	Re: Any tips for PHOTO of self on squeeze page? After a quick glance, here are a couple of thoughts... Your copy isn't compelling enough. You don't have a good enough "bribe" to entice maximum opt-ins. Your submit button is too plain. (make it bigger, change the text, etc.)
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