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David Allen

15 years ago

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rosterling 15 years ago

Hard to believe you had to pay money for that. And, you can actually rewrite it?!
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Bryan Zimmerman 15 years ago

Load it up and blast it out and use it for link juice back to a site you actually want to rank for. Won't get you any traffic, but it will get you a few high PR rank links back to site that will get you some money
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Sean Ski

15 years ago

The second part doesn't even make sense; the person just continually repeats how acne is bad, you don't want it but get it in puberty...

What a joke... I think you'd be doing everyone a service by giving the company's name away so no one else gets screwed.

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George Wright

15 years ago

Discrat,

You promised me you wouldn't let the other Warriors know I was ghost writing for you. Never more again I will never write for $1 an article. Just someone else get.

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aquablue 15 years ago

Careful, George. Discrat might want to cook an egg onto your face.
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- discrat 15 years ago
  
  hehehehe............Yeah, I actually did pay for it. But the funny thing is I had 20 other Niche Articles from this Company written for me in this batch ( Outside the Acne Niche Articles )and they were all satisfactory work. Not 'Authority Blog' type of work but nonetheless satisfactory !! And I am a pretty decent Writer so I am not too bummed.
  
  But honestly just a little miffed by the quality of work for these Acne Articles. It is unbelievable to me how such a inept Writer could fall through the cracks of an otherwise fairly reputable Article Company !
  
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Raydal

15 years ago

Looks like SE robot juice to me and not for human consumption.

If that's what you paid for then well and dandy, but if not you
know where NOT to go next time.

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15 years ago

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Stephen Crooks 15 years ago

Please tell me you didn't pay for that piece of s**t..
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billaaa777

15 years ago

That was funny. But, the truth of the matter is you paid for a $3 article and you got a $3 article. If you paid $10 you would of received a $10 article, but you didn't.

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discrat

15 years ago

Originally Posted by billaaa777

That was funny. But, the truth of the matter is you paid for a $3 article and you got a $3 article. If you paid $10 you would of received a $10 article, but you didn't.

The Truth of the matter is I didnt pay $3 an Article like you just so naively assumed for some reason unbeknown to me. And actually ,as I have said, 20 out of the 25 Articles were satisfactory work.

Contrary to what you just said , it was less than $3 an Article I paid!!

And being a Writer myself those 20 out of 25 Articles were ACTUALLY better than some of the $10 Articles I have come across !!

My suggestion to you next time is to not make assumptions on what you THINK is the TRUTH !!

It will serve you better in the future.

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Dan C. Rinnert 15 years ago

Originally Posted by billaaa777

That was funny. But, the truth of the matter is you paid for a $3 article and you got a $3 article.

I disagree. He didn't get a $3 article; he got $3 worth of text. If those excerpts are any indication, what he received cannot be described as an article. Not a $3 article, not a $1 article, not even a free article. It's not an article at all. It's text. Might as well have used "Lorem ipsum" and swapped out "ipsum" for his keyword phrase.

Lorem how do I get rid of acne dolor sit amet, consectetur adipisicing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut how do I get rid of my acne et dolore magna aliqua. Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco how do I get rid of my acne nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat. Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur. Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est how do I get rid of my acne?
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John Romaine 15 years ago

Originally Posted by billaaa777

That was funny...

You know, I dont find that submission to be humorous at all. If your business depends heavily on quality written articles - then this is far from "funny".
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acedalright

15 years ago

I have never tried to cook an egg on someone else's face....yet!

That article was spun pretty hard, but that's the learning curve, eventually you find someone you can trust.

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linkedinlincoln

15 years ago

To be fair to the article writer, I'm sure we couldn't do any better in their language...lol Tell me you didn't pay more than .50 for that.

-Kathy

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Dan C. Rinnert 15 years ago

Originally Posted by linkedinlincoln

To be fair to the article writer, I'm sure we couldn't do any better in their language...lol

Doesn't matter. If you don't know a language well, you shouldn't be offering article writing services in that language.
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- Doctor Article 15 years ago
  
  If you were only willing to pay a $1 or $2s then I'm afraid to say you got exactly what you paid for. If not, then I feel for you.
  
  Sure if the article writing service is a reputable one, they would have proofreaders in place to check articles before they are returned to the client? The absence of proofreaders alone tells me the site you use is at best a money making scam.
  
  Oh well.... you live and learn hey.
  
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writermommy6

15 years ago

I'm hoping you didn't pay more than $1 for that group of words. Question why pay for cheap stuff that you have to rewrite?

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locpic63

15 years ago

Can I right articles for you? I have a good grass of the Englich language. Iwant spin any aticules as I right all by hand. I think my cuality is betta then wut you paid for.
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seobro

15 years ago

I think LOLCAT is a language in which spelling errors and poor sentence structure are used for laughter. Please send oily egg face to a 7-11. I see a super slurpee in his future.

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Simon Royal

15 years ago

I have gotten a few batches of articles from writers like that off of a different forum and I tried to re-write what I could man that takes a lot of time.

They are good for a laugh though. huh?

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HeySal

15 years ago

You be post those and got egg on face - acne it is hide under egg?

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discrat 15 years ago

I love the responses .........You guys are killing me !!
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lisag

15 years ago

Originally Posted by discrat

I copied and Pasted it here. It is for my Acne Blog. I won't reveal the Company !! The first one is quite humorous so enjoy !

I guess you get what you pay for. Now back to some rewriting !!

Here you go. I rewrote the the portions you posted. If you like it, it's yours. If not, let me know and I'll use it :-)

Acne, pimples, zits -- it doesn't matter what you call them; they're big, they're red, they're ugly and they're coming to your face soon. And that means you're going to be wanting to know: How to get rid of acne?

What is it with acne anyway? There must be like an acne fairy or something who sits around waiting for you to get a job interview, or a wedding invite, or something else so she can wave her wand and put a big red one right on your nose.

As much as we'd all like to blame our acne problems on someone else, we really have only our skin and our hygiene habits to blame. Here's why:

Most men have naturally oily skin. Mix oil and dirt together and you have the perfect recipe for acne.

You see, when dirt blocks the pores it traps the skin's oil inside. Now here's the "eeew" part...

Imagine frying some food and then leaving the oil outside in the sunlight for a few days. Sure enough, that oil is going to go rancid and get pretty nasty looking.

So you're probably not frying food on your face, but that oil trapped inside your pores isn't getting fresher as the days go by, you can bet on that.

As the oil starts to go bad it causes an infection. The body rushes white blood cells to the scene of the crime and the battle between good and evil takes place right on the tip of your nose, or your chin, or somewhere else that can't easily be hidden from the public.

A big red pimple forms and, if you're really unlucky, it gets a nasty white tip that makes you stand out from the crowd even more.

By then you're looking for a miracle acne cure, right? But before we talk about how to get rid of acne using acne creams and other ways to combat your newly-born zits, let's take a look at some tried and true acne prevention tips.

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whateverpedia

15 years ago

Originally Posted by lisag

Here you go. I rewrote the the portions you posted. If you like it, it's yours. If not, let me know and I'll use it :-)

Acne, pimples, zits -- it doesn't matter what you call them; they're big, they're red, they're ugly and they're coming to your face soon. And that means you're going to be wanting to know: How to get rid of acne?

What is it with acne anyway? There must be like an acne fairy or something who sits around waiting for you to get a job interview, or a wedding invite, or something else so she can wave her wand and put a big red one right on your nose.

As much as we'd all like to blame our acne problems on someone else, we really have only our skin and our hygiene habits to blame. Here's why:

Most men have naturally oily skin. Mix oil and dirt together and you have the perfect recipe for acne.

You see, when dirt blocks the pores it traps the skin's oil inside. Now here's the "eeew" part...

Imagine frying some food and then leaving the oil outside in the sunlight for a few days. Sure enough, that oil is going to go rancid and get pretty nasty looking.

So you're probably not frying food on your face, but that oil trapped inside your pores isn't getting fresher as the days go by, you can bet on that.

As the oil starts to go bad it causes an infection. The body rushes white blood cells to the scene of the crime and the battle between good and evil takes place right on the tip of your nose, or your chin, or somewhere else that can't easily be hidden from the public.

A big red pimple forms and, if you're really unlucky, it gets a nasty white tip that makes you stand out from the crowd even more.

By then you're looking for a miracle acne cure, right? But before we talk about how to get rid of acne using acne creams and other ways to get rid of combat your newly-born zits, let's take a look at some tried and true acne prevention tips.

If I paid for the above article I would demand an immediate refund.

Not one scrap of information on how to fry an egg on someone's face.

Rubbish

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Katinkia

15 years ago

Originally Posted by lisag

Here you go. I rewrote the the portions you posted. If you like it, it's yours. If not, let me know and I'll use it :-)

Acne, pimples, zits -- it doesn't matter what you call them; they're big, they're red, they're ugly and they're coming to your face soon. And that means you're going to be wanting to know: How to get rid of acne?

What is it with acne anyway? There must be like an acne fairy or something who sits around waiting for you to get a job interview, or a wedding invite, or something else so she can wave her wand and put a big red one right on your nose.

As much as we'd all like to blame our acne problems on someone else, we really have only our skin and our hygiene habits to blame. Here's why:

Most men have naturally oily skin. Mix oil and dirt together and you have the perfect recipe for acne.

You see, when dirt blocks the pores it traps the skin's oil inside. Now here's the "eeew" part...

Imagine frying some food and then leaving the oil outside in the sunlight for a few days. Sure enough, that oil is going to go rancid and get pretty nasty looking.

So you're probably not frying food on your face, but that oil trapped inside your pores isn't getting fresher as the days go by, you can bet on that.

As the oil starts to go bad it causes an infection. The body rushes white blood cells to the scene of the crime and the battle between good and evil takes place right on the tip of your nose, or your chin, or somewhere else that can't easily be hidden from the public.

A big red pimple forms and, if you're really unlucky, it gets a nasty white tip that makes you stand out from the crowd even more.

By then you're looking for a miracle acne cure, right? But before we talk about how to get rid of acne using acne creams and other ways to combat your newly-born zits, let's take a look at some tried and true acne prevention tips.

Lol, really funny!

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Doctor Article

15 years ago

Originally Posted by lisag

Here you go. I rewrote the the portions you posted. If you like it, it's yours. If not, let me know and I'll use it :-)

Acne, pimples, zits -- it doesn't matter what you call them; they're big, they're red, they're ugly and they're coming to your face soon. And that means you're going to be wanting to know: How to get rid of acne?

What is it with acne anyway? There must be like an acne fairy or something who sits around waiting for you to get a job interview, or a wedding invite, or something else so she can wave her wand and put a big red one right on your nose.

As much as we'd all like to blame our acne problems on someone else, we really have only our skin and our hygiene habits to blame. Here's why:

Most men have naturally oily skin. Mix oil and dirt together and you have the perfect recipe for acne.

You see, when dirt blocks the pores it traps the skin's oil inside. Now here's the "eeew" part...

Imagine frying some food and then leaving the oil outside in the sunlight for a few days. Sure enough, that oil is going to go rancid and get pretty nasty looking.

So you're probably not frying food on your face, but that oil trapped inside your pores isn't getting fresher as the days go by, you can bet on that.

As the oil starts to go bad it causes an infection. The body rushes white blood cells to the scene of the crime and the battle between good and evil takes place right on the tip of your nose, or your chin, or somewhere else that can't easily be hidden from the public.

A big red pimple forms and, if you're really unlucky, it gets a nasty white tip that makes you stand out from the crowd even more.

By then you're looking for a miracle acne cure, right? But before we talk about how to get rid of acne using acne creams and other ways to combat your newly-born zits, let's take a look at some tried and true acne prevention tips.

Not sure how to take this post.......
1) if done for humor.....then great
2) if serious.......no comment

I'm sorry because I'm not trying to knock you, but.....

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lisag

15 years ago

Originally Posted by Doctor Article

Not sure how to take this post.......
1) if done for humor.....then great
2) if serious.......no comment

I'm sorry because I'm not trying to knock you, but.....

I guess I'll leave it as a mystery for you to decide Doc :-)

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debra

15 years ago

Originally Posted by lisag

Here you go. I rewrote the the portions you posted. If you like it, it's yours. If not, let me know and I'll use it :-)

Acne, pimples, zits -- it doesn't matter what you call them; they're big, they're red, they're ugly and they're coming to your face soon. And that means you're going to be wanting to know: How to get rid of acne?

What is it with acne anyway? There must be like an acne fairy or something who sits around waiting for you to get a job interview, or a wedding invite, or something else so she can wave her wand and put a big red one right on your nose.

As much as we'd all like to blame our acne problems on someone else, we really have only our skin and our hygiene habits to blame. Here's why:

Most men have naturally oily skin. Mix oil and dirt together and you have the perfect recipe for acne.

You see, when dirt blocks the pores it traps the skin's oil inside. Now here's the "eeew" part...

Imagine frying some food and then leaving the oil outside in the sunlight for a few days. Sure enough, that oil is going to go rancid and get pretty nasty looking.

So you're probably not frying food on your face, but that oil trapped inside your pores isn't getting fresher as the days go by, you can bet on that.

As the oil starts to go bad it causes an infection. The body rushes white blood cells to the scene of the crime and the battle between good and evil takes place right on the tip of your nose, or your chin, or somewhere else that can't easily be hidden from the public.

A big red pimple forms and, if you're really unlucky, it gets a nasty white tip that makes you stand out from the crowd even more.

By then you're looking for a miracle acne cure, right? But before we talk about how to get rid of acne using acne creams and other ways to combat your newly-born zits, let's take a look at some tried and true acne prevention tips.

Excellent retake! Hard to believe that anyone could have been able to bring life back into that copy.

However, you left out the part about avioding the urge to pop it like an errupting volcano.

LOL!

I do like your style...it kept me reading.

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Steven Wagenheim 15 years ago

Thank you sir...can I have another???

Doh! Ouch! Blech!

Sprechen sie Deutsch?

Now THERE'S an article!

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dsmpublishing

15 years ago

It makes you wonder why this company is in business!!!

i hope you got your money back.

kind regards

sam
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Doctor Article 15 years ago

Originally Posted by dsmpublishing

It makes you wonder why this company is in business!!!

i hope you got your money back.

kind regards

sam
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If you ask me, I wouldn't call it a company. It's a website with a few people trying to make some bucks. Damn, I write for an article writing outfit and believe me, if you're not up to scratch you're out. Also, as I've mentioned previously, all articles have to be approved by the proofreaders before clients even get to see them. My only gripe, now that I'm an affiliate for the outfit I write for, is that I feel they should allow potential clients to see the site, rather than only a landing page. Having said that, they are mega successful so maybe it's just me barking up the wrong tree.

Oh well, at least they keep me in work, and I make enough to pay the bills (only just)
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waken

15 years ago

Originally Posted by discrat

you don't want to keep it oily because some people might want to cook an egg onto your face.

I like this one

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TristanPerry

15 years ago

Hungry am I, want egg eating to me now.

Back soon I be, going cooking now.

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csgcsg

15 years ago

This reminds me of ....

YouTube - Miss Teen USA 2007 - South Carolina...

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Steven Wagenheim 15 years ago

Originally Posted by csgcsg

This reminds me of ....

YouTube - Miss Teen USA 2007 - South Carolina answers a question

WTF???

I hope she marries rich...it's her only shot at survival.
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Here is an exercpt from a Article I paid for from a Article Writing Company..

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