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Of those shown, I like Number 3 most. I think I'd like it more without the silhouetted figure though. Hope that helps some. |
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Am I allowed to say that I don't really rate any of them? The logo doesn't seem to match the tag line somehow. You at least need to show a key with a charm attached.
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I like logo concept #4. The text is very easy to read and remember. The word purse and the purse image fit together. The text on #3 does go well with the word charming though... just not as easy to read. I don't like #2 at all. That silhouette looks like it is meant to attract male visitors. Hope that helps! |
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I was thinking the same thing as Diana -- #3, without the figure. However, none of them really grabbed me. If it were my site I would definitely NOT use #2, as that looks like it was designed by a male to sell something to males. Too much of a "Playboy" feel to it. Cheers, Becky |
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Here are my thoughts.. 1. Ok 2. Looks like a stripper but I love the pink and the magnifying glass is kinda cute. 3. My favorite. The sihouette needs to be doing something different. How about trying the font in pink also? 4. Font is boring and old school. 5. ditto on 4 6. Very generic..not appealing. |
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My vote goes for #3 Teresa |
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Actually I think concept 2 is quite eye catching and the design somehow looks familiar, which could be a good thing.
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Definitely #3. I agree with the other posters that #2 reminds me of a stripper.
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I don't really like any of them, but be aware purse has a different meaning in the UK to the US
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None of them really grab me, but I'd choose #1 just because my favorite color is purple. Number #2 does have potential though. Tam |
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I don't understand what the product is. ![]() I agree that number 2 has potential. Number 3's the one I don't like: it's a fussy, ornate font, and very old-fashioned, to me. I think what's called a "purse" in America is a "handbag" in the UK? |
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I liked #1 (but #3 came in second). I would click away from #2 immediately -- as a woman, it looks to me like an ad for porn. The rest I can't even remember.... But what I really want is a picture of the product. In my mind, I can picture exactly what would work in my purse. If your logo and picture matches that, I'd buy immediately...I wouldn't need convincing, I'd just buy! Good luck with your campaign ![]() Audre |
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I like number 3 the best!
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I like #1 the best out of what is shown, but none of them give me the slightest clue as to what a purse key finder is.
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#1 is ok, clean and simple. #2 way to slutty looking. #3 I agree with those above, get rid of the girl - perhaps put a maginfying glass there instead #4 feels a bit masculine with the brown. #5 improved from 4, but again I like the other colors #6 there is something appealing going on here - has the beginnings of a retro look which is appealing to myself personally. There it is. Ditch 2,4,5 most certainly. |
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Why only women? For what its worth, I would be disappointed with my designer if he sent these back to me. They all lack a professional touch IMH(non-female)O! Next time try the netmencorp.com. They have done about 20 logos for me. |
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I like #6 but with the letters from #5 I hate the silhouettes on any of them I like how the keys are hanging from the letters in #3 but the gray letters are boring What's a purse key finder? I think I might need one .... can never find those darn things in there... Lee |
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![]() in your defense #2 instantly looked like it was designed by a man and number three was my choice (wife mother and daughters must have rubbed off on me - especially the daughters). | |
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I liked number 2 the best, it looks the most professional imo. They are all great though. |
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I like the font in #1 with the magnifying glass added to it... Second choice would be #2 |
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Concept 4 - 5 - 6 - not girly enough colors. Concept 3 - too frilly Concept 2 - would be nice with a classier lady Concept 1 - a little plain |
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definitely #3
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LOL Jenn that was exactly my thought. I love number 2, not loving the stripper chick, but I like the chick from #3, so a combo LOL.
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#3 -- I like the frilly font and the lady Or #2 but get rid of the pole dancer/porn star chick. |
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A combo of #1 and #3 with a different font and bolder colour scheme... But why aren't you picking up on the 'charming' element graphically? At the moment the strapline is at odds with the logo. |
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Why the weird tag line?
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Wow, I've never seen soooooooooooooooooo many WF ladies ALL at the same time and at the same place. ![]() My favorite is #5. |
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I'd agree with what Tina said. Brown is very 1970s, at least here in the UK. Since the female silhouettes don't exactly appeal to the girls either, maybe you should work a muscle-bound hunk into the logo somewhere and change the tagline to 'The powerful way to find your keys'. Should you decide to take things in that direction, I'm sure we'll all look forward to eyeballing the next set of logos for you |
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I think the black one, or the pink one are ok... (concept 2 and 3)... as the other ones seem and look outdated. if your website is in fact having a black-ish theme to it, then I'd definately go with 3, since it fits well with the rest of your website style. but I like the magnifying glass in number 2. Regards, |
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#2 reminds me of those naked lady silhouettes you see on truckers' mudflaps. The rest were pretty boring (from my male perspective). If the product is what I think it is, I've seen my wife just about go crazy rooting through her purse (handbag, whatever) looking for her keys. How about a silhouette with a (fully dressed) woman with her hands held high in triumph, one hand with purse hanging by the strap and the other clutching a ring of keys? |
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I like number 1. I like its simplicity and like where the keys are hanging. I really think its the best one overall...and the only one I can say I like ![]() Number 4,5 and 6 I don't like the colours. Number 3 I probably would click off of because its too complicated a font and very dull. I agree with other comments that the lady is out of place. Number 2..just dislike the main font, lady and colour. |
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The only one I like is no 1, but it needs a little more pizazz. Perhaps a more vibrant and energetic color I don't like the tag line though, it seems too "girly" or perhaps "insipid" would be a better word. Sandy |
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Based on feedback, I Just added CONCEPT 7. http://www.pursekeyfinder.net/products/Logos.html Let me know. Warriors are the best! |
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Number 7 would be OK if it was monochrome with a splash of red maybe. Tasteful. Kind of like the Warrior Forum The purple and yellow is a bit violent-looking for me. I might be the exception though.
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1. No, 2. The silhouette looks like something you'd see on an 18 year old boy's mudflaps. 3. Too frilly for me personally 4. Okay 5. I kind of like it, but I'm not a fan of the colors 6. It's kind of hard to tell what the circle behind the keys is supposed to be. 7. When I look at the logo, I immediately look at the purse, and then go back to read the text, and your eye should go from left to right. I think I'd turn the purse and keys into vectors and play around with it. The yellow isn't my favorite. ETA: John, I hadn't read all the replies when I posted Your idea with the woman holding the keys is great.
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#8 over 7 on the banner image. Oh, I wanted to comment on the others comments above, like Jenn - There may be an "age" issue here as well. I love pink - but it will appeal to the younger demographic. You'll notice I didn't even offer revisions on slutty girl to make her work because the rest of it was wrong for me as well. Also, The swirly fine font in silver will attract a different client. I see it as more upscale which can let you charge possibly more for the product. Which brings up the point, do you want to charge a lot but sell less and make this more of a gucchi type item, or do you want to sell a crazy amount at a cheap price? Some of these questions will affect which style is right for your product. |
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New logos added. I like #9 best, but I think the tagline should be the same color (red) dots on the keychain. Tam |
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#2 is offensive. #6 is kind of techno, retro, bordering on geeky, but then so am I; so my vote is for #6
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